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    Story written on January 13, 2011 by GrindRight.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76737
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    POV story of Tina’s escape from an abusive relationship.

    I would never have thought, but she took my breath away in a sense I hadn’t felt before. I always thought it was metaphorical, but she quite literally stole my breath away. And I didn’t only see her as idealistic body characteristics, either. I saw Bette as a wonderful woman, whose physique only complimented her inner beauty. I wanted to show her how I felt – maybe with another kiss. I shook my head at that thought, just as she turned back toward me, and lowered my eyes to my hands.

    I heard her chuckle, and slip into the water. She must have known exactly what I was thinking, and why I looked so suspiciously nervous. That thought just embarrassed me further, but it had been my own fault.

    When I saw her communicate with Angelica so gently, a part of me melted. This woman was everything. She even resembled parts of my daughter, as if she had anything to do with the little girl’s biology. Bette not only felt like a part of my life – she felt like a part of me, and I couldn’t shake that feeling.

    "Look, Mommy’s coming in, too," she smiled, holding Angelica in her arms as she introduced her to the water. She really did have a way with kids. I could see it by the way Angelica clung onto her and giggled with her when her hands blurred under the water. I was captivated by this woman who had captured all parts of me without my knowing it. Just then I was discovering how much she really meant to me.

    "Mommy likes lying in the sun," I smiled in response to Angelica’s whining, and Bette’s few words on the matter. I was enjoying the teases Bette and I could deliver to one another. She was like the best friend I never had, and also the partner I never had. God, that was depressing. Was I so alone?

    "Mommy needs to take her shirt off to swim," Angelica laughed, loving to point out the obvious in every situation as she splashed her little hands into the water again.

    Bette just shrugged with a smile when I lifted my sunglasses onto my head, as if I were blaming her for the blurted observation. I couldn’t help but smile because I knew that, of course, it wasn’t her fault. Angelica was just a three-year-old who spoke her mind. I got up off the lounge chair, still with my shirt on, and walked to the steps of the pool, slowly and finally joining them. I didn’t feel quite as limber as Bette, and my bruises were still healing. They were faded, but not disappeared completely, and I didn’t want to evoke further pity.

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    1. I can’t even…sigh. I love this, I really do – and the fact that I feel this tightness in my chest, an incredible sadness for Tina, yet hopefuless when I think of what she and Bette can and will share….it’s a credit to your amazing writing. This comment doesn’t make sense. I know that…but it’s beacause I am overwhelmed by your words. Looking forward to the next post!

    5. I’ve just read both chapters and love this story. I read each page with bated breath. Your versatility to write about taboo topics whether it’s physical abuse to bondage and domination is just amazing. You develop each story with such attention to character detail that it always leaves me wanting more.

    8. So beautifully written, it really feels like we’re taking this journey with them. I’m not usually a fan of POVs but you write so perfectly that I can’t help but love your story

    14. I love this story. Even though you’re writing it from Tina’s POV you let us know what Bette is thinking and feeling too. It’s amazing how you do that.Tina couldn’t have found a better place to hide and yet I find myself worrying that he’s going to find her somehow. I think at some point when she’s strong enough she needs to confront him and put an end to her fear. I’m sure Bette would support her through that.

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