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She gets me
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The phone rang. Tina looked down, “Hmmmto pick up or not,” she thought. She had gone back to the gallery to get her earring. They had talked on the phone for a week. Then she broke up with Eric. Bette had given her a few days by herself. Then Tina had left a message last night.
The cell vibrated on the table. Tina looked at it and took off her shoe and rubbed her toes, they ached and they weren’t the only thing that ached on her body.
On the sixth ring, Tina grabbed the phone.
“Hello,” said Tina.
“Hi.” Bette said slowly, “I got your message last night.”
“Yeah.”
“Yeah.”
“So how does Ethiopian food sound?” said Bette.
“Tonight?”
“Only if you’re free.” (Pause)
“Okay.”
“You okay?,” asked Bette.
“Yeah. Sorry. It’s hard to talk at work. (Pause). It’s really good to hear from you.”
“You too!” said Bette happily, “Just think of it as a more intimate phone call, just another night on the phone.”
“I’m excited,” said Tina
“Shall we meet at the restaurant?’
“Yeah,” said Tina.
“I’ll call you later with the details. See you at eight.”
“Bye.”
“Bye Tina.”
When she said Tina, her stomach muscles tightened. Tina teased the edge of her curl as she sat with one foot crossed over the other. She couldn’t get her mind off of a certain mocha skinned woman with gorgeous long curly black hair. Tina couldn’t believe she had a crush on such a spitfire as Bette who was one of the hardest, strongest women she had ever met. Tina felt herself go wet just thinking about her.
* * *
“Hello.”
“Hi
“Bette. How are you?”
“Good.” (Pause.) “Are you going to the new exhibit, ‘Trees, Trees’?” asked Bette.
“Umyeah,” said
(Pause.)
“Bette, do you want to go together?” asked
“Yeah.” (Pause.)
“Bette is everything okay?” asked
“Yeah.” (Pause.) “I called your friend,” said Bette.
“My friend?”
“Tina.”
“Tina.Oh, yeah, Eric’s girlfriend.”
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OMG! Keep going with this story. Good job.
That was so cool and so very hot pleasr continue its really well written and we all love a Bette and Tina beginning thanks really enjoyed it
Well that was excellent!! I hope you plan to continue writing you are good.. Really good. Please post again.
I love the natural talent that come through here, you have inspired me thank you! I love the story, and I hope to read more from you.
wow! amazing..you have to post again soon!!!
Great writting, realy hot hope you post some more.
And now I have to go to sleep, yeah thats gonna be real easy. Bette nervous, loved that. Can’t wait for your next update.
well, if this is your first time, you most definitely hit the ball out of the park. Wonderfully and seductively written – love your story. looking forward to the next chapter.
WOW! That was a great start. Are you sure your are a fanfic virgin? I love the fact that Bette was nervous at first. And Tina is kind of aggressive in bed. I hope you post soon!
A very nice T and B beginning……..
So sexy and sweet………………..
very nice…you write like a pro!
Woo! That was one of the most sexy, heart-fluttering, wonderfully natural scenes I’ve ever read. I am just saying! You are incredibly talented. Your ablitiy to capture those feelings and all-encompassing emotions of love just floored me! I loved this and hope you continue to write more…thanks!
K
Excellent! Great start. Very hot. Can’t wait for more.
Damn this is awesome and hot and sweet, lvoe it. Post soon pleae, thanks!
Awesome story. I agree with shutterbug, you definitely hit this one out of the park. Please continue and post soon.