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“Well?” Officer Bryant questioned. The white coat shoved it’s hands into it’s pockets.
“Well, it was covered all over the glass, like you expected. It would have been clear and relatively harmless but the amount was surely what did it. The alchohol would of covered the smell of the stuff, but it’s pretty unmistakable especially in a pharmaceudical form,” the white coat explained.
“A simple yes or no would do,” Officer Bryant rolled his eyes.
“Well, then, yes,” the white coat answered snidely.
Will sat on the front porch. Jenny grasped on to a bean as she watched her not move. She sat slowly down on the step and made sure she kept a gap between them. She feels more comfortable with space, Jenny thought. I’ll give her space.
“So,” Jenny started, “I know you usually talk about this stuff with Shane, but, uh I’m more than willing to listen.” Jenny scolded herself, sound eager won’t you? Will shifted a little.
“Or we could just sit here and look at the street lamps,” Jenny went on her knees together and her hands jutting off her lap. More silence. “Uh Carmen is just a little anxious. She’s going home for a few days to see her family. They have a memorial every year for her dad, he’s dead too you know,” Jenny went on. STUPID! Why did you bring that up? Now she’s going to be so pissed off for bringing up dead parents.
“Oh,” Will answered. What, Jenny thought? She answered, quick say something.
“Yeah her dad died in a motorcycle accident when she was a kid. *pause* He was a shaman or something like that,” Jenny went on. She was talking to her and thi was all Jenny focused on.
“A shaman, really?” Will asked starring ahead. Jenny shook her head.
“Yeah, like a witch doctor or something, I uh am not really sure,” Jenny responded balancing her head on her hand and staring at Will’s profile.
“So, uh, what was your mom like?” Jenny inquired before she could stop herself. “Um you don’t uh have to answer that,” Jenny caught quickly.
“It’s ok, Jenny. She was nice. Very quiet. My father says I look just like her,” Will started and ended in a whisper.
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What happened to this story? Is that it? It’s been almost a year.
Great update, but what’s wrong wit’ my gurl Carmen. hope she’s alright“`. Please post soon.
Superb update! yeah, I wonder what is wrong with Carmen?
Great update aussie. a lot going on in your story. very interesting
Like the story… :D whats up with Carmen ??? more soon, kay?
WOW AUS U DID IT AGAIN!!…GGGREEEAT UPDATEJ..IT’S SO OBVIOUS YET SO NOT!!..WOW(HAROLD CARVINGTON..WHO KNEW!?!?&WHY!?!?)..I KNEW PEGGY WAS A BITCH BUT DID SHE DESERVE 2 CROKE?…I HOPE KIT GETS BETTTER?!?..I REALLY LIKE THE PASAGE FROM THE LIL RED BIBLE…I HOPE B&T DUN GET 2 FUKED^…I’M VERRRRRRRRY HAPPPPI BOUT HELENA&ALIICE(FFFFFINALLY!..ALICE DUN SEEM SO PSYCHOTIC WHEN WITH HELENA:))………HONEST AS U ALREDD KNO I STILL NOT BIG ON THE (*cough*yuk*cough*)DANA&LARA THING THOUGH….(HOW CAN DANE NOT C AL STILL PISSED BOUT IT….DANA THINKS THERE RELATIONSHIP HAS CIRCUM THE PAST – I THINK NOT.BEST FRIENDS BCUM LUVERS. – ALICE ENDED UP BEING THE 1 WHO TOOK ALOT OF DAMAGE TO THE HEART.NOT DANA:(..IT TAKES ALOT OF WRK 2 GET BAK THAT PREVIOUS FRIENSHIP)…YA I’M ACTUALLI HAPPI DANA’S PTS DUN LIKE LARA.(BAD I KNO..BUT I RELLI JUS DUN DIG THE CHEF(GRR)…BUT FROM WHAT I HEAR IN SEASON 3 EVENTUALLI DANA&LARA TURN 2 SHIT&DANA WANTS ALICE BAK…SO I APPLAUD U ON UR OPTIMISTIC VIEW OF THIS RELATIONSHIP)…I THOUGHT THAT WAS GREAT.. “DANA. A PHARBANKS DOES NOT DATE THE HELP” – BUUURN!(TRUE WRDS I THINK DANE SHOULD TAKE IN 2 CONSIDERATION)…YET HER LYING 2 HER WOMAN IS GUNNA GET HER IN 2 SUM TROUBLE(TSK. TSK. TSK. DANA – BAD GURL)..ME GURL CARMEN HAD A PAIN IN HER CHEST(IT’S CALLED JELOUSY(ugly creature)&THE ANTIDOTE CARMEN IS GET OOOOVER UR SELF!!!) – I HOPE SHE GET OVER HER SELF QUUUUIK!..THNK U 4 WRITING AS ALWAYS AUSSIE, DUN STOP…WAITING 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER…Post so0N..