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    Story written on January 13, 2011 by GrindRight.
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    POV story of Tina’s escape from an abusive relationship.

    "Is it warm?" I smiled, stepping in slowly as I watched Angelica play in Bette’s arms.

    Angelica squealed her laughter while Bette decided to answer. "It’s not bad. It’ll probably do you some good to get wet after sitting out in the heat."

    I couldn’t help but scoff in disbelief. Something about Bette’s tone brought the tease out in me. It’s hard to explain, when someone can pull you back to your true self, and with such little effort. I felt like I owed this woman the world, knowing full well I was incapable of delivering it. I couldn’t help but smile at her sweet jest, that slight curve of her brow. "You don’t think it’s weird to swim with a shirt on?" I knew she could see exactly why I did it, and I wondered how she would respond.

    "Everybody wears a shirt when they’ve had a bit too much sun, right?"

    I was surprised by Bette’s insight, and her ease at speaking of something so deep with a child present. I couldn’t help but smile. In a way, her answer did calm me. I slipped in and swam over to Angelica to take her in my arms. She always loved the water. I always called her my little fish.

    I decided to myself that Bette and I should be friends – and nothing else. I couldn’t screw it up like I had nearly done the night before. Bette was far too important to me. I think she somehow sensed this new decision too.

    "Hey, I think I’m gonna go get some snacks ready, okay?" Bette asked with a smile, pulling herself up out of the pool. I made sure not to watch her, and kept my eyes on Angelica, laughing and playing with her while Bette left.

    When I saw Bette return about fifteen minutes later, I noticed that she had been watching me, but I didn’t dwell on that. I wasn’t even concerned because I had removed my shirt in the heat, feeling that she would be alright with the shock of my semi-bruised abdomen. She always handled everything so well – she surprised me often with her generosity and tenderness. And for some reason, I wasn’t mortified that she had seen the physicality of my pain. She was different to me, and I felt she deserved to know how bad it had been.

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    1. I can’t even…sigh. I love this, I really do – and the fact that I feel this tightness in my chest, an incredible sadness for Tina, yet hopefuless when I think of what she and Bette can and will share….it’s a credit to your amazing writing. This comment doesn’t make sense. I know that…but it’s beacause I am overwhelmed by your words. Looking forward to the next post!

    5. I’ve just read both chapters and love this story. I read each page with bated breath. Your versatility to write about taboo topics whether it’s physical abuse to bondage and domination is just amazing. You develop each story with such attention to character detail that it always leaves me wanting more.

    8. So beautifully written, it really feels like we’re taking this journey with them. I’m not usually a fan of POVs but you write so perfectly that I can’t help but love your story

    14. I love this story. Even though you’re writing it from Tina’s POV you let us know what Bette is thinking and feeling too. It’s amazing how you do that.Tina couldn’t have found a better place to hide and yet I find myself worrying that he’s going to find her somehow. I think at some point when she’s strong enough she needs to confront him and put an end to her fear. I’m sure Bette would support her through that.

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