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Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part20
Chapter 49
“Babey?”
“Mmm?”
“What do you want for dinner?” Shane yelled from the kitchen around a mouthful of rice-crispy square. Carmen’s feet padded into the kitchen and Shane turned her body so her girlfriend wouldn’t berate her for ruining her dinner.
“Hmmm,” She purred thoughtfully before unexpectedly putting her arms around Shane’s waist and spinning her around. Shane looked down at Carmen, surprised, as Carmen smiled up at her mischievously.
“I think” She leaned in for a kiss and ‘accidently’ moved her knee feverishly close to Shane’s already throbbing groin. “You.” She decided, her voice already thick with passion. Shane let the kiss go on for quite along time before she felt Carmen’s hands on her waist, start to slide down her body.
“Carmen we can’t,” Shane almost gasp, trying to catch her breath as she too, was now smiling deviously.
Carmen stuck out her bottom lip as far as it could go and made that amazing whining noise she always did. And it had the same affect on Shane that it always did she totally melted.
“Well if you want to, why the ***** am I stopping you? I didn’t want this bet in the first place,” Shane said seductively, leaning in and crushing her lips on Carmen’s with everything she had.
She drove her tongue into Carmen’s unbearably hot mouth agains, lapping up her moisture, but there was no moisture. It tasted- funny. In her mouth. It was dry. Almost like cloth.
And then Shane fell off the couch.
Her eyes opened up immediately and she groaned. Another restless night. She looked back up at the couch and then down at the pillow in her arms. It had a wet spot on it. Ew. She had made out with her pillow. She spat lightly to her left side to get the fuzz balls out and cussed before pulling herself up onto the lumpy couch.
She was just about to close her eyes and drift back to sleep when she heard the footsteps, padding, just like in her dream. She opened one eye and saw Carmen’s face peering down at her through the darkness. Shane smiled and close both eyes tiredly. Carmen was wearing her supah luvah costume and it always made Shane hot, she should have known better.
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(45 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
loved this chapter!!! nice update. already cant wait for the next one.
The freak
Love your story. I just love carmen and shane. Update soon please lol.
I love your story, it always makes my day when I see that you’ve posted so please, please, please, post soon.
okay, that was just HOT!!
so so good. cant wait for the next update!
please post this is my faouvorite sharmen!!!
hi bum! i read ur comment! :p and you’re right. sucha funny and sweet story.. wonder why it’s been at that.. sighh..
dude pleaze finish this fic…wanna kno who stole shanes journal not to mention the hotness that is sharmen…pleeeeeeeeze come back!!!!
I reeeally freakin love this story, they’re so cute when they’re trying to resist each other. My favorite part of this story .. when shane says “i know… bitches.” It made me laugh b/c I say that all the time, I’m like “Somebody drank all the apple juice. bitches.” And I’m sure you don’t care … but um, I love the story either way, keep the fab updates coming!
Loccccccccccccccve Shane and Carmen together they are so cute together/ thanks
Such a sweet laugh…after all the “hotness” that was and should’ve/ could’ve been…Thanks
I love this story… I want more more… This Shane and Carmen you have in mind is just so cute and so adorable. And Happy.
Damm too cute shane & carmen are too cute!!please update soon this a greate fic ..and I think the one that stolld shanes book was sherry or another crazy …
yay
lol i love the i walked in on shane and carmen getting dirrrty club!
Damn those interruptions! That was funny as hell, especially how everyone was picking on them. It was great, post soon.
That was great. I love your story. Can’t wait for the next update.
love your writing! (^0^)/ keep the updates coming in!!
loved this update, as usual. seriously love this fic. and yeh i was also a huge fan of the dirrrty club. hah ohh i so cannot wait for the next bit.
-kb
I usually don’t leave any comments, but I have to tell you something about this story… it’s ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! :P
can’t wait to read the next update…
AH! I’m going through withdrawls, I’ve reread this soo many times, I hope an update comes soon! I know you’re busy, but I can’t wait!
thats some very graphic writing…. muy kudos***loving it keep it upUpUP!!!
Okay so I decided to try and read all the Chapter’s before commenting, but since right now this is the last one you posted I’ll comment now, I can’t wait for more, This is probably the best fic I’ve read and besides I love “Sharmen” :D Pleaase Post Again Soon, or whenever you can. I know I’ll be waiting… and kinda dying at the same time.. haha.. if ya know what I mean. lol, jk… kinda.
I doubt anyone will read this, but three years later and I still love this story. Fuckin amazing.