Fan Fiction
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So it begins
“Hello”
The voice carried an accent, not quite like her own, but carrying the tones of the southern end of her homeland and to Bette was like a symphony. Still she could not respond, her fear and habits to engrained to allow her to answer the greeting.
“Look I know you don’t want too, but if you could open the door I would like to introduce myself”
Bette moved closer now able to reach out and lay her hand on the inside of the door that separated them. Bracing herself in one breath yet trying as best she could to connect in the next.
“Okay well I am just gonna sit out here on your swing for a bit, if you don’t mind. If you like you could come join me or just say hi”
Bette was stunned at the realization that she in fact did want to go outside, longed to sit next to the blonde so boldly taking seat on her own porch, and yet knew she could not. So she stood instead by the door listening to the rustling noises of the woman getting settled.
“My name is Tina by the way, Tina Kennard, I live in the house across the way.”
How have I not seen her in all this time the brunette was stunned again, surely I would have noticed. She is a woman I would have noticed. Bette left her spot at the door and returned to her window, what ham would on look do?
She tweaked the previously redrawn curtain and tweaked it aside, there indeed sat the blonde, facing straight out towards the leafy lane that their houses occupied, yet her head cocked as though she could here her movements and was aware of her location.
“It is some good thing that I don’t take offence but I guess today is not the day, I will be back tomorrow though, I am home a while now so will stop by more before I have to return to the city”
A million thoughts flooded Bette’s mind s the blonde concluded, rising from her perch and heading towards the steps that would lead her of the porch and back towards her own abode.
Why would she return? Why would she have to leave? How long would she be here? I want her to leave, I want her to stay, I cannot talk to her, I could tell her my story. The thoughts ran thick and fast as the first stirrings of full on panic made themselves known, Bette felt calmness only in total control and this was not that.
The thoughts and the panic were drawn to a halt however, as the blonde reached the top step she pirouetted facing the window that shielded the brunette and as mahogany brown met golden hazel Bette found she could breath, the soul of the blonde showed itself to her in that glance, and in the small smile that tugged at her lips on meeting Bette’s gaze a sense of calm entered Bette’s mind calming immediately quelling the panic that ad begun to take hold.
A blink that the brunette thought was meant to be a wink followed as the blonde nimbly hopped of the porch backwards before turning away and heading to her own abode, settling on her own bench and hiding away behind a paper that had been waiting there.
Bette watched for only a moment, the habit of hiding taking over, but try as she might the first brick had been removed and the outside world was a little closer than it had been, as she went to start her days work the blonde entered her thoughts with regularity and by the end of the day as her routine brought her to bed in the small hours of the morning she realized that for the first time in what seemed like a lifetime she longed for the morning and the return of the blonde who had s boldly asserted herself into her little world.
Beginnings that had been a long time coming were at last begun that morning, on a porch on leafy lane in the English country side, two destined and yet damaged souls made first contact, it would be a long and winding path but as the saying goes, beginnings are the hardest part and so they had begun clearing the first hurdle.
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Well hopefully it begins…I mean if Bette continues to let Tina talk to a door and not open it and introduce herself I dont see anything happening lol….nice start but they way well written and detailed, got my attention!
I enjoyed this introduction from both Bette and Tina.
I believe Tina is able to pull Bette outside her own house and start living a real life again.
Please continue.
Great writing. Brilliant! Please continue.
Really enjoyed it. Looking forward to more. Thanks
Very interesting beginning to your story. By the end I had so many questions that I’m sure you’ll answer all in good time. I liked the way you developed the characters just enough to cause curiosity to want to know more about them, Interesting that they both chose England to land and call home. But as life goes, all things happen for a reason.
Yes, I could feel destiny at work here with an uncontrollable urges that both felt in recognizing the other, whether through the view of each others’ body or in the eyes, windows to their souls. Tina, being the doctor, looks into others’ eyes all the time and can see so much about the person. Bette’s daily routine has been interrupted by this other woman’s energy and it has opened up her world to be able to see again.
Excited to see where you are heading with this. Thank you!
Hey Ellie R thx for your story. I like it. But will you please finish Trouble in deigner clother. Pretty please.
OK you have my interest.
A good start for a promising storyline with so many questions raised.
Please post again asap to start giving some answers, or more questions!
A new and different beginning and very interesting too. Enjoyed this first chapter just waiting for many more. .And I agree with els73 asking for the continuation of Trouble in Designer Suits, have liked that story from the beginning and always wished for more for a very long time. Saw your recent posting but did not have the time to comment. Please continue with the story. Thanks for posting.
Well written and intriguing. Please continue.
Thanks! They are both just sad! Love will win!! PPS
Please, please continue! Looking forward to the next chapter, thank you!
Looking forward to see where this story takes us. Great start.
Intriguing…please continue
Great mysterious start! Please continue!
Another nice story … Very interesting interaction between Bette & Tina. Please continue soon. Thank you
Please continue soon, I’ve been checking everyday as I’m already hooked.
Great start, this story has everything to be a success.
Waiting new chapter.
Pretty nice. :)