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Round n Round We Go (Ch.23)
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“Define good, T. You know I’m plenty good.” Despite there was another person in the room, Bette still winked.
The sexual charge in their conversation was easily detected. The nurse looked between the two women and smirked to herself.
“So,” Bette looked at the nurse who was writing her status on her chart. “tell me, miss nurse, is it true about the on-call rooms?”
“Bette!” Tina yelped, couldn’t believe she asked the nurse that.
“What, I just wanna know.” Putting her hands in the air, she acted innocent. “They probably don’t let patients use anyway.”
“It’s a myth, Miss Porter.” The nurse finished writing and took out a tube and a pinhead. “Hospitals have strict rules in terms of relationships. Now give me your arm please.”
The brunette insisted on looking at the needle when the nurse collected her blood sample, she couldn’t help it. And because of that, she wailed and pretended to faint. “Ooooh that’s scary.”
“Then stop staring at the needle.” Tina had to roll her eyes at the childishness, but still found it very cute.
“I think I’m being sucked dry. When can I go home?” She made a face.
The nurse discarded the needle and put a fresh bandaid on the wound. “Very soon, miss Porter. You just have to complete the first week series.” She put the small plastic bowl on Bette’s table plate. It was the chocolate pudding the hospital gave to patients after drawing blood. And despite she would love to observe the lovely couple’s banter, with no other reason to linger, she turned to leave.
Tina watched as the nurse left the room, then she turned back to see Bette checking her arm, bruised by needle marks. Though the brunette liked to make fun and make a fool out of herself, she still felt that aching pinch on her heart to know her love was suffering, no matter how little the suffering might appear to be.
Bette was more up-beat. She counted the holes on her veins and crossed off another blood collecting from her imaginary calendar. And she took interest in the pudding on her little table. Under situations like this, she found the reason to gather some sympathy and pampering from the blonde. “T?” She asked in a small faint voice.
“Yeah, baby?” It worked. Tina clearly forgot about the misbehaving and banters from a moment before.
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So, more fun and happiness, here they are.
I think it’s so very nice of you to ask about my last story, the Lucky One. I started this one and thought that it’ll be a short sideway story, wouldn’t take much time. But it proved that I was wrong. The readers liked it and requested me to explore further into it. I got too distracted by this story.
I will go back to the Lucky One as I end this one. It’s still in the plotting progress.
But I think I’d take a breather too. College starts this fall and I’m traveling over 7000 miles to study in a different country. Soon my life would get pretty busy. I’ll try to write on holidays.
Now please be patient with me.
I hope you like this chapter, and there’s gonna be another if you’d want that.
Peace
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
easy on the college part,i’m sure you’ll do great,believe me ,it’ll be so much fun.but keep posting while having fun.
Amazing amazing ….. I love the nurse ! Great interaction, please continue the love portion.. Can’t wait for the wedding celebrations.
Btw, where are you studying… All the best in whatever you are in… Good luck !
Thanks for this another one just the same for the wedding would be great!!
Prrrrrfect!!!
Good luck with your study in the fall.
Where are going for your study?
Loved the update, it was beautiful written and it was time they got to the loving time.
I hope you will update before you move away for your study.
Thanks for the update. Good luck with school.
That was sweet and hot, love it. Thanks for the update my friend
This was a amazing chapter and I love every word of it…Awe Michaelanglo is in love so cute and adorable, but also so sad because most time little kids get their little hearts broken at that age and many more times growing up, hopefully LIllian be ok so he will spared…I dont think I can deal with you taking breathers from writing lol as these stories fill me up but real life is more important…and can I just say yayyy your going to finish The Lucky One, you’re just awesome!
RT,
I can’t believe that I missed to comment on your chapter 22.. tsk! tsk! tsk!
Anyway, your previous chapters and this latest chapter are all the same. They are the same in AWESOMEness and EPICness. Hi hi!
Btw, i’m with your other readers with the ff. Issues:
1) I do like more chapters for this book
2) I want the continuation of The Lucky One
3) I wish u all the best in your studies
4) I am willing to wait for your stories even if you will not be posting it as often as you could.
Again, thanks for droppin by in my comment box. It means so much to me to know that one of my fave ff writer is also reading my ff.
Love love love,
Scribe
I loved it!
I loved the banter between them, and it was a sweet scene between Bette and her son, when talking about his love. I’m so glad that Bette gave good advice to her son, who will follow it.
I loved the sex scene between Bette and Tina nurse :P
It was a wonderful picture, as looked clean and seemed to love in each other’s eyes.
Thank you.
Please, please, please finish The Lucky One !!!!
Our Roby! Incredible chapter, loved!
You as always writing superbly.
Made me want to eat pudding, and that sweet is not my
favorite.
I know that college will occupy much of your time, but
please! not abandon us.
I’ll wait for a new chapter with the patience of Buddha.
Study and writing form with louvor.E contunue great story
B & T.
Great to see them being loving and playful again. It would be great to see more chapters of this story – and also to see the Lucky One finished! Thank you for posting and good luck with your studies!