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Round n Round We Go (Ch.16)
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“Angelo is a good kid.” She said. “You’ll find him very easy-going, very gentleman like, and kind, indeed.”
“I’m sure he is. He got that from Marcus, and Therese.”
But she shook her head in disagreement. “They can’t have that much of influence on him, you know that.”
Her statement got me suck on my teeth and bite the inner side of my cheeks. She was insinuating that Tina was the one who brought him up to be a decent person. I wanted to sneer at the idea. It was what I had been angry about, everybody seemed to think Tina as such a great person with a big heart, she was the best mother, she was St. Tina! I got it, it didn’t have to be brought up so many times. If it was James who tried to fill me in with information about how great Tina was with my son, I’d slap him on the back of the head and tell him to fuck off. But this was my sister. I just gave her a stern look said that I didn’t want to dwell on this discussion.
The second cigarette burned out as well. I refused to recall other things Kit said to me that afternoon. I lit a third one and my mind slowly resided on grandmother and aunt Victoria.
Grandma just aged a tad since Marcus and Therese’s funeral. Her blue eyes clear and shiny as ever, yet probably softened more as time passed by. I just didn’t get her. She was my grandmother, my fucking blood relative. Yet she decided that, instead of trying to make me feel better, she would gladly help out Tina. I glared a censuring look over the main building, imagining that I had telepathic ability and my feeling could reach her. But then I laughed at my own ridiculousness.
Aunt Victoria became sickly feeble. Her sea blue eyes were now clouded with fog and they became grayish. It was said that the disease gradually robbed her sight and other senses. The doctors managed to bring her back several times as her condition took a turn for worse, but the cure was yet to be found. What a pity. The poor woman lost her son and was losing her own life day by day. And she would live the last few years of her life in darkness, and senselessness. The only good thing she had was Michelangelo, the son of her boy.
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I know what you’re thinking. It’s just complicated, sad, messy.
But it’s inevitable. For Bette, she sometimes can be very stubborn, so that she could protect herself but also be oblivious to other things.
Let’s just say that the emotions are waking up.
And you are probably worried for her well-being. She’s shown quite the dangerous syndromes. You’ll see what I have stored for the future.
I’ll try not to be away for too long.
Peace.
So sad how things have gotten for Bette. Glad that the three had a good evening together. I love this story! Thank you!
That was a good evening. I couldn’t help but grin every time I picture Bette with the kid. She can be a little childish sometimes too, but she has the potential as a great mother.
Thank you for reading. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Very sad, indeed! And something is telling me that Bette’s hand tremors and headaches are the signs that something is really, really wrong with her brain… I can’t even utter the ‘C’ Word, I hope I’m mistaken..
Nicely done, though! Can’t wait to read more.
Oh my god you’re commenting on my story! I loooove yours!
Ah, don’t worry, I don’t have the gut to give Bette such a sickness, She’s not well that’s true. But I’ll fix it too.
Thank you so much for the support! It’s a lot coming from a writer I admire.
I want Bette to release all her anger at Tina and go off, just get it out her system because honestly I feel like Bette, I honestly dont think its fair that everyone is all nice with Tina when clearly she destroyed her lover heart and betrayed they’re blood, all of plan to extort money or whatever and now she’s happy cool laiding with the family argh! why do Bette always get the pain in these stories argh!..oh I know because she care about Tina more than herself I need Alpha Bette with Tina and mama Bette with Michaelangelo…but then a happy ending when its all said and done haha..I cant wait for their conversation
Your wish is my command. :) Bette’s angry, she is, no matter how hard she tries to not show that in front of her son, she’s gonna lose it when she and Tina are alone.
She just needs a trigger…
You’ll see how she gets worked up, and release the emotion all together.
Thanks for commenting! I always love your comments.
Sad very sad. Thx for your post!
It is, sad indeed. Thank you for the comment. Please continue to read!
This is sad wish they can talk and work thing out. Glad they have a good time and hope to see more of it. Please post more, thanks
I think there’s a lot that had happened, and when neither one of them intended to talk about the past, more issues build up and when one of them lose their cool, it’s gonna be some avalanche.
Thanks for commenting!
You have me worried about Bette, looks like she is serious ill.
Loved the dinner with them.
I hope they will talk soon and get this mess out of the way and start the family they are to supposed to be.
Bette is not well, I could tell you. But not so badly ill.
Her health issue is what I’m going to write about later. Now they have a lot of issues to work out.
I like the idea of starting a family again. Yet, it’s not gonna be easy. I am working on it!
Thank you for reading. I hope you’ll enjoy more.