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“Bette,” Tina breaks away. “I have an idea.”
Bette mumbles something unintelligible into Tina’s neck. She was too distracted by the wonderfully soft skin there to form words.
Tina nibs on the mocha earlobe, “Let’s do it.”
Bette’s head snaps up, “Tina, we hardly know each other. Don’t you think we are moving too fast?”
“I have never experienced something like this before. I don’t want to miss out because of caution. Let’s be wild, Bette.” Tina growls the last part into Bette’s ear.
“I don’t know, Tina. You know I want to but” Bette is cut off by Tina’s tongue darting about her neck. “You know what let’s do it.”
“I need to remember that is all it takes to get my way,” Tina laughs.
“Hey, eventually if will take more.”
“Really?” Tina tangles her hand in the dark curls. “You feel so soft and wonderful.”
“Oh God! Tina the things you are doing to me,” Bette kisses her with all the passion she could muster. “We better get to this before I wake up.”
“I don’t think this is a dream. Let me show you.” Tina pulls Bette to her running her hands anywhere and everywhere at once.
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“You should have seen her. It was horrible.”
“Are you sure we should be doing this? Bette doesn’t like to be pulled away from the gallery.”
“I don’t know.”
“Come on,”
“Gone window shopping, be back tomorrow,” Shane reads.
“What the fuck does that mean? I told you she was losing it. Window shopping? What the hell!”
Shane stares past Alice, “No. I think she is fine.”
“What are you talking about fine? She closed up the gallery to window shop. When has Bette ever closed up shop? When had Bette ever gone window shopping?”
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Bette laughs, “I don’t know. Why would anyone need a frog made of scrape metal?”
“It is decorative I guess.”
Bette happens to glance back past Tina, where she sees the unmistakable sight of Alice and Shane. She puts her arm around Tina’s waist and pulls out her cell phone behind Tina’s back.
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Beep.
“
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“Bette, what is it? Are you having doubts?”
Bette smiles down at Tina, “Never.” She plants a light kiss on the blonde’s lips.
They stroll down the side walk hand in hand, stopping at anything that strikes there fancy. They are not hurried; it is a beautiful Sunday with the future smiling down upon them.
Beep.
Bette pulls out her cell phone looking at it. She is unsure whether she should look at the text message.
“Go ahead,” Tina encourages.
Bette sighs but at once is happy she looks at it. “I love you too, Tina.” Bette tilts her head to the side grinning. “Do you think maybe I should learn your last name?”
Tina laughs and whispers it into Bette’s ear.
“I love you, Ms Kennard. Let’s go home. I am exhausted.”
“I wonder why?”
“I lovely woman kept me up all night last night.”
“Should I be jealous?”
“I think everyone is going to be jealous of me.”
The rest is L-word history.
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Loved the story, looking forward to more of your stories. Thanks.
Anyone reading this has to know that they have just read the work of an unbelievably talented writer. i actually don’t think you get how brilliant you are — thank you for this story — you are amazing and i am honoured to read this
These two chapters were an absolute delight to read…just ask the goofy grin that is still plastered to my face!! Thank you for this.
Such a sweet story. I loved it. Thanks for posting it and I hope you post another one soon.
agreewith all of the above wow thankyou for maing me smile the first time today you really are a great writer hope there will be more like these in future dont stop writing:)
That was really sweet&hot too.Why can’t the real thing be like this…the real thing being Tibette. ;)
Well this short story was just too cute! Yes, I’m a sucker for cuteness. You definitely fooled me with the “Let’s do it” comment. Then I felt like a bonehead because I didn’t realize “window shopping” meant just that and wasn’t a euphemism for anything. lol
we have hope with you. Please give us another amazing story…soon. thanks!
Full of art you are, v.
Brilliant, Brilliant, BrilliantI am so captured by this whole concept with the IMs. I love your Bette taking charge and going after it. The way she just knew it was Tina also was fate. Soul mate kind of stuff. Great
I love this, I read the first part of this and couldn’t wait for the second. They’re amazing!!
Loved your story, hope you post another one!
it’s a miracle, i was just thinking about this story today because i miss it…thank you for this delight…can we beg you to continue? i love it…thanks
Thank you – this was beautiful, amazing and so brilliant, you are truly talented and the way you write is so captivating…..You may have guessed this, but I’m A FAN :o))….I truly hope you will continue with these short stories about B&T crazy in love, we need it :o))
Thank you so much for a respite from the pain of season 3!
Wonderful and amazing, love it. Hope you will have another one coming!
That was very cute. Hope U come back with another story soon.
love.
That was a great short story – so often the longer ones are just too intimidating for me to start. Thanks for taking the time to come up with such an innovative idea. Look forward to more.
I went back and read the first chapter again before I read the final one. This story was just beautiful and gives me faith that when two people really love each other they can make a life together. I hope you can get back to your other story at some point soon. See I’m back to bugging you about your writing.
Val,that was just perfect!
Lordy Be! That was just so beautifully written that I could feel all of the emotions that were past from woman to woman. Just like ally said you should be on the writing team for the L word.
Take a bow. That was amazing!
Brilliant, loved it! I’ll look out for your next story too!
Yea! Something happy to read!! Always, you write so well. I do look forward to your stories. Keep those stories coming!
This was one of the most interesting short tibette story I’ve ever read..i love every mintue of it, every minute