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Round the Bend 3
Chapter 10
As for me I am rewinding. I am going back to that moment when in Tricia’s kitchen her hands touched mine, we reached for one of those wooden ladles at the same time. She smiled again, something alien and foreign to be that happy. Normally in a situation like that I knew what do. Pull her to me, kiss her, feel her, feel her, kiss her. Auto pilot. For some reason I froze. My brain didn’t know what to tell me. My breath caught, it was weird.
“I’m not sure where this is going.”
“Me neither. I like you a lot….god that sounds so….stupid.”
“No it doesn’t….its honest…..there is nothing wrong with honesty.”
“You are right, so tell me Shane, honestly….would it make you uncomfortable to be with me….to get to know how we could be together. It’s a forward question….but I don’t want to be with you one and out….I’m at that stage in my life when the one nighter just doesn’t hold anything for me…..I need something more. And….I didn’t ask you here to marry me or move in or anything like that….I’m just tired of all these blank faces floating around me……I’ve done all that….no hard feelings…you know I just really like talking to you….and…”
“You know it’s weird that you say all this….I’m sorry I didn’t mean to cut you off….”
“Go on…please…”
“Normally I get invited to a rich and sexy girl’s house and I’m thinking of things to take….I’m thinking of things and ways to get them to give me everything that I want….normally it doesn’t take long….and normally I would pounce on the first chance I got….but right then…..that touch of you….you know when you touched my hand…..it was…..I couldn’t think of what to do next…..you make me very nervous…..”
“…….Good that makes us even….”
I loved her vulnerable honesty. I loved how she just put it all on the line. That’s the kind girl Tricia is. Yet at the same time I let something slip….some truth she will question me on later. I needed to get out of her home. I needed to get away but I couldn’t. I liked the way she made me feel. I needed her, I needed her in a way I didn’t think possible.
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wow, 3 updates in less than an hour, and an awsome story. nice to see your back. to bad shane and carmen had to die though. still awsome story.
Really appreciate you posting this. Would love to hear you reconsidering your self imposed ‘retirement’. I like your dark style, it’s actually refreshing as a change up from the usual stories in here. Don’t suppose you would ever consider a happy Sharmen ending? lol. Not that it matters, I will still look out for new fic from you in case you do decide to write (and post) again. Take care NDF! :)
you are fucking crazyyyy you trully are…. i mean i pray to god that you come back and when you do you do not one update but a full story… and you killllllll shane and crmen lol u are the only writer i would let kill does two lol fucking crazy as always but so fucking good! you cant stop now… u just cant cuz… you love writing and hell we sure like reading it… so… dont say good bye one more time i dont think i can take it~
all i can say is wowwwwwwwww what a an awesome story…i couldnt stop reading…u rock girl
WOW!!!!!!!!!! So fucking dark and tragic as always. It was really really good!It would be fantstic if you would stick around and continue to write!!!LOVE!
well done
Great to see you back for however long it is! Thanks for posting this and keeping us all in touch with your alt universe. I really appreciate all your versions of “imperfect” Shane and Carmen.
It’s too good to be sad. Thanks for sharing it.
awesome story! You’re the only on that can kill shane and carmen and get away with it=)