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Round n Round We Go (Ch.24)
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“Oh now you wanna ask what’s that all about?” Tina sounded pissed, which startled Bette. She made a face to herself for acting like a pro.
“I… what? I don’t understan—” Bette’s voice was killed by a body rolling on top of her and straddled her with some force. She humphed in surprise, glad that the woman was slim so not to break her ribs.
“You ratted me up, Miss Porter, after promising you won’t.” The blonde sat on Bette’s stomach and continued her act. This is fun, she thought, very content at herself for pulling it off. “Why’d you do that? I almost got fired and the smug-ass doctor took advantage of me, small vulnerable me…”
It finally all dawned on her. So they were still in their little play and the blonde was no where near mad. Bette sighed inwardly with relief and smirked up. “Smug-ass doctor, eh?”
“Shut up.” A small cracked cry was faked. It was almost like the nurse was upset and ready to break down. “I don’t like you no more.”
“Awww, noooo…” The woman underneath held her chest. “My heart’s broken.”
“Well, you broke mine first.” Tina gave her a glare for being so dramatic, lousy acting, she laughed to herself.
Bette straightened her face and sat up in spite of the weight on her. “Tell you what, I’ll make it up to you, miss nurse. What do you want, just name it.”
“Anything?” Two soft ivory hands wandered and brushed against Bette’s heaving breasts, and rotated in to the sensitive nipples.
Bette held her breath and made an effort to squeeze a word out of her teeth. “Anything.”
“Everything?” With a less than gentle yank, Tina held her by the back of her neck, and bent down to capture her lips swiftly. The kiss went deeper before it got shallow.
“…Everything.” Bette found her tongue back, only momentarily.
Anything and everything, that was exactly what she did that night. She teased her and licked her thoroughly, edged her until her whimpers even became tearful, and gave her the only one hell of a release at the end.
Time seemed to have passed a lot slower as they separately anticipated the day to come, with different frames of mind.
That particular morning, Bette woke up before the sun came up from horizon and embraced the peace of the morning. She looked sideway to the woman sleeping securely in her arm, and found the moment just amazing. This felt right, and necessary. To have Tina in her life was like putting the final piece to her puzzle. There were no doubts, no fears, or worries about what she wanted anymore. “Today is the day.” She said a little louder than a whisper, to the ceiling and the walls, but most importantly, to herself, and to the sleeping beauty. Then she just waited, for the dawn to crack, for the sky to light up, for the world to come alive.
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Hey guys! Sorry that it took longer than my usual, already slow ass to update a new chapter.
And it’s so nice to see so many people that support me and like my writing.
I think it’s pretty obvious that this story is heading nicely to a happy ending.
Spoiler alert: so now we have the wedding, what’s next…hmmm… I’m thinking, children?
The past week I was packing my stuff for the travel. Leaving on the 18th this month to the exciting USA. I’m nervous, like shaking nervous as the days count down. But I’m also so very excited that I’ll spend the following four years at University of Wisconsin Madison. It’s an absolute bless for me to study there.
Maybe I’ll finally meet someone, who knows. :)
Oh and I’m landing in Chicago first so definitely try the Chicago pizza!
Question: has anybody seen the show Chicago Fire?
I read some fanfic regarding the couple Leslie Shay and Allison Rafferty. But there’re way less fanfic for this paring. I think they’re cute tho.
Peace and Love
Thank you so much for this… Make me a wonderful weekend. Glad to hear that you are settled down fine. Please continue more , foresee some unsettle business with Melvin, of course a second baby will be a great joy too.
Did watched Chicago fire, as you’d mentioned they are cute.
Whatever you may wish for… Good luck dear & take care.
What joy when I got home from work in the morning, and called
My ultra-book and saw that you had posted a new capítulo.Pulei
joy.
Even with sleep can read all
Beautiful, wonderful, exciting this story.
My favorite couple reconnected ..
It’s all the luck in your new journey at the University of
Wisconsin they are lucky to have at your university
a great writer;
Congratulations and good luck!
And I’m waiting for a new chapter.
Thrilled seeing a new contribution from you, loving my girls and you too!
Very nice chapter. Loved it. Good luck at college. Thanks for posting.
Amazing chapter!
I wish you good luck and much fun in the USA.
I would love to see them have another child and to have Bette put Melvin in his place.
Delighted that you’ve continued this story, it’s great! Please continue it, I love these two and the way you write their characters! Thank you made my weekend.
Wonderful chapter! You have such a great way of telling a story. Thank you!
Good luck in Madison! Cold winters but a beautiful place. PPS!
Robyn,
I have already read your update last night but decided not to comment right away coz I have to finish my story too at that time.
Oohh Noh! So you think I’m the slowest now in terms of updating? Let’s ask Phacey or Bette0Porter regarding that. Haha!
As usual I love how in love Bette is with Tina here.. 10 years of almost being away and yet she is extremely still in love with Tee. It gave me hope that true love never fades.
Are you near yet with your ending? I’m so excited for your other stories :)
God bless you on your trip.
XOXO
Scribe
I loved this chapter. they are so sweet and loving towards each other.
I’m looking forward to the wedding and maybe a baby :) oh, I really can’t wait.
I wish you good luck in the USA.
im so late, my apologies knowing this is my fav story but yet another great chapter but yessss a happy day in my life thanks to these two getting married again i always love when Tibette is in full effect and i see alot of that coming….no long comment just waiting for next chapter
That was awesome and beautiful and hot, love it, so happy for them. Thanks for the update my friend, hope to see u soon