Fan Fiction
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She gets me
“Yeah.”
“She’s nice,” said
“Yeah.”
“Bette, what’s going on, you don’t sound like yourself,” said
“Well,
“Geeshjust a question,” said
“We’re going out to dinner.” (Pause)
“Oh, you mean you and Tina?” asked
“She broke up with Eric,” said Bette.
(Pause.)
“So, you’re having dinner. (Pause.) UmBette are you asking me dating advice?”
“
“No, B, It’s okay,”
“What? Yes I have,” said Bette.
“Bette, I’ve seen you walk into a bar, pick the cutest girl, order a drink, take off your jacket and in the time it takes to have one deep breath, you’re making out and grinding with the hottest girl at the club.”
“This is different,” said Bette.
“What?”
“Besides, Al you suffer from hyperbole,” said Bette
“How is it different?” asked
(Pause.)
“Bette.”
Bette is silent at first, “Sheshegets me.”
“What?” asked
“She gets me, Al.”
“She gets you.”
“Yeah.” (Pause.) “She really gets me. We’ve been just talking on the phone for a week and I mean, I find myself telling her everything about my life, I mean the honest truth. And she just listens and I just want to tell her more.”
“Why, Bette Porter, it sounds like you have a crush.”
“Man Al, she just sees all of me and I just break apart around her but I can’t get enough of it.”
“Awwwww.Bette, she sounds amazing.”
“But we’re having dinner tonight.”
“And?” asked
“I’mI’m afraid.”
“What? AwBette, it’ll be fine. Just continue being honest. Trust a little. It’s okay to be vulnerable for once in your life. Maybe you’ll find that if you let go a little, this Tina, will hold you.”
Bette takes a deep breath, “Okay.” (Pause) “Thanks.”
“Bye Al.”
“Bye Bette.”
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(50 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
OMG! Keep going with this story. Good job.
That was so cool and so very hot pleasr continue its really well written and we all love a Bette and Tina beginning thanks really enjoyed it
Well that was excellent!! I hope you plan to continue writing you are good.. Really good. Please post again.
I love the natural talent that come through here, you have inspired me thank you! I love the story, and I hope to read more from you.
wow! amazing..you have to post again soon!!!
Great writting, realy hot hope you post some more.
And now I have to go to sleep, yeah thats gonna be real easy. Bette nervous, loved that. Can’t wait for your next update.
well, if this is your first time, you most definitely hit the ball out of the park. Wonderfully and seductively written – love your story. looking forward to the next chapter.
WOW! That was a great start. Are you sure your are a fanfic virgin? I love the fact that Bette was nervous at first. And Tina is kind of aggressive in bed. I hope you post soon!
A very nice T and B beginning……..
So sexy and sweet………………..
very nice…you write like a pro!
Woo! That was one of the most sexy, heart-fluttering, wonderfully natural scenes I’ve ever read. I am just saying! You are incredibly talented. Your ablitiy to capture those feelings and all-encompassing emotions of love just floored me! I loved this and hope you continue to write more…thanks!
K
Excellent! Great start. Very hot. Can’t wait for more.
Damn this is awesome and hot and sweet, lvoe it. Post soon pleae, thanks!
Awesome story. I agree with shutterbug, you definitely hit this one out of the park. Please continue and post soon.