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“Did you tell her about, well, your haircut?” Shane asked grinning. Jenny shook her head cautiously for a minute
“Yeah, she was really good about it. Though Tim really took care of the whole telling part,” Jenny explained.
“Ok, Tim?” Will asked stopping in mid wash.
“My um, ex-husband,” Jenny finsihed. Will shook her head for a moment and then smiled.
“You girls just get more and more complicated,” she smirked. The group laughed.
“So what were you in New York for, Will,” Jenny asked unable to cure her curiosity. Carmen dried a dish and eyed Will closely. Will thought carefully for a moment concentrating on the suds in the sink.
“Visiting a friend,” Will responded. Shane touched Will’s arm breifly and Will jerked away.
“Whoa, you ok?” Shane asked.
“Fine, sorry. Must be all the tea,” Will chuckled. She had had 8 cups of tea during dinner and had felt she had had all the tea in china.
“Was this frined still alive?” Carmen asked absent mindly. She stared intently at Will and Will stared intently back.
“No,” Will answered puzzled. Shane then stared at Carmen inquistively. How’d she know that?
“I’m sorry, Will, who died?” Jenny inquired softly.
Will broke her gaze with Carmen and refocused on Jenny. “Um, my mother. Excuse me please,” Will said and walked out of the kitchen.
“*****, Carmen,” Shane chastised. Carmen thre the towel on the bench.
“What? Why does she think she has to be so mysterious anyway, who cares if she was visiting her mother’s grave. I visit my dad’s don’t I? What makes her think she’s so special,” Carmen answered back in angried whispers.
“Well obviously she has a harder time dealing with it than you do, Carmen, so just chill,” Shane responded. The three of them sat in silence untill Jeny got up from her chair and walked through the kitchen doorway.
Officer Bryant watched as the lab specialist went over the glass. The swab inside was placed on a microscope and soon being magnifie onto a screen where white coats peered at it closely. A tube swished around and tunred differant colours before one of the white coats came out into the hall. Bryant hated white coats. Never had the answer you wanted and always took an hour to give you the one you did.
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What happened to this story? Is that it? It’s been almost a year.
Great update, but what’s wrong wit’ my gurl Carmen. hope she’s alright“`. Please post soon.
Superb update! yeah, I wonder what is wrong with Carmen?
Great update aussie. a lot going on in your story. very interesting
Like the story… :D whats up with Carmen ??? more soon, kay?
WOW AUS U DID IT AGAIN!!…GGGREEEAT UPDATEJ..IT’S SO OBVIOUS YET SO NOT!!..WOW(HAROLD CARVINGTON..WHO KNEW!?!?&WHY!?!?)..I KNEW PEGGY WAS A BITCH BUT DID SHE DESERVE 2 CROKE?…I HOPE KIT GETS BETTTER?!?..I REALLY LIKE THE PASAGE FROM THE LIL RED BIBLE…I HOPE B&T DUN GET 2 FUKED^…I’M VERRRRRRRRY HAPPPPI BOUT HELENA&ALIICE(FFFFFINALLY!..ALICE DUN SEEM SO PSYCHOTIC WHEN WITH HELENA:))………HONEST AS U ALREDD KNO I STILL NOT BIG ON THE (*cough*yuk*cough*)DANA&LARA THING THOUGH….(HOW CAN DANE NOT C AL STILL PISSED BOUT IT….DANA THINKS THERE RELATIONSHIP HAS CIRCUM THE PAST – I THINK NOT.BEST FRIENDS BCUM LUVERS. – ALICE ENDED UP BEING THE 1 WHO TOOK ALOT OF DAMAGE TO THE HEART.NOT DANA:(..IT TAKES ALOT OF WRK 2 GET BAK THAT PREVIOUS FRIENSHIP)…YA I’M ACTUALLI HAPPI DANA’S PTS DUN LIKE LARA.(BAD I KNO..BUT I RELLI JUS DUN DIG THE CHEF(GRR)…BUT FROM WHAT I HEAR IN SEASON 3 EVENTUALLI DANA&LARA TURN 2 SHIT&DANA WANTS ALICE BAK…SO I APPLAUD U ON UR OPTIMISTIC VIEW OF THIS RELATIONSHIP)…I THOUGHT THAT WAS GREAT.. “DANA. A PHARBANKS DOES NOT DATE THE HELP” – BUUURN!(TRUE WRDS I THINK DANE SHOULD TAKE IN 2 CONSIDERATION)…YET HER LYING 2 HER WOMAN IS GUNNA GET HER IN 2 SUM TROUBLE(TSK. TSK. TSK. DANA – BAD GURL)..ME GURL CARMEN HAD A PAIN IN HER CHEST(IT’S CALLED JELOUSY(ugly creature)&THE ANTIDOTE CARMEN IS GET OOOOVER UR SELF!!!) – I HOPE SHE GET OVER HER SELF QUUUUIK!..THNK U 4 WRITING AS ALWAYS AUSSIE, DUN STOP…WAITING 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER…Post so0N..