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Round the Bend 3
We finished cooking sat down at her simple table and talked and ate. When the night was over, when dinner was over we had dessert. When that was over we had coffee. It was three in the morning when we where done talking. It could have gone on longer but she had a photo shoot and she needed to get some sleep. She let me crash on her couch. She kissed me goodnight. She’s a good kisser.
Rewind a little. This is a perfect moment to kill. Rewind in my mind to that time when everyone was turning on me. When they thought my drug problem was why the heat was on us. To that moment when Carmen just about killed her brother to protect me. When she loved me enough to know that I wasn’t a traitor, when she loved me enough to set me free.
We had gone to meet Ville. We had the rocks and Belly was dead and the cops where looking for us in all the right places. Ville shouted at us. Accused us of being a bunch of junky killers, he couldn’t move the rocks, there was too much attention, why was the sky blue, why was water wet? Who fucking knows? My head was still bleeding and he needed someone to blame. He figured Carmen and her brother wouldn’t betray each other, Belly was dead and that left me. Vile spoke first:
“You know…every time I turn around you guys kill someone else.”
“Ville….” Manny said.
“I was not done……Here’s what I think….I think one of you has a serious problem….and I think that problem….is tipping off the cops….and….I’m sure you all know who I am talking about.”
“Ville…..we got you the merchandise…..we want our cut and we’ll be gone……….” Carmen had said, calm no nonsense.
“It’s your girlfriend…..she is a cancer and rat…and stool pigeon….and all the other names they have for two faced liars…”
“Fuck You….its your man Belly. He was aiming for me he was gunning for me….and now he’s dead….so fuck you….I’m not a fucking rat…there’s no way….sorry.”
“The bottom line is,” he said ignoring me. “The bottom line is someone has to take the blame….”
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wow, 3 updates in less than an hour, and an awsome story. nice to see your back. to bad shane and carmen had to die though. still awsome story.
Really appreciate you posting this. Would love to hear you reconsidering your self imposed ‘retirement’. I like your dark style, it’s actually refreshing as a change up from the usual stories in here. Don’t suppose you would ever consider a happy Sharmen ending? lol. Not that it matters, I will still look out for new fic from you in case you do decide to write (and post) again. Take care NDF! :)
you are fucking crazyyyy you trully are…. i mean i pray to god that you come back and when you do you do not one update but a full story… and you killllllll shane and crmen lol u are the only writer i would let kill does two lol fucking crazy as always but so fucking good! you cant stop now… u just cant cuz… you love writing and hell we sure like reading it… so… dont say good bye one more time i dont think i can take it~
all i can say is wowwwwwwwww what a an awesome story…i couldnt stop reading…u rock girl
WOW!!!!!!!!!! So fucking dark and tragic as always. It was really really good!It would be fantstic if you would stick around and continue to write!!!LOVE!
well done
Great to see you back for however long it is! Thanks for posting this and keeping us all in touch with your alt universe. I really appreciate all your versions of “imperfect” Shane and Carmen.
It’s too good to be sad. Thanks for sharing it.
awesome story! You’re the only on that can kill shane and carmen and get away with it=)