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School Night – Part Five
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“Because Eric wasn’t your soul mate.” said Bette, realising that she sounded hopelessly romantic and idealistic.
“You know, for a woman who is so practical in every area of her life you completely lose it when it comes to matters of the heart. How can I really be sure that you’re not going to leave me, meet someone new. You can’t promise that. No one can.
“I guess not, but I can try. All I can tell you is that it’s my intention to love you for a very long time.”
“Well, I guess that’s a good place to start.” said Tina, seeing the look on Bette’s face and knowing that it was better to let her off the hook.
“So, do you want to carry on or should we go back to my place?” asked Bette, hoping that they could move onto something a little easier.
“I don’t think it’s a good idea that we carry on. As you already know, there’s a security guard lingering around here somewhere. I could do without getting caught making love to my girlfriend in my office on top of everything else.”
“Are you sure you’re OK? I’m worried about you. There’s something not quite right. I don’t know what it is but if there is anything I can do to help then you only have to ask. You know that, don’t you?”
“Yeah, I know that. It’s nothing, really. I just have a lot on at the moment, and I guess I just need your support with getting through this rough patch.”
“Oh, so you do still need me then?” said Bette, laughing a bit more freely this time.
“Yeah, I still need you.”
“Well, that’s good to hear. Have you eaten? We could go out for a late dinner if you want?” asked Bette, still not able to shake the sense of concern that she had for Tina.
“I’m not that hungry. I had a little something earlier. Maybe later when we head home we can pick something up on the way.”
“Sure, no problem. I know this is going to sound corny, but are you sure that there is nothing else you want to talk to me about. You know that you can talk to me, about anything, don’t you?”
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So it’s still early enough in Tina and Bette’s relationship that they live in separate places… It’ll be interesting to see if they can move past Tina’s doubts, but I suppose they’d have to really talk first, and Tina doesn’t seem ready or willing to open up. As for Shane… Tina’s not exactly spending time with her either. What kind of relationship will they have if they have no contact? I’ll be waiting to find out anyhow. Thanks for the post and the great read, CG.
As always an interesting and well written update. Of course, I’m looking forward to more.
hope tina dosen’t do anything she’ll be sorry fore down the line.i just have to say also(and i’m sorry)but i never did like shane.pps
Good chapter. Tina need to figure out what she want or she gonna hurt Bette here. Still hope this will be B&T together. Please more, thanks!
Sorry for my late comment. I read on my Blackberry and it doesn’t allow me to log in to comment. You’ve got me wringing a hankerchief in my hands. I had to go to the store to buy a hankerchief because I had already bit my nails to their quicks. “What will Tina do? Oh dear, what will Tina do?” Depending on what you decide, I can always unravel the twisted piece of fabric and use it to wipe my nose as I cry. PPS, no matter where you are going with your story.
You write so well, and your Tina, Bette, and Shane have me on the edge of my seat. Thank you, and I look forward to the next chapter.
your writing is excellent. love the dialogue. this is fantastic. thx
tina def. should either tell bette the truth or stay away until she resolve it…if she keeps it up even longer, it will lead to a disaster…i’m going to watch 506 now, i need some happy moments LOL
Hey CityGal, Interesting chapter. There is love between Bette and Tina. I am not sure if Tina is feeling obligated towards Bette or she is just reevaluating their relation as she tiem with Shane has stirred up some tempting thoughts. I am a firm TiBetter so hope this couple can work things through. Tina and Shane have a great friendship. This is usually the first casualty when Shane gets busy with a gal. Whatever you decide CG, I know it will be brilliantly writtena dn conceived. Thak you for brightening my day. Your Loyal Fan.