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Round n Round We Go (Ch.17)
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Davidoff, I saw the wrap. It tugged at my heart and I smiled a little, shaking my head. “I told you not to smoke in the building.”
“Well, well, Michelangelo isn’t here, is he?” She shrugged, tossed the contract on the table, and lit one.
My eyes widened as I saw her thin lips make contact with the small white cylinder, and then blew out a puff of light smoke. She saw me watching her, so she rocked the package slightly in my direction.
Under some bizarre impelling, I reached out and took one. It made her flash a small smirk. She then clicked the lighter, brought her hand up to light the paper roll for me. I hadn’t had a single cigarette since like… well I couldn’t remember, just a vague memory back in junior high, I thought it made kids look gangster and cool. The first breath was stingy, burned all its way down to my lungs. I coughed uncontrollably and stood up for some air.
“Wow, take it easy.” I heard her snicker. “See? Now you’re smoking in the building too.”
I observed the cigarette in my hand burn slowly. And I didn’t take another sniff out of it. She smoked hers and asked me if I was gonna watch it burn out. I walked to the decorative ashtray and decided to put it out. But she stopped me and took it away, and finished it. All the while I remained silent. What was going on? Why would she do that? Was it a dream? In the fogged room, I actually couldn’t tell. The interaction between us was just way too strange.
“Where’d you go?” I asked, broke the weirdly shrouding ice.
She crossed her legs and leaned on the hand rest of the sofa. “Here and there.”
“The boy asked for you. He wants you to pick him up from school again.”
Hearing this, she smiled an almost invisible smile. “Ok, I’d like to spend some time with him too.”
“Have you decided how long you’ll be staying?” I asked again, felt the thudding heartache at the topic about her leaving.
She shook her head. “Grandmother wants me to spend the holiday with them.”
“And you want to?”
“I should. It’s been… seven years after all.”
And there was this sad silence fallen on top of us.
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Alright, folks, you see the tension, and Tina’s still at Bette’s place. You can guess where I’m heading to from now on.
Wait till you see the next chapter!
And I’ve always promised to fix things.
Thank you for reading, and please I welcome your comments.
Peace
Have a nice trip and thank you for the update.
Thank you, I was indeed very lucky with my visa application.
RT,
God bless you on your visa application.
I’m glad to read your new chapter. I understand Bette’s feelings but Tina truly loved her and still loves her. So I hope that B will be able to accept Tina again.
Did Tina committed suicide? I hope that B will discover this so that she will know that Tina suffered too.
Will be waiting for your next chap :)
Scribe
Thank you very much. The application went well. I’m waiting for the result and I’m certain that it was successful.
Your guess is very accurate. But it has not been divulged in the story yet. I’m going to discuss on it in later chapters and you’ll find out how I manage it.
Hope you like the next chapter. :)
Oh boy, there is for sure a lot of tension and anger.
The road for happiness will be long and with a few bumps.
Sounds like Bette is jeaulous, thats good, she can’t have expected that Tina remained single.
Good luck with getting your visa.
Yes, anger and tension. It’s gonna be pretty disastrous when it gets released all at once.
The road is not easy, otherwise, happiness is just cheap. I intend to let them have a few bumps down the road. And when they finally realize how much they love each other after all, it’s all gonna be worthy.
Thank you. You are very kind. I was lucky with my visa application.
Please continue to read my stories, and review.
Bette and Tina need to talk and work thing out, sad to see them like this
It’s sad. And unfortunately, I probably made it sadder in the next chapter.
But they’ll work it out. Have some faith! :)
I didn’t read your story in a while, but I’m glad to finally find the time to do it because I like it a lot ! My god … Bette can be such a b….
Anyway, post soon ;-)
Bette can be a little bit clueless. I know, because that’s who she is.
But she also has suffered much. It’s been eating her. Her life is a mess.
Thank you for catching up with my story and reviewing. I hope you’ll like the next chapter.
Im completely on Bette side in this. ..and just out of curiosity is this Yolanda the same as the one in therapy session on the show, Candice ex?
It is Yolanda Watkins. But I’m not including Candice in this chapter.
Don’t worry about her. She’s a teeny tiny little character in the story, and she’s not even going to have a line. :P
Bette seems like the loneliest person in the world, looks like walking dead from your description AND has some illness hanging over her, lol. Tina, on the other hand, has it quite good – she has her friends, Bette’s friends, Bette’s family, her douchebag father is still in her life, she has a kid AND, as we found out from the last page, she even had a girlfriend all this time (lol, not that heartbroken after all). She really messed up Bette’s life big time.
Hmmm, I see your point. But Tina’s story and suffering have not been exposed entirely, and I believe that it’s not as good as you think right now.
Both of the parts suffered. And they will have to work extra hard to mend their broken hearts, and find a new way to get along.
I will continue with exploring the truth, and fixing things up for them.
Thank you for commenting and please read more.
I hope Bette and Tina can have another honest conversation. No one can blame Bette for her anger, but she still doesn’t know exaclty what happened and how Tina never really betrayed her. After all, she never did anything to harm her or acted with ill intentions once she got to know her. Amazing story, I’ll be looking forward to the next post!
Thank you very much for the support.
Bette, poor Bette, she just couldn’t move on. She is stubborn, and that stubbornness is causing her trouble, her suffering. It’s a mistake on her part. And she is going to make more mistakes.
But eventually, eventually, Bette could always get around. Just hope that when she does, it wouldn’t be too late for them to start anew.
I wish you can continue to enjoy my story. :)