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Round n Round We Go (Ch.24)
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The song ended, and the room fell silent except for the old air conditioner’s humming. They felt whole.
Bette moved her feet, the sting in her spine pushed her to walk toward the blonde woman, and guided her to put the violin down, and drop to the ground on one knee. She searched long and carefully for the permission to ask what she was about to ask. Then she found it, the small smile around the corner of those rosy lips. “Tina, it doesn’t feel right to celebrate our anniversary just because I lost the papers. I’m not gonna take this marriage for granted. I’m not gonna take you for granted, never.” She fished in her pocket, and found the small velvety box, opened it, and laid it on Tina’s lap. “So, I want to ask you, marry me again. Let me hold your hand for the rest of our life. Please?”
A tear, cold after falling through the air, splashed on Bette’s hand, and a little pattern of liquid flower appeared on the spot. The brunette hurriedly brushed her thumb on Tina’s cheek, and found the path of the tear still warm. The salty little droplet, it never ceased to amaze her and pain her.
“Yes.” The soft word traveled the small distance between them and made its way right to Bette’s heart.
“Yes?”
“Yes, yes, yes, Bette.” She laughed, watched the woman took the ring out of the box and slide it on her finger. Then she wrapped her arms around the brunette’s neck and pulled her up to a full embrace. “I love you so much…”
With a heavy exhale, Bette smiled and voiced her relief to the entire building. “Yesssss!” If there would be a third time, she might as well have a heart attack.
Some fuss and noise appeared in the hall, and soon the door was mercilessly swung open again. People burst into the room with cheers and congratulations.
“Oh my god.” Tina saw her son, her father, grandma Porter, William, Kit, Alice, Shane, and Dana, James, Steven… her family, their family, all gathered in the small space. “You were all part of this?”
“Nope, just me and the kid.” Alice grinned her most definitely proud grin. “They all just knew.”
Bette stood up and gave Alice a nod to proceed.
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Hey guys! Sorry that it took longer than my usual, already slow ass to update a new chapter.
And it’s so nice to see so many people that support me and like my writing.
I think it’s pretty obvious that this story is heading nicely to a happy ending.
Spoiler alert: so now we have the wedding, what’s next…hmmm… I’m thinking, children?
The past week I was packing my stuff for the travel. Leaving on the 18th this month to the exciting USA. I’m nervous, like shaking nervous as the days count down. But I’m also so very excited that I’ll spend the following four years at University of Wisconsin Madison. It’s an absolute bless for me to study there.
Maybe I’ll finally meet someone, who knows. :)
Oh and I’m landing in Chicago first so definitely try the Chicago pizza!
Question: has anybody seen the show Chicago Fire?
I read some fanfic regarding the couple Leslie Shay and Allison Rafferty. But there’re way less fanfic for this paring. I think they’re cute tho.
Peace and Love
Thank you so much for this… Make me a wonderful weekend. Glad to hear that you are settled down fine. Please continue more , foresee some unsettle business with Melvin, of course a second baby will be a great joy too.
Did watched Chicago fire, as you’d mentioned they are cute.
Whatever you may wish for… Good luck dear & take care.
What joy when I got home from work in the morning, and called
My ultra-book and saw that you had posted a new capítulo.Pulei
joy.
Even with sleep can read all
Beautiful, wonderful, exciting this story.
My favorite couple reconnected ..
It’s all the luck in your new journey at the University of
Wisconsin they are lucky to have at your university
a great writer;
Congratulations and good luck!
And I’m waiting for a new chapter.
Thrilled seeing a new contribution from you, loving my girls and you too!
Very nice chapter. Loved it. Good luck at college. Thanks for posting.
Amazing chapter!
I wish you good luck and much fun in the USA.
I would love to see them have another child and to have Bette put Melvin in his place.
Delighted that you’ve continued this story, it’s great! Please continue it, I love these two and the way you write their characters! Thank you made my weekend.
Wonderful chapter! You have such a great way of telling a story. Thank you!
Good luck in Madison! Cold winters but a beautiful place. PPS!
Robyn,
I have already read your update last night but decided not to comment right away coz I have to finish my story too at that time.
Oohh Noh! So you think I’m the slowest now in terms of updating? Let’s ask Phacey or Bette0Porter regarding that. Haha!
As usual I love how in love Bette is with Tina here.. 10 years of almost being away and yet she is extremely still in love with Tee. It gave me hope that true love never fades.
Are you near yet with your ending? I’m so excited for your other stories :)
God bless you on your trip.
XOXO
Scribe
I loved this chapter. they are so sweet and loving towards each other.
I’m looking forward to the wedding and maybe a baby :) oh, I really can’t wait.
I wish you good luck in the USA.
im so late, my apologies knowing this is my fav story but yet another great chapter but yessss a happy day in my life thanks to these two getting married again i always love when Tibette is in full effect and i see alot of that coming….no long comment just waiting for next chapter
That was awesome and beautiful and hot, love it, so happy for them. Thanks for the update my friend, hope to see u soon