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Round n Round We Go (Ch.16)
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Tina, of course. Her blonde hair was tied up into a messy bun, just the way it was seven years ago. And she was dressed in very casual blouse, and worn out jeans, a pair of canvas shoes. It was almost like the first day she entered my world.
I frowned at myself for even having the memory.
She started walking to the exit. I captured her movement quickly and successfully spotted my son. He ran happily from the stairs and rushed into her arms, almost knocked the both of them down. I couldn’t believe I was actually chuckling at the scene.
Tina gave him a kiss, and started walking out of the yard with him. But then a strange man came up to them. An older, but very tall and good-looking man.
I squinted at him, and clenched my teeth. Really? Men?
But then I got confused, she wasn’t enjoying his attention apparently. I saw her declining posture and her left hand playing with the wide belt watch on her right wrist. That seemed to be a new habit of her, when she was uncomfortable. The foolish watch with a too large dial plate didn’t go with her suit yesterday and it still didn’t fit her outfit today. I couldn’t fathom the reason why she insisted on wearing it.
My son also wasn’t attracted to the man, I could tell. He reluctantly acknowledged him and hid behind Tina.
So I started the car and rolled down the window on my passenger seat. “Hey!” I yelled very rudely to the man and stuck my glasses up to my hair. He visibly shuddered a bit and found me glaring at him. I caught him checking out my car, and was glad that I drove a vintage Lincoln today. “What seems to be the problem?”
“Mama B!” The boy looked up at me as if he saw a real-life knight. I didn’t know why but it gave me a buzz.
“Henry, I’m sorry, let me introduce you… this is Bette, Angelo’s other mother.” Tina jumped in and gestured Michelangelo to come to the car.
“And her wife.” I added on purpose.
She glared at me, with those surprised and annoyed hazel eyes. Somehow they gave me a greater buzz.
Harry, or some other stupid name, looked at us dumbfounded. He put a hand on his man-boobs. “Wow, Tina… I don’t know you are…”
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I know what you’re thinking. It’s just complicated, sad, messy.
But it’s inevitable. For Bette, she sometimes can be very stubborn, so that she could protect herself but also be oblivious to other things.
Let’s just say that the emotions are waking up.
And you are probably worried for her well-being. She’s shown quite the dangerous syndromes. You’ll see what I have stored for the future.
I’ll try not to be away for too long.
Peace.
So sad how things have gotten for Bette. Glad that the three had a good evening together. I love this story! Thank you!
That was a good evening. I couldn’t help but grin every time I picture Bette with the kid. She can be a little childish sometimes too, but she has the potential as a great mother.
Thank you for reading. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Very sad, indeed! And something is telling me that Bette’s hand tremors and headaches are the signs that something is really, really wrong with her brain… I can’t even utter the ‘C’ Word, I hope I’m mistaken..
Nicely done, though! Can’t wait to read more.
Oh my god you’re commenting on my story! I loooove yours!
Ah, don’t worry, I don’t have the gut to give Bette such a sickness, She’s not well that’s true. But I’ll fix it too.
Thank you so much for the support! It’s a lot coming from a writer I admire.
I want Bette to release all her anger at Tina and go off, just get it out her system because honestly I feel like Bette, I honestly dont think its fair that everyone is all nice with Tina when clearly she destroyed her lover heart and betrayed they’re blood, all of plan to extort money or whatever and now she’s happy cool laiding with the family argh! why do Bette always get the pain in these stories argh!..oh I know because she care about Tina more than herself I need Alpha Bette with Tina and mama Bette with Michaelangelo…but then a happy ending when its all said and done haha..I cant wait for their conversation
Your wish is my command. :) Bette’s angry, she is, no matter how hard she tries to not show that in front of her son, she’s gonna lose it when she and Tina are alone.
She just needs a trigger…
You’ll see how she gets worked up, and release the emotion all together.
Thanks for commenting! I always love your comments.
Sad very sad. Thx for your post!
It is, sad indeed. Thank you for the comment. Please continue to read!
This is sad wish they can talk and work thing out. Glad they have a good time and hope to see more of it. Please post more, thanks
I think there’s a lot that had happened, and when neither one of them intended to talk about the past, more issues build up and when one of them lose their cool, it’s gonna be some avalanche.
Thanks for commenting!
You have me worried about Bette, looks like she is serious ill.
Loved the dinner with them.
I hope they will talk soon and get this mess out of the way and start the family they are to supposed to be.
Bette is not well, I could tell you. But not so badly ill.
Her health issue is what I’m going to write about later. Now they have a lot of issues to work out.
I like the idea of starting a family again. Yet, it’s not gonna be easy. I am working on it!
Thank you for reading. I hope you’ll enjoy more.