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Snowstorm
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Bette let go of her arm and dipped her fancy leather gloves into the crisp white snow. “You should be.”
“No Bette,” Helena warned her off, stepping away as New Yorkers tutted and grumbled at their antics as they hurried past. “Bette …” Helena squealed as Bette formed a snowball in her hands, “Bette … I’m warning you … no!!”
Bette sidled up slowly, tossing the snowball back and forth between her hands. They were just playing now, like two little kids in the street. Bette couldn’t have cared less about who was watching their silly display, her only focus was on Helena’s dazzling eyes and the look she gave Bette that dared her to go ahead and try it.
She picked up the snowball in her right hand and tossed it at Helena’s behind, knowing that she’d cast the first stone in war.
“You’re so dead.” Helena replied, deadpan.
Bette turned and ran, ducking through the crowds with Helena hot on her heels. She encountered a woman out walking her dogs and made a few little dainty steps to hop and jump over them, apologising as she went.
“Bette …” Helena let out a distress call and foolishly Bette turned, “Bette … wait!”
“Oooomph!” A snowball hit her right in the front, and Helena stood a few paces behind, laughing.
Bette ran from her, but Helena dodged and got past. Leaping like a deer through the snow as she approached the corner of Central Park South and spied the imposing silhouette of the Ritz-Carlton. She paused on the corner to allow Bette to catch up, bending down to fill her hands with softly packed snow.
Helena wiggled her eyebrows seductively as Bette cautiously encroached, wondering if she was set to take another snowball to the chest. Instead Helena tossed it aside and embraced her, pulling Bette into her as they stood in the middle of the street kissing, snowflakes landing on their ears and nose as the city’s million and more commuters passed them by.
The kissing had to end, more for the sake of the cold than anything else. When it did, Bette shivered a little, instantly missing the warmth Helena had leant her. "You’ll come in then?" She said with a grin.
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Holy shit!! That’s just about the hottest thing I have read on this site in a long…..time. Can you do it again??
Wow…just wow JKS. I wish it had been Tina she was with but it was still definitely hot!
Gee, JKS, judging from the comments this sounds sizzling. Pity I have to get up early and spend the ENTIRE day (and into the evening) at a review course. Read you tomorrow.
That was amazing. I love belena stories. Please continue.
Sorry I went to bed early and missed this one last night when it was posted! My response is (excuse my language): Holy f*cking shit! That was really really really really really good! Heheh…Lovedit!!! Don’t quite understand some comments above…referring to JKS…it’s making me think I’m in the twilight zone! Couch, could you twist hb’s arm some more? I’ll pay ya…I’ll pay ya good! hee hee :)
I loved it…been awhile…and this is great to come home to
FUCK!!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!! I so hope the both of you do it again!!!! PLEASE!!!! Thanks
goodness gracious me. That was all a bit sultry for these northern climes, but heck, I’ll take whatever heat I can get. That was quite the treat, sofa + hb. You two must continue doing these… thanks
“Helena sat across from her in her underpants” Good for Helena and her underpants! When in Rome, eh? I know this is fiction, because after schlepping all that nasty, schmutzy slush into the back of the limo, somehow the floor is nice and clean. I think they’d both have to admit that the car ride and the hotel room were better than some exhibit. Ah yeah, big snowstorms in NYC, leaving days of snow mountains (in deepening shades of gray) and slush lakes at every intersection for days to come. Beautiful.
O damn *thud*That was *thud* worthy and more. Hotness much?
Well,well,well look what we have here. Girls I am scared of you.Not only did you take these two to another level. But you do know that you must do this again. You just can’t leave it like this. You have them doing things to each other,that needs to be express more. You know? Those things.
Well I think you might have started some fires with this one ladies… hehe… so yeah this is that thing you were talking about… ummmm… yeah like… WOW… yeah… its kinda like this and like that… oh by the by was the movie called “Naissance des pieuvres”… Wow… that was like freaking awesome… and well yeah… fires need to be put out before you start setting any more… hmmmmm… love ya both… and well we shall talk to you both real soon… Justin (did you finish writing this in the car… LOL)
Ah, my first fanfic read in a LONNNNNG time. Totally worth the wait. Loved it. And yes, I love the word “cunt” ;)
This is incredible!! My god, I think I actually ship Belena… Excellently written!
Love your B& H smutfests, love your smutfests!! You guys rock! They are so hot and so loving and so hot and so gorgeously beautiful, and did I say hot? Speaking of hot, do they not have heat in the limo or in the hotel room? Oh how I would like to be rich and just saunter up to my room at the Ritz with a beautiful woman. I could live with that! Here are my 2 cents, I don’t like the “c” word either and hb I am one of those who don’t have, anymore also. How are you doing sweetie? Sofa, you are English, what is a bin lorry? Necking in regard to tea and not kissing???A LOYAL fan…..
Yeah . what toby4ever said. However it is always a pleasure to read your collaboration. I bet there is a perfectly good reason why there is a p hause between writing and posting hehe;-)
Um….girls? Holy mother of NC17’s that was a smoker! You MUST collaborate more often. Now I must hit the shower!!! Thanks HeleSofa.
Wow, I have to say I always secretly thought while Tina was with Henry that Helena and Bette could make a good, loving sincere [with hot sex] couple. But i will also voice my fear, that something crazy like that [Tina cheating with Sam] is something that could happen in Season Six.. and that would be devastating. It was however, really hot, really believable for the two of their characters.. and i would like to see more!
What a nice way to wake up. At first in the limo I thought, “Oh my!”. Then in the hotel room hottedness(Is that a word?) I thought “OH MY”. Then the poetry quoting as she…well, you know…I thought “OH MY FUCKING GOD”….OH MY, OH MY, OH MY…I am inspired again….in more ways that one.. ;-)…Whew!!!
BTW….”Cunt” very interesting word. I had lenghty debated once with LOBO. It is such a strong word, evoking such strong emotions….Jury is still out for me. I like it as an option, kind of dirty, kind of crude, yet mentally I can’t use it yet. Does that make sense…..And another thing… Did I say “OH MY!”? That colaboration was fucking hawt….
Oh good Lord! That was too friggin hot!! Those two are just insanely sexy with all of that alpha-ness, that confidence, that British accent, those seriously sumptuous bodies… Damn! I need a cold shower! Trust, you won’t hear any complaints if you two get together and write more one-offs with these two beautiful, brilliant, brunettes. God, I love brunettes! Another one, please??????????
loved it, loved it, loved it, would luv more of it!!!!!!!!!
wow…that’s all I can say…oh and LOVED IT!!!!!
Brava!