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Savannah
Story written on August 19, 2011 by kins40.
There were a few uncomfortable minutes, where the brunette’s demeanour changed altogether. She remained courteous though inviting Tina to follow her and showing her where all she would need was situated.
The conversation was never allowed to stray away from the business at hand and since then the vet had been virtually invisible.
There were the odd times though when Tina thought she may have glimpsed the sight of the army green uniform wearing woman, but those times were brief although sufficient to bring a light flutter to the accountant’s heart.
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By the time the jeep came to a stop, Bette was biting back the tears that threatened to pour out and with every step she took. The pain was biting increasingly sharply. The journey back had been a real trip back from hell.
She was close to the veterinary hospital now but she could barely see it off in the distance for the wall of tears which had formed in her eyes.
It was as much the pain as the embarrassment of the whole situation and she also knew she had to pass by her office where the beautiful blonde was not doubt working.
She prayed with all her might that the door was closed so that Tina would not see her in her current state.
As she got closer, she realised that the door was indeed opened. She swore under her breath.
She hazarded a quick glance into the comfortable and cool sanctuary and breathed a sigh of relief when she did not notice the blonde hair in this particular instance.
In other circumstances, she had, however, immensely enjoyed seeing the young accountant sitting in her chair, her head down over her books, her black rimmed rectangular glasses perched at the end of her nose.
Sometimes when the heat was too unbearable, Bette had noticed her tying her hair back or putting it up in a relaxed bun and used the unruly hairdo as a pen holder. Two sometimes three yellow HB pencils would find their way in the silky strands.
Bette put her head down and continued walking. She was so close now.
Tina saw her walk passed though, as she was making her way back to the desk. She had appeared from behind the open door, probably having been looking through the stacks of filed documents Bette kept in a hidden recess of her office.
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I like chapters like this. Not to much description, just enough. I loved it. PPVS.
Still loving it kins! Looking forward to your next post…please make it soon ;)
That was rather more romantic than the fable about Androcles and the lion… ;) I’m eager to see how their trip into to field pans out. Thanks for the post. :)
Hey Kins I have yet to comment on this story but thoroughly enjoying it. I love the change of scenery and different roles for B&T.
wow thats pretty intense they want each other badly, when it actually happens, it’s gonna be an explosion! I hope you’re having fun in France!
Lovely chapter. I can feel the heat from here!
Loved it, glad to see it progressing.
So wonderfully written. thank you love it and it’s like I’m sitting watching a movie I can just see it all. thank you.
Boy, they both in trouble. To an awkward introduction and avoiding to each other. To this..A “Half naked” Bette is a temptation you can’t resist.
Haaaa Chicken there are LMAO.Cannot wait to see Bette taking Tina , only Tina to the real savannah hey.Love the story, thank you for posting.
Bonjour and thanks for the gift of an unexpected post Kins! And as jp22 noted, props to you for the Androcles reference (LOL). Was that a coincidence or did you intended it? Either way, good thing Tina knew to use rubbing alcohol on Bette instead of betadine (although that would have been funny ;)
Fabulous surprise to see you posting while on holiday. Loved this chapter for many reasons. I could just feel the disappointment for Tina every time Bette avoided her and then when she misunderstood Bette invitation to “go out”. Use plenty of sunscreen and post when you can!
I am so hooked on this story. Nice job with Tina helping Bette with the thorns-now how about the Roses.
SO GOOD, LOVE IT
I love this story.
Hi Kins40 :-) good to see you back and posted another Chapter ;-) Well what can i say but i love this story!? .. It’s such a nice exposure for a beginning of what to come :-p lol… Oops! My bad :-D doesn’t mean I expecting more accident on Bette or any of them of course! I just glad that they are finally having more interaction here :-)
beautiful chapter, thanks for the update ;Denjoy ur stay in Paris :D and come up with more wonderful updates ;)
Woo Hoo seven pages!! What a welcome treat to wake up to on a Saturday morning. Those 2 won’t be able to fight it much longer. Post when you can and enjoy your vacation.
Hiya Kins.. Second rounds here… And i still love it! :-) I really in awe on how do you got such inspiration to write this entertaining lovely story?! Just remember that you are on vacation in France/Paris? (Enjoy your time btw! :-)) Looks like your talent and romantic blood plus romantic atmosphere plus your creativity are getting stronger.. So am I wrong if I expecting something romantic will happen on the coming chapters!? ;-) haha… Anyway, just want to share.. Guess my eyes a bit tired as when I read .. Pretzel?! .. *What the??*… Which when I refocus it is “.. pretty hazel eyes ..” :-p lol silly me, I know.. But I just want to read this again before sleep ;-) he3.. PPS while you can! Thanks for taking time to update/posting even though you are on holiday! :-) enjoy your time and cheers! ;-)
Hope you are enjoying your holiday! As always, I am mesmerized by this story..such beautiful, descriptive writing!
Great story,great update.Thank you.PPS