Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
Run (6)
When she opened her eyes and shifted under me, it gave me a rush, but I was also concerned for her. She spoke up to me quietly. “I don’t want this to have an effect on our relationship … I just want you to know … I wanted to tell you so you knew.”
“It’s in the past,” I assured her, leaning in and kissing her again. “I’m so glad you could tell me, and I’m gonna show you that you can trust me. I’ll prove it to you, no matter how long it takes.” I would wait forever.
I think she had been waiting an awfully long time to hear someone say those words, and when I did, she pulled me into another kiss. It was so powerful and fulfilling that I turned to lay on top of her again. She desperately needed the close contact.
It was difficult to make it into her room before we undressed one another, but we knew it had to wait. She was as tender as she always was, but her passion was presented with a sort of pride – I could tell that she felt a sort of release in my knowing about her past. What kind of woman would cheat on Bette? Well, I suppose she thought the same of my abusive husband. In any case, I was happy to physically care for her like she had done for me. She tasted incredible.
Once we had collapsed in each other’s arms, we breathed heavily and smiled at the comfort we felt together.
“Do you need to go?” Her voice was so small.
I don’t know how I could have left her then, even if I did have to leave. “No. Not tonight.”
She turned so that I could lay behind her, and very quietly, I heard her crying. The sound just broke my heart.
“Bette?”
“I’m sorry.” I know I wasn’t supposed to feel sorry for her, to just love her, but I couldn’t help myself. The tone of her voice was almost tragic.
“Are you okay?” I whispered, reaching for the sheet and pulling it over us both so that she might feel more comfort.
“I’m just so happy …”
I smiled at that feeling – I’d known it myself.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(46 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
Grindright, I don’t remeber if I’ve commented on your stories before, I dont think I have. But with this one, you’ve really gotten to me. Tina’s struggle to become confident and strong, Bette admitting and overcoming her insecurities, and Angelica’s childlike nature(that is so much stronger and less insecure than the adults around her)has really gotten to me. I need to see where this is going to take them.
I’m so happy that they are finding their groove with each other and it is becoming easier for them to be with each other. I didn’t think that animal would be in jail for the entire sentence. Hope Bette and the police get there quickly. Hope he gets really foolish and turns on the police so they shoot him down like crazed animal he is because people like him don’t quit. He won’t stop until he is silenced permanently. The law can’t keep him in jail long enough and they will always live in fear of him returning. Even with all the abuse and such, I’ve enjoyed reading this story and Tina finding herself and also realizing that her life didn’t have to go on in violence. Hate to see it end but at least it will end on a good note for Tina and Bette hopefully. Great update. Thanks for posting.
hopefully angie remembers to call bette like she did when ed was there
How could you leave it hanging like that? Sucha tease. Please post soon.
You can’t leave us there! You are a tease… Thanks for the post
I hope Angel thinks this is a real emergency this time and phones Bette!! I like all your writing but I must admit I prefer this more tender style. Bravo GR.
Thanks for the update, I’m glad that Tina decides to face up to her husband. I look forward to your next post.
Heartfelt and well written as always. I am glad that Tina has renewed confidence. Angie should dial 911 and Bette.
Your stories are always captivating and so well written. Love the way you’ve described Tina’s realization that she has control of her life. Disappointed that it’s coming to an end, but look forward to your next post.
Bravo Tina,be strong.Amazing story.Thank you.
Good job Tina, take your life back! But I sure hope Angie is in the house calling for help. Post soon so we can find out!
I’m so happy that Bette and Tina are in a strong secure relationship and that it has given Tina the confidence that she had lost over the years of abuse she was subjected to. I just hope she can hold him off long enough for help to get there.
OMG You such a tease and leave us like that ahahhah. Damn that was so good and hope Bette come home on time to help Tina, ok now let see Tina kick his ass. Please post more, thanks!
i agree with the others.. lets hope angie dials 911 and bette… and what a place to leave us.. would love to see tina kick his ASS…pps