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Run (7) – Final Chapter
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Once we had dried off together and stepped back into her room to change into pyjamas, she held my hand in hers. “Tina?”
I tried to be as attentive as she’d always been, even under the circumstances.
“I’m taking a few days off from work,” she said, watching me take a seat on the bed. I was so damn exhausted from the struggling and the fighting I thought I would collapse, but I tried to listen to her. “I want to be here with you and Angie to make sure you’re alright, okay?”
I nodded as normally as I could manage, and I think she could finally sense my absolute fatigue. She cupped my face in her hands.
“Aww, baby … look at you.”
I smiled with my eyes closed, protected in her presence. I knew nothing could touch me, and I liked that feeling. Even after knowing I could be strong, it was comforting to know that I didn’t always have to be.
She arranged the pillows at the head of the bed, and sat holding me while I recounted the events of the intrusion.
I think it broke her heart to hear what he had done to me, but she listened anyway. No one had ever listened to me like Bette did, like every word had equal significance.
I told her everything, and even though I knew most of it would infuriate her, I began the healing process by explaining my pain to her. I knew she would put me first. She always did.
The growl deep in her throat when I mentioned his hand in my shirt was actually comforting, because of her protective nature over me. I snuggled close when she pulled me in, and I finally relaxed when I had finished explaining. For some reason, it had a calming effect on me, probably aided by her encouragements and insistence that none of it should cause me any guilt. She always knew just what to say. “It’ll all be okay,” she said to me, and for once, I really did believe it to be true. Although Bette was skeptical of the change I had seen in him, I believed we would be alright.
“Do you want me to get Angie?”
Yes – please yes, I thought, just nodding. It would be difficult to be separated from her after the horror that had just taken place. Her scream resonated in my ears as Bette left, and I kept my eyes opened, just waiting for them to return. Thankfully it wasn’t long until Angelica was asleep beside me.
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You have to stand up to abusive partners whether it’s physical or verbal abuse in order to reclaim your life. Excellent story. I can’t wait for another one from that fertile imagination of yours.
At times I was so afraid for Tina and Angelicabut I’m extremely happy that she finally stood up to him. Most abusers are cowards and don’t know how to handle a woman that fights back, it throws them off their game. Angie was very brave to call the police, so proud of her for doing so. And Bette, well, she is just the greatest ever. It’s a good thing Bette was not there because she would have killed him and he well deserved it. I think though that Tina should have asked Angelica if she really wanted to visit with him after what she witnessed, I wouldn’t think she would want to see him except to spit on him. I never understood how he found them to begin with and when he caught her in the grocery store, it was obvious that he had been stalking them. It was a great story nevertheless. Thanks for bringing it to us.
Excellent job telling this story, it was at times painfull to read but a great read never the less… I enjoy your writing so I look forward to the next story, hint hint lol.
This is too good. By golly you really are an amazing writer. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I feel privileged to have been able to read it.
This was just amazing – I am in awe of your writing. Thank you…thank you…thank you. Pitch perfect in every way.
An excellent story, well told…and yes, Bette would have really done him in.
I just loved every part of this story, but this last chapter was perfect. I could imagine all scenes and I loved that Tina became a writer. Just loved and I can’t wait to see another story from you. Congratulation
bravo!!!
well done, GR! I echo Tanishaa’s “Bravo”.
Wow! As everyone above stated,…excellent job. You are an amazing writer GR and I am always soo happy to see a new story from you. Thank you, once again, for sharing your talent with us here on FF. Love ya!
All that talent and we get to enjoy it all. You are an excellent writer.
Just brilliant, that’s all i can say
That was amazing it made me cry, it made me proud, of how strong Tina could be,please post soon,thank you.
”this story is meant to be realistic. I hope it appears that way too, and that each reader can find their own message” – Nicely done, thanks for writing it.
Amazing story, thanks for sharing. Although I am a big fan of your naughtier stories ;op … this one just blew me away. It was so engaging and touching, and not to sound cheesey… but a story of hope. Thanks :o)
That was just a wonderful story. Hard to read and I’m sure harder for you to write but you did such a damn good job. Thank you.
As difficult as some parts of this story was to read, I truly loved how you showed the growing relationship between Bette and Tina/Angie and Bette. The journey may have been hard but the destiny(nation) was worth it.
That was awesome and glad that Tina is ok and Angie is so smart to call a cop and Bette and happy that that baster going in jail forever. This is so good and love it. Please post more, thanks!
Beautiful GR. I wish I were a poet so I can pay you the proper compliment. I wish I had Maya Angelou (I hope that’s the correct spelling, if not, my bad) Thank you for sharing this awesome story :)
Wonderful and real!
Amazing as always.Thank you.
Thanks so much for this story. I loved it.
Amazing, beautiful story!!! I’m always amazed with your capacity to write in soo many different directions. Great story, excellent job, really loved it!
Fantastic story and “write-on!”
WOW… some parts were hard to read… its just to sad that this does happen every day.. so glad angie called 911 and then bette… Great story… can’t wait for another one from you… Thanks
Write on. Please.