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    So it begins

    Story written on August 16, 2014 by Ellie R.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=86429
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        Bette ha been staring as usual, staring and seeing nothing, she had not noticed the blonde leave her house and she had not seen her return and set the paper down n the bench on her beautifully wild porch. Her senses took in nothing until her flight instinct took on high alert. Following

     

     

    Bette ha been staring as usual, staring and seeing nothing, she had not noticed the blonde leave her house and she had not seen her return and set the paper down n the bench on her beautifully wild porch.

    Her senses took in nothing until her flight instinct took on high alert. Following the feeling that she should run her focus zoomed to a pinpoint on the cause of such panic. A person was stepping inside her perimeter; a person not invited swung open the rustic wooden gate and was stood on her path. There was no ne due today, not the gardener or the handy man, the postman had passed already and her weekly shopping would not come for three more days. Bette knew that this was not a planned visit, for she planned all visits that required another human set foot within her fence.

    It wasn’t until the stranger neared the porch that she dropped the curtain back to place, for somehow she had not been able to move. The woman took her breath away, she was stunning and as corny as it sounded she seemed to Bette to be surrounded by a glow, radiating light somehow.

    For just a moment Bette felt her hand lift as the desire to reach out and touch overwhelmed the need to hide, then she caught herself the curtain covered the window as she stepped away. Stood in the middle of her living room ill equipped to make to make any decision on what to do next. Time seemed to slow and though knowing it would come the sound of the knocker on her front door startled the already high-strung brunette.

    Never in a year had she answered a call at the door, all her neighbors having long given up on meeting her, having tried and failed many times to rouse the brunette from hiding. But this blonde, she seemed familiar but was not someone who had ever set foot here before. Where had she come from, Bette was asking herself this as she realized she had moved two steps closer to her door.

    The second set of knocks did not scare her, but seemingly she felt relieved that the blonde had not given up.

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    1. Well hopefully it begins…I mean if Bette continues to let Tina talk to a door and not open it and introduce herself I dont see anything happening lol….nice start but they way well written and detailed, got my attention!

    2. I enjoyed this introduction from both Bette and Tina.

      I believe Tina is able to pull Bette outside her own house and start living a real life again.

      Please continue.

    5. Very interesting beginning to your story. By the end I had so many questions that I’m sure you’ll answer all in good time. I liked the way you developed the characters just enough to cause curiosity to want to know more about them, Interesting that they both chose England to land and call home. But as life goes, all things happen for a reason.
      Yes, I could feel destiny at work here with an uncontrollable urges that both felt in recognizing the other, whether through the view of each others’ body or in the eyes, windows to their souls. Tina, being the doctor, looks into others’ eyes all the time and can see so much about the person. Bette’s daily routine has been interrupted by this other woman’s energy and it has opened up her world to be able to see again.
      Excited to see where you are heading with this. Thank you!

    7. OK you have my interest.
      A good start for a promising storyline with so many questions raised.
      Please post again asap to start giving some answers, or more questions!

    8. A new and different beginning and very interesting too. Enjoyed this first chapter just waiting for many more. .And I agree with els73 asking for the continuation of Trouble in Designer Suits, have liked that story from the beginning and always wished for more for a very long time. Saw your recent posting but did not have the time to comment. Please continue with the story. Thanks for posting.

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