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Round n Round We Go (Ch.23)
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“I guess so.” Bette chuckled to see him writing all the names down. “You know, it’s important to let a girl know that she is marrying you, not your family.”She suddenly sat up straight in her chair.
One day, Michelangelo would find a girl he loves and he would get married. And she understood how his family background would affect a relationship. Tina was like a lost little bird when she had to face all the criticizing members of the Porters, and she herself was too stupid to notice. She was this richie rich heiress of a grand family business and Tina was this timid poor girl with little support from her own family. They were not equal, and when Sam’s scam was exposed, people naturally pointed all the blame to the blonde, and she was surrounded by them speaking ill about her wife. It was partially the reason that she gave up, and their marriage failed. There wouldn’t be an easy fix for things that had turned so terribly, but she was willing to try. “I think, to some point, your mother wasn’t respected enough, my family, and frankly I, didn’t give her enough support to let her feel secured. So I’m leaving all the other people out this time. Marriage is between two people very much in love, is not about where you’re from or what your family’s like. I didn’t know it. And I want you to know.”
He listened to her with some perplexity, but by the look on his face, he was remembering this conversation.
And then, they fell into a comfortable silence, regarding each other, and reviewing their talk.
Bette smiled and ate her own sweet treat. She asked him about his school work, and the paintings he was working on.
The boy was again excited. He enjoyed this attention from his mother. True that she always made time for him everyday no matter where she was, but talking face to face felt so much more real. He shared every little detail of his life with her, and for the first time, he felt his family was complete again.
When they finally took the elevator and went back to the ward, Tina was standing with her hands on her hips. She squinted at the brunette first, then raised a brow at her son. “Where’ve you two been? And is that ice cream on your face, mister?”
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So, more fun and happiness, here they are.
I think it’s so very nice of you to ask about my last story, the Lucky One. I started this one and thought that it’ll be a short sideway story, wouldn’t take much time. But it proved that I was wrong. The readers liked it and requested me to explore further into it. I got too distracted by this story.
I will go back to the Lucky One as I end this one. It’s still in the plotting progress.
But I think I’d take a breather too. College starts this fall and I’m traveling over 7000 miles to study in a different country. Soon my life would get pretty busy. I’ll try to write on holidays.
Now please be patient with me.
I hope you like this chapter, and there’s gonna be another if you’d want that.
Peace
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
easy on the college part,i’m sure you’ll do great,believe me ,it’ll be so much fun.but keep posting while having fun.
Amazing amazing ….. I love the nurse ! Great interaction, please continue the love portion.. Can’t wait for the wedding celebrations.
Btw, where are you studying… All the best in whatever you are in… Good luck !
Thanks for this another one just the same for the wedding would be great!!
Prrrrrfect!!!
Good luck with your study in the fall.
Where are going for your study?
Loved the update, it was beautiful written and it was time they got to the loving time.
I hope you will update before you move away for your study.
Thanks for the update. Good luck with school.
That was sweet and hot, love it. Thanks for the update my friend
This was a amazing chapter and I love every word of it…Awe Michaelanglo is in love so cute and adorable, but also so sad because most time little kids get their little hearts broken at that age and many more times growing up, hopefully LIllian be ok so he will spared…I dont think I can deal with you taking breathers from writing lol as these stories fill me up but real life is more important…and can I just say yayyy your going to finish The Lucky One, you’re just awesome!
RT,
I can’t believe that I missed to comment on your chapter 22.. tsk! tsk! tsk!
Anyway, your previous chapters and this latest chapter are all the same. They are the same in AWESOMEness and EPICness. Hi hi!
Btw, i’m with your other readers with the ff. Issues:
1) I do like more chapters for this book
2) I want the continuation of The Lucky One
3) I wish u all the best in your studies
4) I am willing to wait for your stories even if you will not be posting it as often as you could.
Again, thanks for droppin by in my comment box. It means so much to me to know that one of my fave ff writer is also reading my ff.
Love love love,
Scribe
I loved it!
I loved the banter between them, and it was a sweet scene between Bette and her son, when talking about his love. I’m so glad that Bette gave good advice to her son, who will follow it.
I loved the sex scene between Bette and Tina nurse :P
It was a wonderful picture, as looked clean and seemed to love in each other’s eyes.
Thank you.
Please, please, please finish The Lucky One !!!!
Our Roby! Incredible chapter, loved!
You as always writing superbly.
Made me want to eat pudding, and that sweet is not my
favorite.
I know that college will occupy much of your time, but
please! not abandon us.
I’ll wait for a new chapter with the patience of Buddha.
Study and writing form with louvor.E contunue great story
B & T.
Great to see them being loving and playful again. It would be great to see more chapters of this story – and also to see the Lucky One finished! Thank you for posting and good luck with your studies!