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Round n Round We Go (Ch.15)
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“Anyway, it’s under my name. I want up-to-date shows, you make that happen.” She wandered to the window, opened the blinds and looked down to her garden. It didn’t change much either. Then she fished in her pocket, pulled out a bag of cigarette, and lit one.
I didn’t know when she started smoking. But I knew she was more or less addicted to it, by the way her hand trembled when she looked for one. “I’m sorry, Ms. Porter, you can’t smoke in the building. It’s a public place.” I had to say it, nevertheless, even if it provoked her.
She snorted an ironic laugh. “This is my building, Ms. Kennard. I’m the boss, I smoke when I want, if anybody has a problem with it, they can kiss my ass goodbye.”
Her inconsiderate attitude astonished me. She wasn’t the way I remembered. It enraged me. If she was going to act like this around my son, I would’t have it. So I walked up to her, took away the paper roll from her hand, and put it out in whatever expensive tea she had set on the coffee table.
She glared at me and stalked over.
I could smell the lingering smoke from her, and the perfume got stronger at this distance as well. “Please, at least consider the health of Angelo.” I got her there.
Bette blinked some and looked away, then she shrugged in agreement. “I’m here to see about the contract with Shaolin studio. Send it over to my house tomorrow.”
“I will.”
So much for the work talk. I retreated to the chair behind my desk, she sat on the sofa again.
“How is Helena Peabody?” She asked, her tone very sarcastic and pitiless.
I frowned again at the question. “She got into trouble and went to Europe. I have no information other than that.”
“Huh.” She squinted at me again as if to check if I was telling the truth. “I thought you were pretty close with her. Or you’re really a heartless bitch that forget about everybody after using them?”
“I had nothing to do with her, not to even mention using her.”
“That’s not what I heard.” She was referring to the time when Helena offered me a part-time job in Shaolin. The British woman had come to me numerous times, in the name of charity, and sometimes she dropped me hints for something more. I believed she wanted to get back at Bette through me, and I had not accept anything from her, except for the part-time job. It did save me from my misery for a while and allowed me to pay Mrs. Porter back.
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My dear readers!
I just did a major change in my story telling. I changed from third person perspective to first person POV!
How do you like it? I want to know if you prefer this writing technique to the old one. It’s okay if you’d like me to return to third person view point. I’ll just rewrite this chapter and the next one.
And I know there are questions unanswered, things unresolved. But things will gradually work out.
Thank you for reading and please, COMMENT on this one because I need your direction.
Peace
woo！now I see the big picture here! You’ve handled well with the child part, so can we see the duo have some passionate action next chapter? I am hanging and waiting, thanks for the adequate updating!
Passionate action, huh, well, maybe not the next chapter immediately but soon, I guarantee.
There’s just so many emotions and complicated issues between the two.
I hope you’ll enjoy this more. I’m actually improvising here.
And I am reading “down to earth ” by browneyedgirl28,and she hasn’t updated it for nearly two months ,soooo frustrating!
Oh, I think I’ve read her stories. But lately I don’t have much time reading fanfic. I don’t know why, just have been busy here and there.
I won’t disappear for two whole months, nevertheless! :)
You did a great Job writing in first person! For me, i like third person versions more, but you don’t have to re write for me. I love the story and will read it in the version you give it us.
Wow, Bette was so cold, but i hope Angelo will warm her heart.
They are still married? Hmm…
Can’t wait for their diner meeting on Monday.
Thank you very much for the encouragement!
Bette is a bit heartless as she comes back. But kids, they have the power to capture one’s heart in no time. She will come around and set things right between her and her son.
Yes, still married. They have so much history together and it’s kind of difficult for them to give that up.
I hope you’ll continue to enjoy!
Well Bette is a bitch, but I understand that, but pleas you have to sort that. Please please.
Haha she is kind of bitchy in this chapter.
I will absolutely make her come around to her senses.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Nice….a little disappointed by the turn of events, but I’m sure there are happier days ahead!
Yes, that I can guarantee! Thank you for reading and commenting!
O.M.G!!!! i just love this story. please don’t let me wait to long for an update.
Won’t be long! I’m working on it!
Thanks for the support!
smart kid pps
yes, he is a smart one.
Thanks for commenting! Please continue to read and enjoy!
RT,
The Past was kind of Bad, the Present is Slightly Good but the Future of Bette, Tina and Angelo seems going to be Better :)
Thanks for posting.
Scribe
The past has some good memories in it, the present is complicated, the future, I promise, will be sweeter.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
That was great and the kid are so smart and cute, like him. Wow they still married, what a surprise, hope they will talk more and get to know each other again. Please post more, thanks
Yes, the kid is great! I wish I could have one of those in the future haha.
They are still married, and a lot of unresolved issues in their relationship.
Things will get better!
Thanks for commenting.
Threw me for loop completely. I would love to really the aftermath from when Bette heard Tina and her father conversation I mean after all these chapters thats what we been waiting for and the story just turn….but Shit I like this too I dont know I want it to be the way you written at first but its your choice and you are a brilliant, exquisite writer, I trust you lol!
On the other hand wow Bette was a lil mean but can you blame her for the way she treated Tina, I still can’t believe how many chances Tina had to tell her and didn’t, and Marcus died awe how sad, I would love to see them have another baby but im thinking ahead, and can’t believe Tina still in touch with her dad but family is family.
I guess im going to just see where this goes and enjoy every moment of it.
I know, it’s kind of a surprise isn’t it?! I was going for that kind of effect, actually. Besides, I can’t really go on with the confrontation anymore. That was just plain painful.
Bette is really mean here. She has her reasons to be, and you’re right, Tina not telling her the truth on so many occasions is one of them.
Marcus, oh I am sorry about him, too. But… to serve the plot…
They still can have another baby. Just it’s really too long in the future for them to talk about having another kid. They got to get back together first!
But it will all happen eventually!
Thanks for commenting. And I wish you’ll enjoy it more!
I understand Bette.Thank you for the update,PPS
Yes, she has the reasons to be mad. But she’ll come to her senses.
Thank you for reading and commenting! I’m working on it.
I love the story and will read whatever version you choose to write.
Thank you! You are very kind.
Ok, I’ll continue in the first person for more chapters and maybe I’ll return to third person perspective in later chapters!