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    Savannah

    Story written on December 22, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 25

    Readying her weapon, she hazarded a quick glance in the room
    She gasped at the sight which awaited her.
    Her surgery had been completely trashed.
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    She lay there abandoned. 
    Her blonde hair was sprawled around her tilted head. The fall and subsequent tumble had grazed her skin on her left shoulder and down the same arm where her body, propelled by the forward momentum of the moving car, had slid along the rough sandy and rocky ground. The side of her leg, knee and calf had suffered an equal abrasive fate. Fresh blood was slowly oozing out of the newly exposed raw skin.
    Clad only in her light sleepwear, she was totally defenceless against the elements and the scores of predators which had all heard the subtle but tell tale sign of her distress and smelt the richness of her bloody injuries as her scent was carried across the plain by the light night breeze. 
    Out of communal dens, clan members awoke, rallied and started communicating. Clearly overwhelmed with excitement and nervousness, they grinned, they grovelled and produced loud "whoop" vocalisations  followed by their trademark near human hysterical laughter as they set off in search of the food which they knew had already been brought to the ground. There would be easy pickings tonight. 
    Close to her, however, the head female kept on advancing. She was light footed, the spongy pads on her feet acting like cushions and made her approach almost silent. Her focused stride made her legs look like pendulums, the light flick up of her feet accentuating the rise and fall, in turn, of hips and shoulders as each limb was planted on the ground.
    She held her large head steadily in the direction of her target. She was driven by scent and scent alone. In the light of day, the impressive muscles in her neck and shoulders would have been clearly visible as they worked together to hold the regal skull. She was nearly standing over Tina now, reaffirming what she already knew. Her sense of smell had not deceived her.
    Her ears twitched at the sound of the loud high-pitched rapid series of staccato ‘hee-hee-hee’ which travelled towards her from the darkness beyond.
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    1. K I’m not sure my heart can take much more of this and before the holidays at that. I hope you’re enjoying this, watching me cry. Please save my, I mean, Bette’s Tina!!! Loved it , thank you. Happy holidays!!

    2. Damn! Been waiting for it, ok not patinetly but still…you end it this way?? Oh cmmon…:( Can’t do it twice in a row!:)) Glad you’re feeling better, love the way you write and amount of research you did for it, PPS!!!

    4. If anyone on this site writes a more exciting and well written story, I am not aware of that. I am sorry you were so ill. It’s not fun being sick, that’s for sure. Have a happy holiday season. Please post when you can.

    5. Oh no. I hope it’s not who I think it is that that b*&^%tch Jodie shot. I’d like her to fall head straight into a pride of lions or maybe hyenas would be better and then she gets picked to the bone by vultures. I know that it’s all part of the circle of life but not Ellie :( I hope that Bette gets to Tina in time. Thank you for this. It made my day.

    7. Another wonderful update with me sitting at the edge of my seat! You can’t really do this to us again :) Good you’re feeling better. Thank you for this story. Merry Xmas!

    8. Oh my goodness, you didn’t do that again?!!! Yes, you did too and you won’t be back till after Christmas? Can I hold out that long? So happy you are feeling better and now can enjoy your Christmas holiday. Wonderful chapter. Ii can only hopenthat Bette finds the little egotistical bitch before she takes the tusks and runs. The heavy body falling to the ground tells me jodi has killed the bull elephant. Hopefully Bette or someone can find her before she takes the tusks and catches her in the act or just before she gets on her airplane. At the very least I want to see her in jail for murder and attempted murder. Maybe jsutice will prevail in the Savannah rather than the courts of law. Hyennas are particularly vicious. I know it is wrong of me to speak and think evil of her but I just want to see her punished in the worst way possible. First I would like Bette to beat her to a bloody pulp but her first priority is to take care of Tina, she needs to get the authorities to jodi’s plane before she can take off. So much to say but, I will quit before I get really ugly. Thanks for a great and exciting chapter, even if you did leave us hangin’. lol Merry Christmas to you and your family and a very Happy and Prosperous New Year!!!

    9. I´m not really into the “you owe me” business, BUT I do believe you owe us by now. Twice in a row is so not nice. Now, Ellie may still be around, right? She will rescue Tina and plant her very nice and very big behind on Jodies face. Anyway glad you´re feeling better. Have a happy holiday.

