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Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part19
Carmen initiated the kiss which was slow but then grew with raw heat that both of them had been trying to force down since the start of the bet, two days ago. Shane smiled into Carmen’s lips sexily, something she knew the other girl couldn’t resist.
The track switched to Malchik ***** on the T.A.T.U. CD and both girls lost it. As the first plucks of the throbbing guitar grew, so did the throbbing between their legs.
Carmen held the sides of Shane’s face and swung her knee over the opposite size of her so she was straddling her lap. She kissed her feverishly their tongues duelling still as they opened their mouths to breathe. Carmen panted into Shane’s lips and shifted a bit on her lap, the friction doing amazing things to both of them. Shane groaned and dove in for another kiss as Carmen’s eyes shut uncontrollably and she practically became an inactive participant in the kiss as she moved her hips again.
Shane growled in pleasure as Carmen’s tongue darted out to her bottom lip nipping it almost urgently. Shane opened her mouth obediently as Carmen’s hands ran up and down her sides. Then, they were both pulled out of their daze, completely against their will.
As they were nearing the back Drew looked in the rear-view mirror and saw them both going at it. She smiled and nudged Cherish who looked back and then shared her smile. They both watch the two for a few more seconds before bursting out into loud whoops and cat-calls.
Carmen groaned and pulled away from Shane reluctantly. They stared into each other eye’s for a deep, heated moment, before Carmen crawled off of Shane and sat with her arm slung over the door, pouting adorably. Shane smiled at her girlfriend then looked at Drew, their eyes connected in the rear-view mirror and Drew winked knowingly. Shane blushed and her eyes drifted to Cherish who was blindly trying to sing to the Russian song. Shane chuckled and turned her attention back to Carmen, her finger’s lazily grazed her cheek and Carmen’s eyes drifted to Shane’s. They were content to just stare at each other until the finally found a parking spot.
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Drew and Shane bobbed on their boards as they stared out at the horizon. Carmen and Cherish had refused to come surfing. Nobody had known that Shane was an experienced surfer, until she held the rented short board in her hands and started jogging out to the shore’s edge. All three girls had stared in aw, it was an entrancing site as the obvious grommet dove in with her board. Drew had boarded a few times before, but she didn’t have near the amount of naturalness and talent that was already obvious, that Shane possessed.
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Woah Shane the surfer getting Carmen all hot.I love reading what that bet’s doing to them.Post more soon please.
wow. I can’t for the next update. post soon.
how can i NOT update when you guys leave comment’s like that?
that was hott i love this ,u rock thanks bye
wow. if i could speak spanish id be mumbling incoherently too :P that was hot! plz post agen soon!
funny
Too f#^%ing cool. Too funny how they were all speechless. Glad the bet is driving them nuts.
Our YODA can do anything, she has had a life time of living in a few short years. thanks
that was so cool love your story from the very begining but I will like to see more shane&carmen dirving them self´s nuts and please post soon love your story…
to tell you the truth, i check everyday to see if you update your story. It’s like the only thing keeping me sane while the l word is not on.
i love this story, well done dude and keep it up