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Run (7) – Final Chapter
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Bette had her arm around me while Angelica slept in mine. “You want me to bring her to bed for you?”
I nodded at the quiet offer, feeling so weak from everything that had happened. I was so grateful when she carefully took Angelica and carried her down the hall. It didn’t take her long to return, as I’m sure she was concerned for me.
“How does a hot shower sound?” she smiled as she walked back to the couch, offering out her hand. My knees were weak, but that sounded like heaven, so I accepted. I think she could tell that it was hard for me to get up and walk into the bathroom with her, but she took such wonderful care of me. She was patient when I was wary of being naked at first, and stripped in front of me so that I could see it was alright. She helped me into the shower after it was properly heated. She even sat with me when I slowly lowered myself to cry on the floor of the tub, the water running over us both.
She whispered little comforts to me, promising to lay with me until I fell asleep, and that she would bring Angelica in so I wouldn’t worry about her sleeping alone. I don’t know how, but Bette thought of everything. Part of my bawling was absolute relief, and I told her that. It was relief that I had Bette in my life, and that I really felt that everything would be alright. I was so relieved that I had faced my fear of him for once and for all. I felt changed, like I was a more capable person, and I wasn’t afraid any longer. The relief was almost more than I could handle, and I cried while she helped me shower. That was one hell of a day for tears.
“I’m right here, Tina … I’m not going anywhere.” Her constant reassurances finally calmed me down, and I relaxed against her.
I remember laying my head on her shoulder when we had finally gotten back to our feet, with the water pouring down my back as I took in one deep breath after another. She stroked my hair and down to my arms, and waited until I was finally ready to step out. The memory comforts me in times of stress, even years later. She’s always had a powerful effect on me.
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You have to stand up to abusive partners whether it’s physical or verbal abuse in order to reclaim your life. Excellent story. I can’t wait for another one from that fertile imagination of yours.
At times I was so afraid for Tina and Angelicabut I’m extremely happy that she finally stood up to him. Most abusers are cowards and don’t know how to handle a woman that fights back, it throws them off their game. Angie was very brave to call the police, so proud of her for doing so. And Bette, well, she is just the greatest ever. It’s a good thing Bette was not there because she would have killed him and he well deserved it. I think though that Tina should have asked Angelica if she really wanted to visit with him after what she witnessed, I wouldn’t think she would want to see him except to spit on him. I never understood how he found them to begin with and when he caught her in the grocery store, it was obvious that he had been stalking them. It was a great story nevertheless. Thanks for bringing it to us.
Excellent job telling this story, it was at times painfull to read but a great read never the less… I enjoy your writing so I look forward to the next story, hint hint lol.
This is too good. By golly you really are an amazing writer. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I feel privileged to have been able to read it.
This was just amazing – I am in awe of your writing. Thank you…thank you…thank you. Pitch perfect in every way.
An excellent story, well told…and yes, Bette would have really done him in.
I just loved every part of this story, but this last chapter was perfect. I could imagine all scenes and I loved that Tina became a writer. Just loved and I can’t wait to see another story from you. Congratulation
bravo!!!
well done, GR! I echo Tanishaa’s “Bravo”.
Wow! As everyone above stated,…excellent job. You are an amazing writer GR and I am always soo happy to see a new story from you. Thank you, once again, for sharing your talent with us here on FF. Love ya!
All that talent and we get to enjoy it all. You are an excellent writer.
Just brilliant, that’s all i can say
That was amazing it made me cry, it made me proud, of how strong Tina could be,please post soon,thank you.
”this story is meant to be realistic. I hope it appears that way too, and that each reader can find their own message” – Nicely done, thanks for writing it.
Amazing story, thanks for sharing. Although I am a big fan of your naughtier stories ;op … this one just blew me away. It was so engaging and touching, and not to sound cheesey… but a story of hope. Thanks :o)
That was just a wonderful story. Hard to read and I’m sure harder for you to write but you did such a damn good job. Thank you.
As difficult as some parts of this story was to read, I truly loved how you showed the growing relationship between Bette and Tina/Angie and Bette. The journey may have been hard but the destiny(nation) was worth it.
That was awesome and glad that Tina is ok and Angie is so smart to call a cop and Bette and happy that that baster going in jail forever. This is so good and love it. Please post more, thanks!
Beautiful GR. I wish I were a poet so I can pay you the proper compliment. I wish I had Maya Angelou (I hope that’s the correct spelling, if not, my bad) Thank you for sharing this awesome story :)
Wonderful and real!
Amazing as always.Thank you.
Thanks so much for this story. I loved it.
Amazing, beautiful story!!! I’m always amazed with your capacity to write in soo many different directions. Great story, excellent job, really loved it!
Fantastic story and “write-on!”
WOW… some parts were hard to read… its just to sad that this does happen every day.. so glad angie called 911 and then bette… Great story… can’t wait for another one from you… Thanks
Write on. Please.