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Run (6)
“I would never ever …” I whispered, bringing her close so that our foreheads touched. I didn’t even want to say the word ‘cheat’ because I knew it would hurt her, so I just kept her close.
“I know. I try to understand …”
Then it hit me – why my phrase had affected her so much the day before. I felt so guilty I was nearly in tears again. Just like she often had to take caution with me, I knew I would have to be careful at first, so that she would know just how true my statement was. I would never cheat on her.
“This isn’t your burden,” she whispered back to me. I could see it pained her just to realize how jaded she had become. She wanted to trust me with all of her heart. “You shouldn’t have to pay for the pain someone else caused me.”
“I could say the same for you.”
She opened her eyes to me again, and then smiled. It was small, but present just the same.
“Do you have any idea how good you are to me?” It was true; she had been so incredible in every sense.
Then she smiled again, and blushed a little. I could never get over what her blushing did to me. “… Tina …”
“Yeah, the sex too,” I teased, smoothing my hand over her cheek. She was modest about sex, like she was about everything else. “You made me see something in myself … I didn’t know I was capable of this, Bette …”
Her eyes asked ‘of what’, but she said nothing. I answered it just the same.
“Trusting someone again. Loving that person unconditionally.”
“Who is she?”
I just had to smile at her twisted humor, and was glad for it. Maybe the confession wouldn’t depress her all night. The cheeky question gave me hope, and an idea of my own.
“Oh, she’s … beautiful …” I started, biting my lower lip and sliding my hands up her strong legs, “… Shy, but strong … weak when I kiss her …” She was weak while I was touching her too. “… And she makes the most erotic sound when I touch her like this …” I pressed my hand between her legs, and the there it was. Her gentle moan always trembled when I did that. “Yeah … just like that.”
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(46 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
Grindright, I don’t remeber if I’ve commented on your stories before, I dont think I have. But with this one, you’ve really gotten to me. Tina’s struggle to become confident and strong, Bette admitting and overcoming her insecurities, and Angelica’s childlike nature(that is so much stronger and less insecure than the adults around her)has really gotten to me. I need to see where this is going to take them.
I’m so happy that they are finding their groove with each other and it is becoming easier for them to be with each other. I didn’t think that animal would be in jail for the entire sentence. Hope Bette and the police get there quickly. Hope he gets really foolish and turns on the police so they shoot him down like crazed animal he is because people like him don’t quit. He won’t stop until he is silenced permanently. The law can’t keep him in jail long enough and they will always live in fear of him returning. Even with all the abuse and such, I’ve enjoyed reading this story and Tina finding herself and also realizing that her life didn’t have to go on in violence. Hate to see it end but at least it will end on a good note for Tina and Bette hopefully. Great update. Thanks for posting.
hopefully angie remembers to call bette like she did when ed was there
How could you leave it hanging like that? Sucha tease. Please post soon.
You can’t leave us there! You are a tease… Thanks for the post
I hope Angel thinks this is a real emergency this time and phones Bette!! I like all your writing but I must admit I prefer this more tender style. Bravo GR.
Thanks for the update, I’m glad that Tina decides to face up to her husband. I look forward to your next post.
Heartfelt and well written as always. I am glad that Tina has renewed confidence. Angie should dial 911 and Bette.
Your stories are always captivating and so well written. Love the way you’ve described Tina’s realization that she has control of her life. Disappointed that it’s coming to an end, but look forward to your next post.
Bravo Tina,be strong.Amazing story.Thank you.
Good job Tina, take your life back! But I sure hope Angie is in the house calling for help. Post soon so we can find out!
I’m so happy that Bette and Tina are in a strong secure relationship and that it has given Tina the confidence that she had lost over the years of abuse she was subjected to. I just hope she can hold him off long enough for help to get there.
OMG You such a tease and leave us like that ahahhah. Damn that was so good and hope Bette come home on time to help Tina, ok now let see Tina kick his ass. Please post more, thanks!
i agree with the others.. lets hope angie dials 911 and bette… and what a place to leave us.. would love to see tina kick his ASS…pps