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Previously:
Doing what she thought was best at the time, Tina released Bettes hand and briskly tucked a loose strand of hair behind her ear, trying as hard as she could not to let fact that she felt a little more than just uneasy at the moment show through her words and her actions Deep inside Tina had a gnawing feeling that the day ahead was going to be a long one but nothing prepared her for how draining the next series of events were going to be.
“You look very hot, Tina.” Bette stated, as she ran a surveying glance up and down the blondes body
“Pardon?” Tina asked a little too apprehensively than she had intended.
“Warm Bette rephrased with a grin, You’re perspiring quite a bit. Is the heat getting to you, or are you just nervous?”
Sun-drenched parching and nearly baking these were only a few adjectives that could be used to describe the way LA was that afternoon. For some reason the cold morning air developed into a more arid one, and for most the heat was smoldering” even too sizzling to handle at the time. But despite the very appropriate question, Tina still managed to take it into the wrong context.
”Oh, it must be this heat, I’m never nervous… she quickly stammered, but after seeing the skepticism in Bettes eyes she somehow felt the need to add more:
Okay she buckled, I guess I do get a little edgy on occasion, you know work and stress, that sort of thing? But not now of course I mean this isnt exactly stressful at least I dont think I” It was right then when Tina decided to stop herself from speaking. In her mind she was saying far too many words than anyone would care to hear; besides she knew she had to catch her breath sooner or later.
Bette on the other hand was just staring at her intently, looking very amused. Im sorry that didnt make any sense. Tina sighed while pushing a few strands of hair away from her face. I guess now you know what I sound like when Im rambling She added thoughtfully, trying her best to look credible enough for Bette.
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Ooh I can’t wait for that kiss. Heh. Woo. Nice going Craze, must continue you must. A little Yoda there, even tho I didn’t see the movie:P Aloha!
Just a wonderful chapter. I’m so waiting for the next chapter. Excellent job.
Oh craze…this was brilliant! I’m looking forward to that kiss! Don’t keep us waiting too long….please!
Just a great chapter. I’m so waiting for the next. Awesome job.
CMC…nice update and yes we are looking forward to the “kiss”. Just amazing girl. 5 stars from me. Post soon
What are you doing to me Smoke? How you gonna leave it like this? All on the suspenseful tip. Can’t wait for the next scene. Please post soon. =)
Hey Smokie!
I just spent the last few minutes catching up on your story. Woo! Very good woman. I am so into it now. I hate that I will have to wait to read the next installment when I return from vacation. I would like to thank whoever inspired you. I hope I post this soon so I can be under Tee. Hee Hee
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are having fun and can’t wait to see what happen next. Post soon, thanks!
I absolutely love this B & T beginning. Great Chapter!
Great Chapter Babes!! *shouts Wooo hoo hahaha… I cant wait for the kiss… thats going to be NICE hehe.. So B&T sharing a trailer.. hmm intresting heheh.. i wonder where this is going to take us.. i know somewhere good hehehe… 5 STARS !!
Can’t wait to see how they practice that scene. Good Job.
oh and were going to have a kiss this is getting good.
CMC,
Thanks for taking the time to reply in person.
I am totally addicted to this version of events.
That is due to you and your story telling gift. The honesty and realism with which you write is takes my breath away. The nervousness and edginess of both Bette and Tina are palpable. Alice’s unique charms just reverberate off the screen. Can’t wait to see how the other characters will appear in this adventure.
I am equally entertained and stunned with your cliff-hangers. Such pleasure tinged with such pain.
Am ready from the next chapter so pls make it soon.
Your loyal fan.
Great! Looking forward to more.
Why do writers have so much fun in leaving the readers hanging like this?!?!?!?! I can’t wait until the kiss, please post soon!
hmmmmmm wander how that kissing scene is gonna pan out????? hope its YUMMY!!!! sorry i havent commented in a while..life has been crazy..:) but the ketchup is on the table..and the dairy queen…is open for business…LOL great post..woman..glad to be back reading them! 5 million stars
excellent chapter..waiting for the next!
Rating disabled Freak?!?! LMAO… hey i just caught up on all your chapters no. Phew… hehe i loved them… see i told u i’ll catch up and i have. I just havent been on the site long enough to read any posts. So you will post soon right freaky? Hehehe…. See ya
yr fren, Freaky :P
I just got caught up your killing me here post soon