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After giving in and putting my other hand in hers, I leaned in a little too. “I can’t believe you wrote that. I mean … that you love me …”
“As much as I wanted to put your needs first, I couldn’t help falling in love with you.” There it was, admitted all in one breath. She had wanted to shelter me from her love, or what difficulties that might bring. I was so touched.
“Bette …” I breathed with some difficulty. I couldn’t let her go on this way, feeling that I was better off without her – I had to interject. “Bette, I don’t want you to run from me. Please … don’t run. I feel it too, and I don’t want to ignore these feelings. Do you wanna know how happy I am to see you every day? You make me happy, just like you wrote to me. I feel that too.”
“Are we crazy?” she asked in a low whisper, reaching her hand up to my face, leaning her own in towards me, our foreheads touching. I smiled at the sentiment of the way she touched me, like I would break. I hoped she knew I wouldn’t, and that I wasn’t afraid of her. Of others maybe, but never Bette.
Suddenly I felt totally affected by the way she held my hands. “Is it crazy that I want to kiss you right now?” I felt like there was a weight on my chest, but that wouldn’t slow me down. I breathed deeper, so hopeful. I wanted her to want me. “Even though I’m married …”
I heard a breath of her humor, but I knew she wouldn’t laugh outright. We both knew my marriage was over, but she took my feelings into consideration, and gave me a proper answer. “If you’d rather wait, I’ll wait for you, Tina. But no, it’s not crazy to want to kiss me.”
“I mean … do you want to kiss me?” I wished I could see her blushing.
“Don’t tempt me,” she chuckled, moving her hand down my neck and onto my shoulder. She grazed her thumb over my collarbone, and I was still amazed at her accuracy in the dark. In a way, I was wishing she would slip and touch me accidentally. I smirked at my own sexual urges.
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Oh deary me…….yes: MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE please!!!!!!
Great update. Now they know how each other feels and I’m so glad that they have told each other how they feel. Tina needs to start divorce proceedings while the husband is locked up and can’t get out. Two things: we don’t really know anything about Bette’s past and we don’t know how the husband found them. LA is a very large city and he couldn’t have been just lucky to find Tina going in a store. Hopefully they won’t be bothered by him again but I know that is just asking for a miracle. He is not good enough to just leave her alone. All abusive men want to kill their wives or girlfriends. Why, I don’t know. Hope we can get some of these questions answered. Thanks for posting.
I too am curious about Bette’s life before Tina and Angelica. I’m sure you’ll get into that later. Thanks for the awesome update GR :)
I don’t remember her friends being so critical of Tina on the show. Bette seems so fragile and sometimes morose. Great story. PPS.
GR, you really are one of the best writers out there and I love each and every one of your stories. Thank you for sharing them with us. :)
Finally caught up with this wonderful story. I hope the husband is gone for good.
i love this story looking forward to the next post
Hey, What a fabulous story you are developing here. I adore the connection that Bette and TIna have instantly had. After everything that Tina has been through, she should not be willing to open up to someone. The fact that she can is testament to her capacity to love. I can’t wait to read more as their relationship along with Bette and Angelica’s grow stronger. I can’t wait to follow you. As always, you rock my world and re-establish my fiath. Many thank yous, Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
I love this story too! I hope Bette follows her heart and stops listening to her friends.
need more of this story, asap (and thank you in advance)
Just read both your updates. Love this story. Thank you.
great update… but i am getting worried… the time is passing and soon that BASTARD will be getting out of jail… i also wondered how he found her… maybe he was going through her phone book at home and found her friends address from college and waited… good thing he doesn’t no about bette… i was also hoping they would move… he is like a bad penny… he will be back… lets hope tina will stand up to him and not just take what her dishes out… pps
Woderful story.Thank you.
This is so good and love the story. Please post more, thanks!
I’m loving this story. I wonder how was the life of bette in the past before Tina appear in your life. Will it come up more drama than the concerns of the friends of Bette, Tina will look for a job. Hahaha so many questions. I love drama, with a happy ending, of course. More, more…….