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Goodnight.
I was in tears by the end of her letter, although I had been wiping them from my face as I felt them roll over my cheeks. Putting the letter down first, I wiped both hands over my face, and then through my hair.
My hands were shaking as I picked up the letter again and got to my feet, trembling with the truth of what had been right in front of me all this time. She did love me, just as I loved her – maybe more certainly. That gave me confidence to do what I did next.
As I have mentioned already, I was often jealous of anyone’s confidence, but in that moment, I felt it light up inside of me. I would walk into Bette’s room and tell her how I felt.
I marched with determination down the hallway, however quietly my footsteps had been, and opened the door without pausing to think about any questions or wondering if it was alright. The door was opened, and suddenly I realized I should have knocked.
“Jesus!” Bette gasped, turning from the door and covering her chest. She had been dressing! I gasped and quickly turned away, covering my face. I couldn’t believe I could be so horribly intrusive not to even knock on her door. I had been so determined and so sure of my feelings for her that it had overridden everything else, but now I felt the guilt crash over me.
I could only manage to apologize in whispers the moment I noticed what I had done, and quickly walked back out again after closing the door behind me. I’d never been so embarrassed, and while all I had seen was her naked back, I felt so horrible. The guilt was the worst of all, and to have intruded on someone so beautifully kind and timid.
The living room was a place of great comfort for me, so I immediately walked into it, my hands still over my face as I sunk down onto the couch. I was so humiliated I could hardly breathe. Even then, I knew I was being hard on myself, but the love I felt for this woman was no match for logic or reasoning.
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Oh deary me…….yes: MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE please!!!!!!
Great update. Now they know how each other feels and I’m so glad that they have told each other how they feel. Tina needs to start divorce proceedings while the husband is locked up and can’t get out. Two things: we don’t really know anything about Bette’s past and we don’t know how the husband found them. LA is a very large city and he couldn’t have been just lucky to find Tina going in a store. Hopefully they won’t be bothered by him again but I know that is just asking for a miracle. He is not good enough to just leave her alone. All abusive men want to kill their wives or girlfriends. Why, I don’t know. Hope we can get some of these questions answered. Thanks for posting.
I too am curious about Bette’s life before Tina and Angelica. I’m sure you’ll get into that later. Thanks for the awesome update GR :)
I don’t remember her friends being so critical of Tina on the show. Bette seems so fragile and sometimes morose. Great story. PPS.
GR, you really are one of the best writers out there and I love each and every one of your stories. Thank you for sharing them with us. :)
Finally caught up with this wonderful story. I hope the husband is gone for good.
i love this story looking forward to the next post
Hey, What a fabulous story you are developing here. I adore the connection that Bette and TIna have instantly had. After everything that Tina has been through, she should not be willing to open up to someone. The fact that she can is testament to her capacity to love. I can’t wait to read more as their relationship along with Bette and Angelica’s grow stronger. I can’t wait to follow you. As always, you rock my world and re-establish my fiath. Many thank yous, Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
I love this story too! I hope Bette follows her heart and stops listening to her friends.
need more of this story, asap (and thank you in advance)
Just read both your updates. Love this story. Thank you.
great update… but i am getting worried… the time is passing and soon that BASTARD will be getting out of jail… i also wondered how he found her… maybe he was going through her phone book at home and found her friends address from college and waited… good thing he doesn’t no about bette… i was also hoping they would move… he is like a bad penny… he will be back… lets hope tina will stand up to him and not just take what her dishes out… pps
Woderful story.Thank you.
This is so good and love the story. Please post more, thanks!
I’m loving this story. I wonder how was the life of bette in the past before Tina appear in your life. Will it come up more drama than the concerns of the friends of Bette, Tina will look for a job. Hahaha so many questions. I love drama, with a happy ending, of course. More, more…….