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Secret Love chapter 4
” I think I should leave” I say
” ”
Total silence came out of her mouth I think that she was so stunned that she couldn’t put two words together
” I have to go” I say
As I walk towards the back door she says
” Wait! Don’t go”
” Why? So I can see you kissing other girls? And not be able to talk to you? ***** you No way I’m outta here” I respond
And Shane says :” If you leave this back yard, it will mean that you never changed Still the coward you always been “
” I’m leaving”
Shane starts crying and yells : “GO ON ***** DO THE BEST THING THAT YOU CAN DO RUN AWAY”
I scream at her : ” YOU DON’T KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT ME! YOU DON’T CARE, YOU NEVER DID you never did”
I start to cry And rush to the front of the house
While I was leaving the backward 30 seconds of thinking is a lot Too much Yes I did a lot of stupid things in my life I never had a relationship that I felt comfortable with, never Shane was the first woman that I felt comfortable enough to be around with She was everything I was looking for Everything a woman would dream to have in a partnerShe made me laugh, cry, think Who knew that I would have actually fell in love with her I turned to see Shane dropping herself on the ground and crying My heart was torn apart I felt like a total lost, a total idiot and a total waste
” Shane?”
(Still crying) She looks at me and lies down on the grass
” Shane, I’m terribly sorry for the pain that I caused you with my stupid reaction earlier on ” ( I walk towards her) A beautiful woman like you shouldn’t cry” I say
As I’m sitting on the grass beside her, she looks at me Is she ever the most beautiful person I ever saw in my life? With my finger I wipe away the tears that are rolling down on her cheeks
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Ummm…excuse my bluntness, but I just wanna know who the fuck the mystery person is; I never handled suspense very well…LOL
At first I thought it was Jenny, but that comment about Jenny probably having told Shane, dispelled that thought. Then I thought, Carmen, but Carmen wasnt around during… circa, Marina.
Post again soon…
Sh*t. Now I’m really confused, I thought it was Jenny. 10 years is a long time its possible that in your story Marina came back in the early years and met Carmen, or you have a new character in store for us. Great job.
so far we have seen jenny, alice and marina. since its fiction it my not matter if carmen was there when marina was. but for some strange reason i think that this mystery person is a new character. the person is too shy to be bette or tina. but then again why not dana. hummm…
RIGHT ON!!!!!!!!!! ]:P