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Sharmen: I Gotta Go…
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Raul wanted to know if you were seeing anyone And And I said you were off limits. Then I called him a pig, Carmen said and winked as they walked to their seats. Shane laughed quietly and looked at Raul from the corner of her eye. He had obviously lost interest quickly and was now busying himself in the food.
Shane felt someone glaring at her as she sat down and turned to look at Mariah. She was staring at her as if she was the spawn of the devil. Shane looked over her shoulder to make sure Mariah was actually looking at her, but in fact, she was. She tried to ignore it the whole time they ate dinner, but it wasnt easy.
Talk flowed freely, Shane told Mercedes where she grew up and the fact that she had no mother or father. At this Mercedes exclaimed, Youre my nia now! Shane blushed profusely and thanked her. The conversation only got uncomfortable when Carmen decided it would be fun to sexually excite Shane under the table.
She stroked her inner thigh lightly and smiled politely at her mom as she yammered on over something Carmen had long tuned out. Shane tensed and froze in mid bite. She glared at Carmen, willing her to stop. But she wouldnt make eye contact with Shane. Dont forget to chew, Carmen murmured, barely moving her lips. Only Shane heard and she immediately continued with the spoon to her lips. Shanes hand also disappeared under the table, swatting at Carmens and trying to pry her soft fingers from her thigh. Instead she ended up gripping her hand but not moving it as it stroked up and down, up and down. Getting closer and closer to her crotch. Shane was on fire, it took all she had to keep her eyes at half mast.
Carmella! What about that Paublo boy, from church. He really likes you, I s-think youd make a great couple. You dont want to spend your whole life alone with a bunch of ca-st (cats) do you? I never see jou with any romantic possibilities, Mercedes said, pushing some taco salad here and there on her plate. Carmens hand froze right between Shanes legs and she pursed her lips, eyes threatening to spill with laughing tears at any moment. She bowed her head, hair covering her face, body shaking lightly. Only Shane knew she was laughing as the rest of the present family leaned over their plates and cocked an eyebrow.
Shane tried to be polite as Carmens body shook with mirth. Only a small quivering sound could be heard from her throat, but then Carmen lost all hope and threw down her spoon, laying back in the chair and throwing her head back to laugh. Shane lost it and also started in on the giddy laughter. Mercedes rolled her eyes and shook her head, muttering something in Spanish then saying clearly, Girls these days! This seemed to send the two into another fit as Shane shut her eyes and tried to close her mouth, her body wracking with heavy laughter, and Carmen wiped tears from her eyes.
Her brother and sisters shook their heads in confusion and turned back to their food while her mom got up and started to clear plates. By the time the two where cleared, half the dishes had been put away. As they turned off the sink and headed back to the living room to watch TV, Shane bumped Carmens shoulder to get her attention and whispered, Whats with your sister? Justise? No, Mariah, she hasnt stopped giving me dirty looks all day! Carmen looked alarmed but then smiled at the realization and said, Oh! Dont worry, Mariah acts like that towards everyone she doesnt have a lot of friends. Shanes brows knitted together but Carmen laughed so she shook her head and they both took a seat on the burnt orange couch.
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I love it:):):) Please write soon , you are making Sharmen fans really happy!!!5 stars , you deserve it!!!!!!!!
yes as nichya said, we need a fic like this, and more, -huggles- thanks so much
yes as nichya said, we need a fic like this, and more, -huggles- thanks so much
Oh this fan fic is awesome. I love Shane, she rocks
keep going! keep going!
Corrections of your Spanish (I’m guessing that you used a translator and didn’t even take the time investigating):
‘Oh God. Come on, it’ll be fine my little neurotic worrier!’ in Spanish will be: “Oh Dios!. Vamos, estará bien mi pequeña neurótica preocupada”.
Second, in this line: “Gall me Mercedes! Gome in, gome in!” is so wrong in so many levels… Spanish people tend to remark the “Câ€
“This is Shane, hermanos… Yo! Atención, opinión hola usted fuckers!”
I don’t know what you were trying to say here.
“¿Su amigo atractivo tiene un novio?†in Spanish will be: “Tu amiga es atractiva, tiene novio?”
“¡Infierno ningún usted!” (No idea what you were trying to say)
“Ella está de lÃmites” right way: “Ella esta fuera de limites”.
“You’re my niño now!â€
Niño= boy
Niña= girl
“Carmella!†Names are the same in Spanish and Eglish, to say more, Carmen is a Spanish name. “What about that Paublo†Pablo will be the right way.
For my Spanish credentials (so that you don’t think that I don’t know nothing), I was born and raised in Argentina and I’m a Spanish Literature professor (also an English Literature professor). If you ever need help just write, I’ll be glad to offer a hand and stop people from mangling my language.
Thanks for the Sharmen fic, it is much needed around here!!!!
Yeah finally!! Please continue :)
*jumps up and down and kisses you* THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS FIC , IT’S GREAT!!!!5 STARS:)Write more soon ,please…….
Really cute story, I’m gonna giva you 5 points, but pleeeeease do something about the grammar.
not bad
Well done. I like the flow. Hope you keep up with it there is a disapointing amout of Shane and Carmen fics around here.