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Scotch Town – 2
Again, Tina moved her tongue broadly over Bette, wildly tasting her with no restrictions. She really enjoyed herself.
"T …" Bette whispered, somewhat maintaining her controlled expression, her breathing rough already. She tried to keep from thinking about Tina in all the dirty, vulnerable positions that were flooding her mind, but the attempt was useless. She got off on those memories, and she knew Tina did too. Her mind began to wander to the time she had bent Tina over the arm rest of the couch, pounding her harder with every stroke. Tina came four times that night.
"Mmm," Tina moaned, snapping Bette out of her memories. The blond was obviously enthralled with her body, and the brunette watched her with a smile, her eyes glazed over with desire. It was all becoming too much. She knew it wouldn’t be long until she felt intense pleasure coursing through her.
Another memory entered her thoughts – the first time she had ever spanked Tina. Her eyes closed at the thought. Tina had crawled onto Bette’s lap with trepedation, but also trust, and once she felt the sting shoot a tingle straight to her clit, she was addicted. It only took one firm slap for her to know she would never tire of the sensation. It hurt, but the warm feeling it gave after was even more powerful, and she thrived on it. Bette remembered that day with a big smile, Tina’s tongue sending her the edge. Just thinking back to the sounds and the feeling of getting Tina off so easily was getting her off as well. Her body was paralyzed with the intense orgasmic sensations shaking through her. "T …" she whispered, feeling the blond lick her harder and faster while her climax swam around her, finally settling and allowing her to move again.
Tina loved making Bette cum. It was almost as amazing as her own orgasm. She continued licking Bette until she felt those strong hands on her arms, pushing her back. She was giddy with the thoughts of what Bette might do to her. It was always inventive, and often something she hadn’t even realized she would like, but Bette knew her better than she knew herself. Bette had a knack for predicting what would get her off, and Tina had always trusted her judgement.
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(42 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
Good stuff, GrindRight. I’m into this lifestyle so it’s right up my alley. I wouldn’t have minded (and I bet Tina wouldn’t have either) if Bette was a little rougher! I love the direction you’re taking and hope to read more. Great job. Thank you. :)
Oh…and one more thing. I’m not big Helena with either Bette or Tina fan. She’s okay as one of the gang…I don’t hate her or anything. I just hope you’re going to continue focusing your sexy stories on Bette and Tina!
Wow! Great update. Phew! I love this…! I agree with Vegas513, Bette could be rougher but I also would like to see Tina rougher with Bette :) I’m also not a fan of Helena with either Bette or Tina with the gang is fine. Thank you again for these stories.
I really like your writing. It’s well written and gives a clear picture of the action with both characters’ viewpoints. This scenario presents an interesting dynamic, that in turn creates endless possibilities for these two characters. Bold and couraegeous writing. Do you dare go deeper? Your use of imagery could make many understand things that have been completely foreign to them up to this point. Please keep “grinding it out.” I know I’ll be reading. Thank you for the opportunity to read a;ternative stories.
Pheww,I am tired now. Need to rest.
I just figured the first chapter getting an NC-17 was your way of teasing us.
great job on this story, very erotic!!!
That was almost too hot to read. Almost. HOT, HOT, HOT.
Damn hot hot!
I like that the scenes you write are so different. I especially loved it when Tina was squirming and kind of provoking Bette. It was so awesome that Bette said she wouldn’t because to me, the line is drawn right there. Hot, though.
This was great, please continue! =) I’m not a big Helena fan, even after she turned nice, so I agree with Vegas513, I hope you focus on Bette and Tina! PPS! =)
This is hot…I love the rough stuff. I love the way Bette possesses Tina and how Tina let’s her do it. You are an amazing writer and do a wonderful job of setting the scene.
Love it! Just read through it twice, probably will go back for thirds. So glad she is not done with her yet!
Oh Grind…I liked that. May I have another?