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She Gets Me — Chapter 4
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“Um.Tinasorry but (cough) I can’t breathe,” she said in the cloud of dust.
“Sorry babe,” Tina chuckled, “I guess no one has been here in awhile.” She smiled, jumped off the bed and tore off the sheets, “I’ll just throw these in the laundry and we can make something to eat while we wait.” Tina went off to try to sweep and clean while Bette surveyed the rest of the house.
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“There are bugs,” said Bette as they ate some spaghetti in the kitchen.
“That’s why we have the repellent and the citronella candle,” said Tina.
“Great.”
“Look you’re tired, why don’t I start a fire for us?” said Tina. She pulled Bette into the living room and licked Bette’s ear. She pulled out a large blanket from a wooden box and lay it in front of the fireplace. She pulled out the now clean comforter and lay it on top of the blanket. She took a few logs, paper and kindling and made quick work of starting the fire. She wrapped her arms around Bette and they sat staring at the yellow flames flickering.
“Now what?” asked Bette.
“What do you mean?” Replied Tina.
“Well, what do we do?”
“We could make out,” said Tina.
“No offense but I’m still recovering from the dust,” replied Bette. She picked at the musty blanket and stared at the large holes made by a moth. She felt like she was sitting in a pile of moldy dust.
“We could sing a song,” said Tina. Bette glares at Tina, “Okay, or not, well, we could relax and you could snuggle closer and sit down between my legs and we could cuddle.” Bette scooted over and sat between Tina’s legs next to the fire.
“I’m bored,” said Bette.
“Come on Bette, try to relax,” said Tina.
“Why is it so loud?”
“That would be the humming of the insects and the frogs by the lake.”
“So, now what?”
“Can you see the stars through the bay windows?”
“Yeah,”
“So, what do you think?”
“I guess they are prettybut it’s so ***** loud.”
“Try not to think about it and focus on the crackling of the fire, in a minute the fire will be so loud you won’t here the bugs, or I could just close the door, but it’s so warm tonight,” said Tina.
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Teelufan – This is a great follow-up to the grape chapter. Keep up the great writing…love this story.
great update!! i wonder what that noise on the porch was!!
That was funny shit. Bette is a city girl, shes not use to that outdoors stuff. I felt her pain. I wonder who that is on the pourch that heard them. Damn good stuff, please post soon.
lmao. Just how I would picture Bette camping. hee hee. post soon
LMFAO! Great update, I wonder, have you ever had sex in awkward places? Will Bette survive the great outdoors? Please don’t say that was a relative, let the noice be one of the girls. Thank you!
Bette in the woods funny !!! that better not be alice at the door
what was the noise what was the noise? i can’t wait to find out what happens next, great story!
Haha Bette is such a city girl. She was so cute though, kinda like a little kid. I wonder who’s on the porch hmmm. Can’t wait for more!
Who knew Tina was so “outdoorsy!” I think Bette will start to like camping more if they keep this up,LOL! I got such a kick out of this chapter! Thanks!
I was LMAO at Bette, being scared in the woods, ha, ha!! Now who’s at the door …. some family of Tina’s I assume??? And the drama begins, LOL!!!
Damn so fucking hot and so fucking funny about Bette go to cambin, ok and who the hell at the porch or something else. Post soon please, thanks!
Cant picture Bette in a rustc old cabin in the woods with all the bugs owls and other things.We have a cabin and at nigh you can see all the stars and it so quite you can hear everything I love the quiteness. THANKS
I thought the grape thing was sexy, this was hot, but now im wondering who the hell is outside