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Secret Love chapter 5
Previously I turned my head And when I do she is standing there right beside me We’re face to face Her lips are at 2 inches of mine and she kisses me The softness of her lips, her breath is so warm Her touch is so soothing Calming She kisses me Like I never been kissed beforeA warm wind blows I feel strange mix of hate, love and passion Somehow I’ll never forget this feeling ******************************************************************************************** Suddenly it strikes me, I take a step backwards and I look into her eyes. What does this means? Is she responding positively to my confessions? Is she planning a sweet revenge? Hummm It’s not her style But could it be Because I don’t understand why she wants revenge I just opened up and poured my heart out, and it’s something I never do I just found the courage to confess everything to her I know I broke her heart and I made her suffer But wasn’t I true enough to her by confessing everything Everything I had in mind for the past ten years She looks at me and I can see the fear in her eyes The fear that I will leave Again Without saying anything ” What’s wrong Shane?” ” Nothing I just find your reaction weird I just want you to hold me” She says I held her as much as I could I just don’t want to let her go now I really don’t want to let her go But I know that she will be back into the house in 30 seconds with this other girl And I won’t be able to stand it Because I know myself And I know that I will leave this place without looking back With the feeling that I’ve accomplished a lot, but without reaching my goal And that will suck Because I would hate myself And I would have to walk away and never come back never again And that would hurt me more than the ten years it took me to face her and confess ” I have to go to the bathroom I have to figure out what is happening ” She says ” Ok, you know that I could leave, and you could come over in the morning if you want to talk more about this” I say
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i love the story but im have a hard time understanding who the other person is , is it jenny or carmen or someone eles well i still love ur storys there so kool bye allison
I started out totally psyched; the suspense of not knowing who the character was. But now, 5 chapters later, and still not knowing the mystery woman, is pushing me to the tired-of-waiting point.
I dont know how to say it in a nice way, but I am starting to get bored with the story.
MMMMM.. SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!! (a finger on the nose)
LOVE THE NEW CHARACTER!!!!!!!!!!
I wouldn’t be Carmen, Could be Jenny. Everyone loves a mystery. I do. Loving this. Thanks
I’m enjoying your story, can’t wait until the next installment. I already like this character, should be interesting to see the dynamics between she & Shane.
Hey, guys.. Did you really read previous post? This mysterious woman said “You knew it was me because Jenny told you…”….. Mel! It’s your story! you can do anything to your creature and make any past between she and Shane. Your fic is just my pleasure~