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Sex with no emotional entanglement. chpt 11
Bette: ” T…I don’t think that’s a good idea”
Tina: ” Bette…I got this ok”
Bette: ” ok…ok”
Bette pulls up in front of Tina’s…
Tina: “thanks alot…your a good friend”
Bette: ” your welcome”
Tina looks at Bette and smiles…She plants one on the cheek before leaving the car…Bette watches her enter the house before pulling off…
Tina’s house…1 hour later…
Eric enters the house pissy drunk…Tina sits in the chair in the darkness…She cuts on the light…
Eric: “hey…babe”
Tina: ” save it…where were you?”
Eric: ” I told you I had a late meeting tonight that I had to attend”
Tina: ” liar you were with another woman”
Eric: ” I was not…Tina I would never cheat on you”
Tina: ” bullshit…your just gonna stand there and lie to me like it’s nothing”
Eric: ” Tina I swear I’m telling the truth..”
Tina: ” yeah…well what if I told you that I had proof?”
Eric: ” I beg your pardon?”
Tina: ” you heard me”
Eric stands there in silence…Tina stands there with her hands on her hip and the recorder behind her back…
Eric: ” so you have proof…show me”
Tina: ” I thought you’d never ask”
Tina revealed the recorder…She replayed the tape…Eric face turned pale…He steps closer…
Eric: ” baby…I’m-”
Tina: ” don’t say a word…just grab you ***** and go”
Eric: ” Tina please I’m sorry I never meant to hurt you”
Tina: ” I don’t know what I was thinking…I should have left it where it left off when you left…But no I wanted to make this work and I wanted to give you another chance…And then you walk in here with a cheap as eight hundred dollar ring and expect for me to forget about everything that you put me through you selffish sun of a *****…I hate you you ***** scumb…Five ***** years I wasted when I was better off without you…All you’ve been was a ***** setback…Get your ***** and get the ***** out”
Tina picks up his bags and tosses them at him one by one…She walks towards the door…Eric grabs her…
Eric: ” Tina wait…it doesn’t have to end like this”
Tina: ” it’s over…I want you to leave”
Eric: ” please baby let me explain”
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(44 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
Such a tease…leaving me hanging like that. I have a feeling Bette will be the one to stop in the next chapter. Keep it comin’!
Tina with a gun?? AMAZING..lol..i love your strong and sweet Tina..and sweet Bette..lol..now bring it on some love..or your going just tease us???..great as always Vakkav thanks :o)
Feeling hot hot hot, bring on the next chapter
Like pandora007 I like the vision of Tina with a gun :o))Bette has to stop this – it’s so not the rigth time. They are way too upset.
Yeah, that’s what I want to see. Thanks for the post.
Good chapter. Looking forward to what’s next. Thanks for posting.
singing – tina with a gun lalalala. good chappy. would like to see whats next but only if its someone putting a stop to it. someone may get hurt. thanks.
TO BE WHAT????? CONTINUED????? OH NO MAM……U CANT DO THIS TO US…….COME ON…….WE WERE ALMOST ON FIRE………AND U STOMPED US…….HOW BOUT ANOTHER TONIGHT????
Yes! it’s not the right time for Loving they need to know each other fist right! LOL! but each up to you great update Thanks!!!
Oh please you can’t leave us like this. Damn Tina with the gun is hot and awesome, Eric is stupid ass. Bette is sweet and amazing and now let see some hot stuff coming. Post soon please, thanks!
Things need to cool down before they heat up! Hopefully Bette can politely cool things off until a more proper time comes.
Tina weilding a gun :O amazing please post again soon :) fantastic story :)
vakkav..I am just like the others..trying to picture T with that gun.lmao. I hope they have the kiss and Bette ONLY holds her.
Now how is a girl to sleep after being teased like that! I’m blaming you every time I yell at work tomorrow, you can’t just leave a girl hanging like that it’s just not nice!!! ;)
she should have shot him lol!!!!!!! bette will stop tina because she knows that she is not ready!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow, tina doesn’t waist words…i’m glad eric is gone, what an a**…so what is tina up to now?
tina with a gun, Bette crying jeez it’s like the twilight zone! I think that Bette needs to stop what’s happening. and when she does, she’s gonna suprize Tina and herself. but then again. maybe it’s part of tina’s plan. keep writing. I’ll be reading.
Love your story! Post real soon, don’t keep me waiting.
no no no! this is not the way for the first time to be, Tina is hurting so she need comfort right now that’s all, she needs to figure out exactly what she wants then if Bette is it, then they could to the next level, Bette is always being pulled in by Tina and seems this chapter proves yet again, but omg the wire thing hahahaha was it really that serious? lol