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Showtime: Chapter 3
“What’s wrong?” she started to inquire adding the phrase: “What did Shane do now?” at the very end of the sentence, a phrase which made the statement sound most like an accusation more than anything else… Shane in turn gave her an indignant look, as she watched the blonde idly busy herself with Bette’s affairs.
“Well, good morning to you too Al.” Shane quipped sarcastically in a low calm voice, thinking that her remark would somehow help lighten the mood given the way Bette tensed up the minute Alice started prodding, or at least take the attention away from her long enough for Alice to lose interest… But knowing Alice as well as she did, Shane knew this wasn’t about to happen anytime soon.
“No really… What’s bothering you?” Alice pressed again when she didn’t hear an answer.
“Nothing.” Bette lied weakly, as she continued to read through her lines. There was a mixture of frustration and annoyance, which dripped through the tone of her voice A clear sign, which told both Shane and Alice that, their friend, Bette Porter, had completely shut them out… Of course Bette had done this a number of times before, but never to the extent where she left no explanation or warning for her actions Sitting quietly in her chair, she looked very withdrawn, even distant, the dark curls of her hair slightly hiding her doe eyes from view and in her own little way Bette felt like she would be protecting her friends somehow but unfortunately she failed to realize that the only person she would be protecting was herself.
There was no way she was going to tell them how she was feeling at the moment, especially not now taking into consideration that they were wearing such concerned looks across their faces… Besides Bette wasn’t one to tell people about her problems anyway, most especially when she felt like she would be disappointing them in a sense… but nevertheless, Alice immediately began to recite a long ramble… What is it? Who caused it? When did all of this happen? How come no one told me? Is there anything I can do? Such an invasive line of questioning, yet Alice spoke Bette knew that deep down Alice just wanted to help… in fact more words were bound to come, but unbeknownst to her, a very nosey Alice was abruptly sidetracked as soon as she felt Shane’s elbow nudge her by the rib.
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absolutely fabulous, don’t take so long next time, been waiting ages for this. post soon.
I’m loving this storyline! I can’t wait to see where you take it!
I have told you on more than one ocassion that I love this story. From the beginning to the end,such descripition and depth. I’m so disappointed that there isn’t more to read. I can’t wait to see what the next series of events will be for Tina and for Bette. Thanks for taking your time and for allowing us to read this marvelous story. Please continue and with out much delay.
Whoo hoo!!! Squishy….. haha…Wonderful chapter!!… Im addicted to your writing…*wink* hehehe..I love how Bette isnt so confident when it comes to Tina.. its cute..and Eric… get lost dude… hahaha… Great Job..Cant wait til the next chap!
Good chapter. Keep coming and can’t wait to see what’s happen next. Post soon, thanks!
I’m enjoying this – looking forward to the next chapter
So glad to see you back. Your stories are always worth the wait. Please post soon.
Hey craze…so glad to see that you’re back! You’ve been missed! Excellent as always!
Oh Smoke….you are such a tease. Only your wonderfully descriptive writing style could carry off the suspense of ‘which character is it?’ that you are able to create. Great writing. Moving on to the next chapter. =)
ok got me totally hooked..im gonna b lookin for the next chapter!
wooooooooooooo.. awesome story girl! keep this one going..sexy scenes on the way?!?!?!?!?!?
Great chapterr, please post soon
Really love this story, and I can’t wait to see how you handle their relationship. Please update soon.
Welcome back CMC..we have missed your story. What a wonderful update ….just amazing girl and so cute. Just loving it. Post soon
really really nice.
CMC,
You are the gal for leading us done one alley to suddenly turn the tables and show us a secret entrance to another world. I feel like I’ve entered the world on Narnia through the wardrobe.
Yep I thought it was Tina you had described at first and then, yes, you devious soul, it was Alice, Alice, Who the fcuk is Alice?
Hee hee, I am really enjoying this journey and the way you are unfolding the story. Just like a Hollywood blockbuster. The characterizations are superb and your approach and demeanor has drawn me into the wonderful world of movie making.
Please post soon.
A loyal fan.
I’m just giddy over you posting this chapter! I’ve been missing this story. THanks!
K
Really love this story, great chapter.
Glad to see a new chapter to this great story. Keep it coming!! :)
Love this story. Eric’s a sleaze and a try-hard I’m glad Tina didn’t pay him much attention.
CMC, wonderful chapter. You surprised me yet again, amazing! I will be PATIENTLY awaiting your return.
Thank you welcome back callmecrazy I’m so excited that your back I’m been waiting for this Story still Love it so keep it going your Story it’s great.
brilliant – more … please ? Thank you
Megga_ D’oh! I just remembered I forgot to comment last night! Hahah, you are rubbing off on me delayed reaction girl! Great chapter, I LOVE this beginning and I look forward to reading more ANYTIME NOW! Hahah, bossy enough for ya? All right, I hope you’re feeling better, Talk to ya later punkin!
Oh yeah!!!! Craze has returned!!!! LMAO…..GREAT GREAT GREAT as always. I love how descriptive you are. It just totally feels like I am there watching them….and observing every little moment…like Bette holding onto Tina’s hand and squeezing it…..YES! Please continue soon…..