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    Sharmen: I Gotta Go…

    Story written on June 19, 2005 by CasperFanFirst.
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    This is a Shane and Carmen fic. Have a good idea of where this is going, so plan on some twists and turns… but other then that, just enjoy!

    Carmen wanted to yell at herself for letting Shane do those things to her, to her head. *****, she mumbled, just loud enough for Shane to hear her, the other woman ‘waking’ at her words. She let go of Carmens hand and let her walk away.

    The club beats where pulsing, the strobe lights casting a magical light over everything. She watched her elbow her way through the crowd, something about her caught Shanes eye, as if she couldnt look away to save her life. She watched her push some humongous butch out of her way to get to the door, almost starting a brawl in her wake. Shane couldnt help it, she chuckled to herself. Her date was pulling at her elbow, some irritating blonde that she had planned on ***** that night, but then Carmen had shown up.

    Why did that Latina insist on sticking around? Why did she always manage to lift Shanes determinedly downward head every time she walked into a room. Shut up please, Shane told the blonde as she babbled in her ear. She thought a little more. Suddenly, Shane wasnt amused anymore. She was really, really pissed off. She hated how her moods changed so quickly around that women.

    I gotta go, She mumbled more to the surrounding air then to her lady friend. The girl huffed so Shane turned distractedly and kissed her on the cheek, eyes following Carmens retreating figure. She followed after her, pushed the doors of the club open wide and blinked as the strobe lights faded, and street lights came into view. She looked left, she looked right, she couldnt see her. Carmen had managed to vanish into thin air, leaving the memory of their closeness behind. Shane grunt and kicked a nearby garbage can. The bouncer cocked an eyebrow at her, she glared at him and decided it was time to leave.

    She got into her beat up truck and tore out of the parking lot. This girl was really working her nerves. Who did she think she was? She was just an easy lay to Shane an easy lay. She kept repeating that to herself as she drove. Her brain didnt exactly know where she was going, but her feet and hands seemed to as she turned here and there. By the time she had finished driving she looked up, she was outside the Planet, but it would be closed by now. She shook her head, wondering where her brain cells were hiding. She had to get her ***** together. She moaned in a tired, frustrated state and leaned on the steering wheel, draping her body over it carelessly. The horn honked, so she shifted and laid there, thinking.

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    6. Corrections of your Spanish (I’m guessing that you used a translator and didn’t even take the time investigating):

      ‘Oh God. Come on, it’ll be fine my little neurotic worrier!’ in Spanish will be: “Oh Dios!. Vamos, estará bien mi pequeña neurótica preocupada”.

      Second, in this line: “Gall me Mercedes! Gome in, gome in!” is so wrong in so many levels… Spanish people tend to remark the “C”

      “This is Shane, hermanos… Yo! Atención, opinión hola usted fuckers!”
      I don’t know what you were trying to say here.

      “¿Su amigo atractivo tiene un novio?” in Spanish will be: “Tu amiga es atractiva, tiene novio?”

      “¡Infierno ningún usted!” (No idea what you were trying to say)
      “Ella está de límites” right way: “Ella esta fuera de limites”.

      “You’re my niño now!”
      Niño= boy
      Niña= girl

      “Carmella!” Names are the same in Spanish and Eglish, to say more, Carmen is a Spanish name. “What about that Paublo” Pablo will be the right way.

      For my Spanish credentials (so that you don’t think that I don’t know nothing), I was born and raised in Argentina and I’m a Spanish Literature professor (also an English Literature professor). If you ever need help just write, I’ll be glad to offer a hand and stop people from mangling my language.

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