    10. Oh No who was just shot. I hope that it was Bette finding Jodi and took her out. I am glad and sorta believed that it was Ellie that had found Tina, I hope that was not the body falling from Jodi shooting her or a memeber of her family. Keep us posted and have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

    12. Woman, you’re getting far too comfortable in that teasing business I think!… I notice that being unwell (so sorry again about that) hasn’t altered in any way that streak of yours. Bad, baaaaaaad girl!… And this, right before Christmas???…. tut tut tut, tu files un mauvais, un tres mauvais coton!… Now, that last part is very intriguing indeed… What has Jodie done? Whose body is it? What do you mean with this very mysterious phrase: “The situation had changed.”? Now, we have to wait… AGAIN, for all these answers! But hey, who am I to speak… *hiding behind the couch*… Anyway, I looooved how you had us crawl into Bette’s head as she gradually discovered all the pieces of the puzzle and put them together. I felt her anger rising as she realized the ordeal Tina had been through. God, I love angry Bette when she’s protective of Tina. Now, there’s one thing I need you to clear up for me: Is Jodie an outlaw (because of her activities?) or has she never crossed the illegality line (well, until now)? Because I was gonna say that after what she did to Tina, at least she’s now totally doomed to end up behind bars, but maybe she is already “wanted”… Anyway, that was a great update, and even though I am frustrated like everybody else by the teasing, I will not complain any more, because… well… at least YOU update your story *blushing furiously from shame*. Thanks very much and… Have yourself a merry little Christmas, let your heart be light, next year all our troubles will (hopefully) be out of sight… ;) Big hugs, Kw

    14. Somethings not right with you girl to do this for the second time!! Great story that gets us all into it and then wham…there is a door slamming shut!! Not sure Santa is going to be very good to you..not playing very nice two days before Christmas!!! I hope you have a Merry, Merry Christmas!!

    17. Hi Kins! I am sorry to heard about you being not so well! :-/ I hope you are much better now :-) though I need you to do us a favor to check to your doctor on the side effect of any medication you take, somehow I believe there something like “stop taking the medicine when teasing is become a habit” … lol.. Come on!! ;-) do you know that I was so thrilled when I saw your posting!! But what the **** is that ending?! I hope JL’s twisted mind made her decided to kill herself! small chance, but I will hold on that thinking till I read your next chapter, and uhm… What about posting while the turkey is being cook instead of posting after it’s being eaten?! ;-) he3… You know, as a little presents during this festive seasons?! ;0)x lol anyway, happy holidays and merry Christmas Kins!! :-)

    18. We have all established you’re indeed a tease. I just hope Tina is ok and Bette finds her. This story has indeed exceeded my expectations in more ways than one.

    19. Thank you kins40. I was wondering why you didn’t update sooner. Sorry you were unwell. Thank you for this sensual feast. You make me want to experience the world the way a kins40 story unfolds. You know, all senses engaged, and me acutely aware that I’m beating up the keyboard while I’m typing my little plea for you to end our collective misery! Kins40, please! Please! Please?

    21. What more could happened?…..OMG… Think i can only take some much…k40 ….First Tina is in danger… …thou this part assured me at least she’s been taking care off by ..a Magnificent Creatures… Ellie’s request had been simple, they would protect the human as elephants protected their own in times of distress. They would protect Tina, like Ellie had once been protected by her human family, something she had never forgotten.Following their matriarch’s example, they formed a ring around Tina. Facing outwards into the night, they would wait out the approaching danger……But??? ….who fall? “A body fell heavily to the ground.”….Can we just kill Jodie?!!! ….Thanks ..great chap…. [even thou it breaks my heart]

    23. Oh noooo….another cliffhanger! Tina is still on the ground unconscious and now it seems like Ellie is lying there next to her! This is so not good. Please have Bette find them soon.Thanks for the update and enjoy the holidays.

    24. If the dart gun that Jodie stole is now lying abandoned, surely that means that Jodie was defenseless and she is now dead. I wonder who took her down. Great chapter! Happy Holidays, K40. Hurry back and post another for us, please and thank you.

    27. Okay, I have read this last paragraph three times. And now, I am unsure who or what was shot. The single phrase, “the situation had changed has made me think differently than I first did. At first my thought was that jodi had shot the bull elephant, now I’m not so sure. It could be that someone has shot jodi because we don’t use the term “forehead” for animals, do we? Ahhh, so many questions. Thanks. PPS

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