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“Yes,” Tina squeaks.
“Are you going to turn around?”
“No.”
“Ok,” Bette leans over Tina shoulder. “Is that everyone’s ring tone?”
“No.”
“Only mine?”
“Yes.”
“Would you sing me the rest?”
“No.”
Bette laughs, “I am not getting very far here. Will you please look at me?”
“No,” this time Tina adds a head shake.
“Why?”
“I am afraid,” she whispers.
“Of me?” Bette asks, anxious that she had done something wrong.
“No, of us. I don’t know what I am doing here.”
“You are here to get your earrings back.”
Tina sighs heavily and leans back, letting Bette support her weight. “That is not why I am here and you know it,” she no longer whispers; it was as if she was gaining strength by being this close to Bette.
“I didn’t want to assume anything,” Bette whispers in Tina’s ear. Having the blonde pressing against her was beginning to unnerve her. Tina’s scent was clouding her brain making it impossible to think clearly. She wraps her arms around Tina’s waist. “I didn’t think I had the right to assume. I didn’t dare hope really.” She bends down to place the smallest of kisses right below Tina’s ear. “I didn’t think I deserved to even think about you like this.” She kisses the same spot again, driving herself mad with desire.
“Bette,” Tina moans pushing her back harder against Bette. As if waking from a dream, she suddenly becomes very aware of the glass store front and the Sunday passersby. “Can we go somewhere less public?”
“I am so sorry. I should have thought of that.” She takes Tina’s hand leading her to the office. Bette is careful not to look at Tina’s face. She knows at that point there is no pretending this is something else. At that point there will be no fighting the spell they had both seemed to have fallen under. She didn’t want to frighten Tina or herself.
They walk into the office. Bette releases Tina’s hand to walk to her desk. There she keeps her back to Tina, pretending to straighten the immaculate surface. When she senses Tina behind her, she stops fidgeting and waits.
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Loved the story, looking forward to more of your stories. Thanks.
Anyone reading this has to know that they have just read the work of an unbelievably talented writer. i actually don’t think you get how brilliant you are — thank you for this story — you are amazing and i am honoured to read this
These two chapters were an absolute delight to read…just ask the goofy grin that is still plastered to my face!! Thank you for this.
Such a sweet story. I loved it. Thanks for posting it and I hope you post another one soon.
agreewith all of the above wow thankyou for maing me smile the first time today you really are a great writer hope there will be more like these in future dont stop writing:)
That was really sweet&hot too.Why can’t the real thing be like this…the real thing being Tibette. ;)
Well this short story was just too cute! Yes, I’m a sucker for cuteness. You definitely fooled me with the “Let’s do it” comment. Then I felt like a bonehead because I didn’t realize “window shopping” meant just that and wasn’t a euphemism for anything. lol
we have hope with you. Please give us another amazing story…soon. thanks!
Full of art you are, v.
Brilliant, Brilliant, BrilliantI am so captured by this whole concept with the IMs. I love your Bette taking charge and going after it. The way she just knew it was Tina also was fate. Soul mate kind of stuff. Great
I love this, I read the first part of this and couldn’t wait for the second. They’re amazing!!
Loved your story, hope you post another one!
it’s a miracle, i was just thinking about this story today because i miss it…thank you for this delight…can we beg you to continue? i love it…thanks
Thank you – this was beautiful, amazing and so brilliant, you are truly talented and the way you write is so captivating…..You may have guessed this, but I’m A FAN :o))….I truly hope you will continue with these short stories about B&T crazy in love, we need it :o))
Thank you so much for a respite from the pain of season 3!
Wonderful and amazing, love it. Hope you will have another one coming!
That was very cute. Hope U come back with another story soon.
love.
That was a great short story – so often the longer ones are just too intimidating for me to start. Thanks for taking the time to come up with such an innovative idea. Look forward to more.
I went back and read the first chapter again before I read the final one. This story was just beautiful and gives me faith that when two people really love each other they can make a life together. I hope you can get back to your other story at some point soon. See I’m back to bugging you about your writing.
Val,that was just perfect!
Lordy Be! That was just so beautifully written that I could feel all of the emotions that were past from woman to woman. Just like ally said you should be on the writing team for the L word.
Take a bow. That was amazing!
Brilliant, loved it! I’ll look out for your next story too!
Yea! Something happy to read!! Always, you write so well. I do look forward to your stories. Keep those stories coming!
This was one of the most interesting short tibette story I’ve ever read..i love every mintue of it, every minute