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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.15)

    Story written on May 20, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    She was coming back. The DJ suddenly changed the music. A familiar melody came up. I knew it was Rosas, one of my favorite songs from the Spanish band La Oreja de Van Gogh. It was her favorite Spanish group. I still remembered the time we made love to their songs. And now, though I

    She was coming back.

    The DJ suddenly changed the music. A familiar melody came up. I knew it was Rosas, one of my favorite songs from the Spanish band La Oreja de Van Gogh. It was her favorite Spanish group. I still remembered the time we made love to their songs. And now, though I hardly speak the language anymore, the lyrics hurt me.

    “Por eso esperaba con la carita empapada

    (That’s why I waited with my face soaked)

    a que llegaras con rosas

    (for you to arrive with roses)

    con mil rosas para mi

    (a thousand roses for me)

    porque ya saves que me encantan esas cosas

    (coz you know I love those things)

    que no importa si es my tonto, soy así

    (no matter how silly, that’s how I am)

    Y aún me parece mentira que se escape mi vida

    (and I still can’t believe my life should escape by)

    imaginando que vuelves a pasarte por aquí

    (by imagining you will come back)

    donde los viernes cada tarde, como siempre

    (where every friday afternoon, like always)

    la esperanza dice: quieta, hoy quizás sí…

    (my hope says: be still, today probably is the day…)

    I saw myself waiting for her, all these seven years, I waited, thinking maybe today was the day that she showed up, fantasizing that she came back with roses in her hand. Now, I knew for sure she was gonna show up, it just stroke me too hard, I couldn’t possibly know how to react.

    “Oh, no, baby girl, what’s wrong now?” Kit came around from the back office to check on the band for tonight. She stopped in her track as she saw my reddened eyes and nose. Her dark eyes extra soft with worry.

    They reminded me of someone, of her. I sobbed harder. “Kit, she’s… she’s gonna come back.”

    “Really? How… are you sure?” She asked, her voice contained a little excitement and a little nervousness. “I haven’t seen her for like…”

    “Three years five months and eight days.” I mumbled to myself. Hopefully Kit didn’t hear me. Otherwise I’d look so fucking pathetic right then. I went over this, obsession over the lose of my young love, obsession over her, obsession of reliving every single moment when we were together, and obsession of punishing myself.

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    1. Author:
      My dear readers!
      I just did a major change in my story telling. I changed from third person perspective to first person POV!
      How do you like it? I want to know if you prefer this writing technique to the old one. It’s okay if you’d like me to return to third person view point. I’ll just rewrite this chapter and the next one.
      And I know there are questions unanswered, things unresolved. But things will gradually work out.
      Thank you for reading and please, COMMENT on this one because I need your direction.
      Peace

      • woo！now I see the big picture here! You’ve handled well with the child part, so can we see the duo have some passionate action next chapter? I am hanging and waiting, thanks for the adequate updating!

        • Passionate action, huh, well, maybe not the next chapter immediately but soon, I guarantee.
          There’s just so many emotions and complicated issues between the two.
          I hope you’ll enjoy this more. I’m actually improvising here.

        • Oh, I think I’ve read her stories. But lately I don’t have much time reading fanfic. I don’t know why, just have been busy here and there.
          I won’t disappear for two whole months, nevertheless! :)

    2. You did a great Job writing in first person! For me, i like third person versions more, but you don’t have to re write for me. I love the story and will read it in the version you give it us.

      Wow, Bette was so cold, but i hope Angelo will warm her heart.

      They are still married? Hmm…

      Can’t wait for their diner meeting on Monday.

      • Thank you very much for the encouragement!
        Bette is a bit heartless as she comes back. But kids, they have the power to capture one’s heart in no time. She will come around and set things right between her and her son.
        Yes, still married. They have so much history together and it’s kind of difficult for them to give that up.
        I hope you’ll continue to enjoy!

    7. RT,

      The Past was kind of Bad, the Present is Slightly Good but the Future of Bette, Tina and Angelo seems going to be Better :)

      Thanks for posting.

      Scribe

      • The past has some good memories in it, the present is complicated, the future, I promise, will be sweeter.
        Thanks for reading and commenting!

    8. That was great and the kid are so smart and cute, like him. Wow they still married, what a surprise, hope they will talk more and get to know each other again. Please post more, thanks

      • Yes, the kid is great! I wish I could have one of those in the future haha.
        They are still married, and a lot of unresolved issues in their relationship.
        Things will get better!
        Thanks for commenting.

    9. Threw me for loop completely. I would love to really the aftermath from when Bette heard Tina and her father conversation I mean after all these chapters thats what we been waiting for and the story just turn….but Shit I like this too I dont know I want it to be the way you written at first but its your choice and you are a brilliant, exquisite writer, I trust you lol!

      On the other hand wow Bette was a lil mean but can you blame her for the way she treated Tina, I still can’t believe how many chances Tina had to tell her and didn’t, and Marcus died awe how sad, I would love to see them have another baby but im thinking ahead, and can’t believe Tina still in touch with her dad but family is family.

      I guess im going to just see where this goes and enjoy every moment of it.

      • I know, it’s kind of a surprise isn’t it?! I was going for that kind of effect, actually. Besides, I can’t really go on with the confrontation anymore. That was just plain painful.
        Bette is really mean here. She has her reasons to be, and you’re right, Tina not telling her the truth on so many occasions is one of them.
        Marcus, oh I am sorry about him, too. But… to serve the plot…
        They still can have another baby. Just it’s really too long in the future for them to talk about having another kid. They got to get back together first!
        But it will all happen eventually!
        Thanks for commenting. And I wish you’ll enjoy it more!

      • Thank you! You are very kind.
        Ok, I’ll continue in the first person for more chapters and maybe I’ll return to third person perspective in later chapters!

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