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Scotch Town – 2
The room was pitch black. After the door closed behind Bette, there was no light to move with, but neither woman cared. The dark was soothing, and Bette would have gone the whole night in the black, but it had been too long since she had seen Tina’s naked body. She found the switch and smiled softly to the woman at the other end of the room.
Bette began to walk over, each step resonating in the silence.
"I need this," Tina whispered, holding back tears as she felt Bette’s hand in her hair, holding it in a fist. She whimpered quietly, harshly pulled in for a kiss. She had missed this.
Bette didn’t even need to command her; because she guided Tina where she wanted her. The satisfaction she felt from kissing Tina, completely under her control, was so intense she could feel the throbbing between her legs. She felt alive. It had been so long since she was properly aroused, because nothing usual would have the same effect on her libido. Only this woman could get her into a craze of sexual energy.
After pulling on Tina’s hair just hard enough to send her a message, she walked with Tina over to the couch. She loved grabbing Tina’s hair, and especially since she knew how whet it got the blond.
"Get on your knees," Bette ordered, watching Tina obey her and collapse onto the floor directly in front of her.
Nobody could do it quite like Bette. She was so strict and sure of what she was doing, and when Tina had mentioned to others that she liked to submit, they were always so cautious and wary. It was sweet, she figured, but it wasn’t this. No one could live up to Bette.
Bette sat, making herself comfortable with a smile. "Take them off."
Tina smiled at the command, quickly working on Bette’s pants. She had so desperately wanted to go down on her since they had last been together. Everytime she closed her eyes, she saw Bette’s naked form. She imagined the way Bette’s warm clit felt against her tongue. It wouldn’t have taken so long if Bette didn’t insist on tugging her hair while she worked, but it drove Tina on. That jolting reminder made her smirk. She only hoped Bette wouldn’t tease her any further. She wanted all of Bette; she wanted to please her.
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(42 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
Good stuff, GrindRight. I’m into this lifestyle so it’s right up my alley. I wouldn’t have minded (and I bet Tina wouldn’t have either) if Bette was a little rougher! I love the direction you’re taking and hope to read more. Great job. Thank you. :)
Oh…and one more thing. I’m not big Helena with either Bette or Tina fan. She’s okay as one of the gang…I don’t hate her or anything. I just hope you’re going to continue focusing your sexy stories on Bette and Tina!
Wow! Great update. Phew! I love this…! I agree with Vegas513, Bette could be rougher but I also would like to see Tina rougher with Bette :) I’m also not a fan of Helena with either Bette or Tina with the gang is fine. Thank you again for these stories.
I really like your writing. It’s well written and gives a clear picture of the action with both characters’ viewpoints. This scenario presents an interesting dynamic, that in turn creates endless possibilities for these two characters. Bold and couraegeous writing. Do you dare go deeper? Your use of imagery could make many understand things that have been completely foreign to them up to this point. Please keep “grinding it out.” I know I’ll be reading. Thank you for the opportunity to read a;ternative stories.
Pheww,I am tired now. Need to rest.
I just figured the first chapter getting an NC-17 was your way of teasing us.
great job on this story, very erotic!!!
That was almost too hot to read. Almost. HOT, HOT, HOT.
Damn hot hot!
I like that the scenes you write are so different. I especially loved it when Tina was squirming and kind of provoking Bette. It was so awesome that Bette said she wouldn’t because to me, the line is drawn right there. Hot, though.
This was great, please continue! =) I’m not a big Helena fan, even after she turned nice, so I agree with Vegas513, I hope you focus on Bette and Tina! PPS! =)
This is hot…I love the rough stuff. I love the way Bette possesses Tina and how Tina let’s her do it. You are an amazing writer and do a wonderful job of setting the scene.
Love it! Just read through it twice, probably will go back for thirds. So glad she is not done with her yet!
Oh Grind…I liked that. May I have another?