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Round n Round We Go (Ch.17)
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She sat more straight in the sofa and brought a finger to her chin, in deep thought.
I hung my head down and played with my wide watch belt.
“When I first came back, I believed that you used some finesses to get my grandmother forgive you, and give you the job and everything.”
“I didn’t.”
“I know. She told me that you wouldn’t take the money until you made a deal to pay her back.” She nodded.
So, she talked to Maryanne. I was actually relieved.
Then she said. “Well, whether you meant to lie or not, I’m still mad at you. It’s the truth.”
“I understand.” I wasn’t hoping for her forgiveness. Just her knowing that I was not the kind of person she once thought, that was fine, more than fine.
“We have a kid to raise together. I don’t want to dwell or bitch on the past anymore. I’m just gonna pretend I forgot everything and focus on being a good parent.” She decided.
I closed my eyes and let the sudden relaxation course through me. Finally, we could move on. “I’m glad. It’s the best for Angelo. I only want the best for him.”
“That I can agree with you on. So…” She looked at me, with less viscousness, less bitterness.
“So…” I locked my hands together and thought of what to do next. A bit embarrassed and awkward, we started to set up a schedule when she would pick up our son from school and take him to Maryanne’s for the night.
Our son… I loved it sounded. The plan started from today all the way to Thanksgiving.
After the discussion, she added something to the company contrast before leaving. I sent her down to the door, and we shook hand saying goodbye. With her hand in mine, I wanted to pull her in for a hug, but I fought the inappropriate desire and watched as she drove away.
part two
I walked away from the gallery after a ridiculous handshake. In her watery hazel eyes, I saw some amber flickers that shined mildly. I knew that look too well. She used to look at me like that when we said goodnight to each other after a satisfying date. And it’d always be late in the afternoon, she’d walk into the glowing reddish sunset, her waterfall of golden hair brighter than the sun, I’d smile like a fool at her silhouette until she disappeared. Today, the way she looked at me, it made me want to kiss her.
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Alright, folks, you see the tension, and Tina’s still at Bette’s place. You can guess where I’m heading to from now on.
Wait till you see the next chapter!
And I’ve always promised to fix things.
Thank you for reading, and please I welcome your comments.
Peace
Have a nice trip and thank you for the update.
Thank you, I was indeed very lucky with my visa application.
RT,
God bless you on your visa application.
I’m glad to read your new chapter. I understand Bette’s feelings but Tina truly loved her and still loves her. So I hope that B will be able to accept Tina again.
Did Tina committed suicide? I hope that B will discover this so that she will know that Tina suffered too.
Will be waiting for your next chap :)
Scribe
Thank you very much. The application went well. I’m waiting for the result and I’m certain that it was successful.
Your guess is very accurate. But it has not been divulged in the story yet. I’m going to discuss on it in later chapters and you’ll find out how I manage it.
Hope you like the next chapter. :)
Oh boy, there is for sure a lot of tension and anger.
The road for happiness will be long and with a few bumps.
Sounds like Bette is jeaulous, thats good, she can’t have expected that Tina remained single.
Good luck with getting your visa.
Yes, anger and tension. It’s gonna be pretty disastrous when it gets released all at once.
The road is not easy, otherwise, happiness is just cheap. I intend to let them have a few bumps down the road. And when they finally realize how much they love each other after all, it’s all gonna be worthy.
Thank you. You are very kind. I was lucky with my visa application.
Please continue to read my stories, and review.
Bette and Tina need to talk and work thing out, sad to see them like this
It’s sad. And unfortunately, I probably made it sadder in the next chapter.
But they’ll work it out. Have some faith! :)
I didn’t read your story in a while, but I’m glad to finally find the time to do it because I like it a lot ! My god … Bette can be such a b….
Anyway, post soon ;-)
Bette can be a little bit clueless. I know, because that’s who she is.
But she also has suffered much. It’s been eating her. Her life is a mess.
Thank you for catching up with my story and reviewing. I hope you’ll like the next chapter.
Im completely on Bette side in this. ..and just out of curiosity is this Yolanda the same as the one in therapy session on the show, Candice ex?
It is Yolanda Watkins. But I’m not including Candice in this chapter.
Don’t worry about her. She’s a teeny tiny little character in the story, and she’s not even going to have a line. :P
Bette seems like the loneliest person in the world, looks like walking dead from your description AND has some illness hanging over her, lol. Tina, on the other hand, has it quite good – she has her friends, Bette’s friends, Bette’s family, her douchebag father is still in her life, she has a kid AND, as we found out from the last page, she even had a girlfriend all this time (lol, not that heartbroken after all). She really messed up Bette’s life big time.
Hmmm, I see your point. But Tina’s story and suffering have not been exposed entirely, and I believe that it’s not as good as you think right now.
Both of the parts suffered. And they will have to work extra hard to mend their broken hearts, and find a new way to get along.
I will continue with exploring the truth, and fixing things up for them.
Thank you for commenting and please read more.
I hope Bette and Tina can have another honest conversation. No one can blame Bette for her anger, but she still doesn’t know exaclty what happened and how Tina never really betrayed her. After all, she never did anything to harm her or acted with ill intentions once she got to know her. Amazing story, I’ll be looking forward to the next post!
Thank you very much for the support.
Bette, poor Bette, she just couldn’t move on. She is stubborn, and that stubbornness is causing her trouble, her suffering. It’s a mistake on her part. And she is going to make more mistakes.
But eventually, eventually, Bette could always get around. Just hope that when she does, it wouldn’t be too late for them to start anew.
I wish you can continue to enjoy my story. :)