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Slowly, but Surely
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“I ready to see Ang now,” he assertively yells.
“Ok, ok,” Dana raises to her feet, “You wanna tag alone Shane? I’m sure Bette and Tina wouldn’t mind.”
The blonde ball of energy begins to tug at Dana’s side, “Mamalets go.”
She looks down at him, silently scolding him, “In a minute.”
Shane rubs her cheek, “Nah, I’m cool. You guys have fun though.”
“Are you sure?” Dana asks, noticing her son bouncing up and down next to her.
He begins to whine, “Maaamaaa.”
“Aidan Howard Pieszecki Fairbanks, I know you heard me.” Dana commands.
Shane can’t help but chuckle to herself, “Yeah, I’m sure Dane. Carmen should be home soon. I’ll be fun, but tell Bette and Tina hi and give Angelica a hug for me.”
With that Dana leans over to hug Shane, followed by Aidan, and they exchange goodbyes.
Dana and Aidan make their way across the drive to Bette and Tina’s. With a single knock at the door, Bette appears in the entrance. As the door opens Aidan tears off, “Where’s Ang?”
“In her room, Aid,” Bette ushers Dana in, “how’s your week going?”
Dana smiles, bending down to pick up Aidan’s things that he managed to throw off in his quest to find his cousin, “Better than the last and that’s all that matters right.”
Bette nods, wrapping her arm around Dana’s shoulders, “You’re right about that my friend.”
Tina emerges from the kitchen, “My house is once again filled with chaos, Aidan Fairbanks must be here,” she jokes embracing Dana.
“Must I remind you that this was your idea?” Dana chuckles.
Tina nods, “You’re right, you’re right. Now lets get some proper food in you. I’m sure you haven’t eaten a real meal since last Wednesday.”
Wednesday had become their “date” night. Dana got a chance from a little adult focused conversation. Not that she didn’t love discussing the philosophy of Sponge Bob with her five year old; she just needed a little more sophistication at times. It was also a chance for Aidan to play with Angelica.
Soon dinner was over and Dana gathered her son’s things so they could make their way home. As she drove, she notices her baby boy in the review mirror. He was sleeping so peacefully. He reminded Dana so much of his mother at times that it almost frightened her. She pulled their driveway, carefully exiting the car. As any mother, Dana had become a pro at balancing things. With her son flung over her shoulder, she draped her belongings over her right arm and Aidan’s bag over her left.
She fumbled with her keys, slowly but surely making her way into the house. Dropping the bags, she gently pressed her lips against her fingers and pressed them against a photo of Alice. A practiced she had begun almost a year ago.
She lugged the boy up the stairs to his room. Pulling off his clothes, she pulled back his covers placing him securely underneath. She brushed back his hair, placing a kiss on his forehead. She whispered, “I love you.”
Tired from another exhausting day, she falls onto her bed, staring at the ceiling. The days seemed to be getting easier, but the nightsthe nights were the worst. She rolls over, picking up a picture of Alice she has on her bedside, “One more day, babyI got through one more daywithout you.”
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wow continue please i want to know if alice is dead or still alive. It’s a great story please post fast
A little different is a big understatement, this is totally new, refreshing in its variety. I love it and your writing is excellent. Continue, please?
wow different…is right but its also awsm i agree with them, i want to c wat happened to alice plz update soon!
excellent beginning. I think i hold my breath till i came to the end of the chapter thinking what happened to alice… is this going to make us cry? please continue.
that is really good. the interaction between dana and aiden is so cute. then switching from that to so sad at the end. good job. it sounds like its gonna be a tear jerker.
wow! This really is good! Im guessin alice is dead..thats bad!!!
good job. i love that dana and alice have a kid. i’m wondering how alice left dana. don’t leave us hanging too long. and finish your other story! lol.
Whoa I think I almost might cry. Is Alice dead or alive? I love Dana as a mom- that’s exactly how I picture her. I also like how refreshing this story is! Please continue!
Oh I like this very much, I love the picture you painted of Dana as a mother and of the mystery behind Alice. This is wonderful!
aww a little bit of danish running around that is too cute!!! And to see Dana in such a different role is great….so about to cry there at the end…hmm, I don’t even know if I want to find out what happened to Alice…post soon
whoa i hope you continue this looks like it can get interesting. post soon!!
An excellent and intriguing start. Please continue.
AMAZING!..GRT chapter! I hope Alice aint dead?! :( but alas if she is R.I.P then Damn this gunna b a teary eyed stry&wat the point in readin bout L-word gurls pain..hehe I srry I thnk it EXCELENT btw..Fuking Fantastic :D THNX4writing, Post soon I hope u will?
“Aidan Howard Pieszecki Fairbanks, I know you heard me.” Classic mother command! Luv it, please continue!
Wow, I dont know how you manage it but fantastic and well written. Im rivited already! Please dont let it be too much of a tear jerker tho, not sure I can handle another Danish heartbreak..
Wow!! I really enjoyed reading this story, read it three times already. It’s new, its refreshing, and very well written. I like “Dana the mom.” So adorable. I hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the excellent work!
wow, you need to continue this