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She Gets Me — Chapter 4
“Whoo hoo,” came a loud noise. Bette sat straight up glaring. “Shhhhhoney” that’s just a bird or owl,” said Tina.
They sat staring at the flames for a few minutes.
“Sorry,” mumbled Bette as she leaned back.
“What’s that darling?” asked Tina.
“SorryI’ve been so disagreeable, I’m just not that comfortable in cabins or camping,” said Bette as she ran her fingers through Tina’s blond hair and lightly caressed her stomach.
“It’s okay honey, I know, I’m glad you are making an effort, it’ll get easier tomorrow, I promise, besides, I have a few ideas about how to make our bed an interesting place tonight.”
“Oh really?” said Bette as she nuzzled Tina’s ear.
“Yes really, some ideas that would put even Shane to shame,” said Tina.
“What?! That’s not possible! Now, I’m a little frightened Tee,” said Bette
“It’s cute that you call me that,” said Tina.
“What?”
“Tee. I love it, it’s like we’ve known each other for a long time, you already have a nickname for me,” said Tina.
“OhI didn’t even notice,” said Bette.
“Oh, you didn’t notice, huh? I’ll make you notice tonight,” said Tina as she kisses Bette and closes her eyes.
Bette pushes her away, “You’re really fascinated with Shane aren’t you?” asks Bette. Tina kisses her again but more aggressively as her only answer.
There is a clonking noise from the other room.
“What was that?” Bette sits up and nearly pushes Tina over as she looks fearfully at the back of the house.
“Oh, that’s just the old pipes. Sorry about that. We have to use a septic tank here,” Tina leans over and pushes Bette’s hair back and slowly kisses her on the temples. “We also have to conserve hot water. And the top drawer sticks in the dresser,” she kisses her other temple. Bette closes her eyes and leans her head back. “We should air (kiss) out the old blankets (kiss) and do some dusting upstairs tomorrow (kiss) and then I want to take you swimming (Tina gently unhooks Bette’s bra) in the lake tomorrow.
“I don’t think (kiss) anyone has every made the septic tank (kiss), fishing, and dusting as ***** as you (kiss),” replied Bette as she ran both her hands through Tina’s hair and cupped her face, “I can’t believe how much you mean to me,” said Bette.
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Teelufan – This is a great follow-up to the grape chapter. Keep up the great writing…love this story.
great update!! i wonder what that noise on the porch was!!
That was funny shit. Bette is a city girl, shes not use to that outdoors stuff. I felt her pain. I wonder who that is on the pourch that heard them. Damn good stuff, please post soon.
lmao. Just how I would picture Bette camping. hee hee. post soon
LMFAO! Great update, I wonder, have you ever had sex in awkward places? Will Bette survive the great outdoors? Please don’t say that was a relative, let the noice be one of the girls. Thank you!
Bette in the woods funny !!! that better not be alice at the door
what was the noise what was the noise? i can’t wait to find out what happens next, great story!
Haha Bette is such a city girl. She was so cute though, kinda like a little kid. I wonder who’s on the porch hmmm. Can’t wait for more!
Who knew Tina was so “outdoorsy!” I think Bette will start to like camping more if they keep this up,LOL! I got such a kick out of this chapter! Thanks!
I was LMAO at Bette, being scared in the woods, ha, ha!! Now who’s at the door …. some family of Tina’s I assume??? And the drama begins, LOL!!!
Damn so fucking hot and so fucking funny about Bette go to cambin, ok and who the hell at the porch or something else. Post soon please, thanks!
Cant picture Bette in a rustc old cabin in the woods with all the bugs owls and other things.We have a cabin and at nigh you can see all the stars and it so quite you can hear everything I love the quiteness. THANKS
I thought the grape thing was sexy, this was hot, but now im wondering who the hell is outside