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Savannah
Story written on August 19, 2011 by kins40.
"Bette, what happened?" It had only taken a quick glance for the young woman to notice the vet’s distress. Setting down the documents she was holding, she was by the brunette’s side in seconds.
Bette did not know what to say, but the tears at this stage had made it over the edge of her eyelids and started rolling down her cheeks. She was so embarrassed and the discomfort was quite unbearable.
"Bette, please…talk to me" Tina pleaded.
"I fell," was all Bette offered as she motioned to move forward towards her destination.
Tina took a look at the vet. Her usually pristine uniform was dirty from soil. Her hands and arms were scratched and cut, mostly minor scratches with a couple which looked more serious. Twigs and dried leaves which seemed to have snapped during the fall, had snagged in the fabric of her polo shirt. Her hair was a mess and her face, where tears ran liberally now, was stained with blood as was her shirt and the front of her combat trousers.
"Where did you get hurt?" Tina asked, effectively blocking the way forward for the injured woman.
"I … well," Bette tried to explain.
"You..?" Tina was now speaking very softly
"I fell ….." she said again and looked down, mortified to admit that the experienced vet that she was, had been outsmarted by a Thompson Gazelle, "I was literally dragged through a hedge backwards…… "
"Okay, and ….?" Tina stepped a little bit closer as the brunette was talking downwards and so quietly that Tina was having a hard time making out her story.
"It was a thorn bush……. Acacia to be precise. I fell backwards."
"Oooooh…… " Tina narrowed her pretty hazel eyes to emphasise the fact that she could relate to what the vet had just experienced. Helena’s lodge boasted a beautiful acacia specimen and no later that the night before she had stopped next to it to marvel at the size of the thorns which adorned to arid climate loving plant. Three inches of fearlessly angry and sharp looking thorns.
It suddenly dawned on her what Bette was trying not to say. Tina took a hold of her elbow, cocking her head to try and make eye contact with the injured woman.
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I like chapters like this. Not to much description, just enough. I loved it. PPVS.
Still loving it kins! Looking forward to your next post…please make it soon ;)
That was rather more romantic than the fable about Androcles and the lion… ;) I’m eager to see how their trip into to field pans out. Thanks for the post. :)
Hey Kins I have yet to comment on this story but thoroughly enjoying it. I love the change of scenery and different roles for B&T.
wow thats pretty intense they want each other badly, when it actually happens, it’s gonna be an explosion! I hope you’re having fun in France!
Lovely chapter. I can feel the heat from here!
Loved it, glad to see it progressing.
So wonderfully written. thank you love it and it’s like I’m sitting watching a movie I can just see it all. thank you.
Boy, they both in trouble. To an awkward introduction and avoiding to each other. To this..A “Half naked” Bette is a temptation you can’t resist.
Haaaa Chicken there are LMAO.Cannot wait to see Bette taking Tina , only Tina to the real savannah hey.Love the story, thank you for posting.
Bonjour and thanks for the gift of an unexpected post Kins! And as jp22 noted, props to you for the Androcles reference (LOL). Was that a coincidence or did you intended it? Either way, good thing Tina knew to use rubbing alcohol on Bette instead of betadine (although that would have been funny ;)
Fabulous surprise to see you posting while on holiday. Loved this chapter for many reasons. I could just feel the disappointment for Tina every time Bette avoided her and then when she misunderstood Bette invitation to “go out”. Use plenty of sunscreen and post when you can!
I am so hooked on this story. Nice job with Tina helping Bette with the thorns-now how about the Roses.
SO GOOD, LOVE IT
I love this story.
Hi Kins40 :-) good to see you back and posted another Chapter ;-) Well what can i say but i love this story!? .. It’s such a nice exposure for a beginning of what to come :-p lol… Oops! My bad :-D doesn’t mean I expecting more accident on Bette or any of them of course! I just glad that they are finally having more interaction here :-)
beautiful chapter, thanks for the update ;Denjoy ur stay in Paris :D and come up with more wonderful updates ;)
Woo Hoo seven pages!! What a welcome treat to wake up to on a Saturday morning. Those 2 won’t be able to fight it much longer. Post when you can and enjoy your vacation.
Hiya Kins.. Second rounds here… And i still love it! :-) I really in awe on how do you got such inspiration to write this entertaining lovely story?! Just remember that you are on vacation in France/Paris? (Enjoy your time btw! :-)) Looks like your talent and romantic blood plus romantic atmosphere plus your creativity are getting stronger.. So am I wrong if I expecting something romantic will happen on the coming chapters!? ;-) haha… Anyway, just want to share.. Guess my eyes a bit tired as when I read .. Pretzel?! .. *What the??*… Which when I refocus it is “.. pretty hazel eyes ..” :-p lol silly me, I know.. But I just want to read this again before sleep ;-) he3.. PPS while you can! Thanks for taking time to update/posting even though you are on holiday! :-) enjoy your time and cheers! ;-)
Hope you are enjoying your holiday! As always, I am mesmerized by this story..such beautiful, descriptive writing!
Great story,great update.Thank you.PPS