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Something so right – chapter 102&103
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“Tina said they were a little full on “
Sarah chuckled “ Elaine – my friend -Tina and her son Matthew were sweethearts. He is lovely boy but he never had the spirit to make her happy- and as it turned out he didn’t have the right equipment either. She has never forgiven Tina for hurting Matthew -she can be a bitch “
“And are you protecting Tina, me or Elaine ?”
Sarah laughed “Good point – I don’t want any arguments or tension at the moment – and Tina does look for someone to take her frustrations out on “
“I witnessed her driving “
“Her grandfather taught her – she does have a reckless streak I don’t think LA has really ironed out of her “
“She’s actually the best driver I know – and I can be very picky about it “
“Finn told me “
“That’s a joke between us – he takes my insults in good spirit “
“He is a good lad “
Bette looked at her watch “ I wish I knew where she was “
“She’ll be okay “
“I am less worried about her and more worried about anyone who might get in her way “
Finn came out and handed Bette some pie and a coffee.
“I’m going to make a couple of calls “ he said going back into the house.
“I misjudged you Bette “
“Yes you did “ Bette agreed sipping her coffee
“You have been the best thing for her – I see how happy she is “
“At the moment she isn’t “
“But she has you to support her – that means a lot. She can be headstrong and a little wild but she’s always been a very loving person “
“She is – I do treasure her Sarah “
“I know that – looks like this is her here now “
A car was coming up the drive
“Thank god “ Bette said – she ate her pie while waiting for the car to park in front of the porch.
The car stopped and for several minutes nothing happened – Bette looked at Sarah and after a while she stood up. Tina opened the door and stepped out. Bette could see that Tina had been crying. She jogged down the steps and reached her
“You okay ?”
“Are we all ready to go ?”
“sure “
“Lets get the car packed then “
“Ti “
“Just leave it Bette – I’m okay “
“Babe “
“Bette – I’m okay “
Bette knew that Tina was anything but okay but she didn’t want to make a scene.
“I’ll go and find Finn “
Bette said walking past Sarah and into the house. Finn was just putting the phone down.
“The guy I recommended to mom as a farm manager is coming over to see her on Tuesday”
“That’s good – Tina’s back “
He raised one eyebrow
“Is she okay ?”
“No “ Bette said “ She looks shattered – it obviously did not go well – just don’t prod her. She will talk only when she is ready and there is no way in hell is she ready”
“Think she’ll talk on the plane ?”
“I think she’s in a bad place at the moment. One thing for sure – she’s not daddy’s girl at the moment “
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Quite intense. Thanks for the two chapters. PPVS
i just cant cant stand neil!!!!! he is a fucking asshole!!! i hope the 3 kennards will get the farm and i dont trust gemma on bit”I’ll make sure mom gets a good lawyer and kicks your ass ” go tina kick his ass if he wants to be with gemma and that sera will do all the work..what a creep
Wow, you blow me away Ally! You portray the complexities of your characters so very well. I love the English humor that comes shining through! The line about Willow cracked me up with perfect timing! Thank you! SK/C
Isn’t that rich that Niall wants to allow Sarah to work the farm without his input but he wants his half of the take. No work and plenty of money to play with! I want that deal. :) Thanks for the extra long update!
I agree with sunkissed, this is a remarkable well written chapter, but since I have long been a fan of your writting, I am NOT surprised. “You have it, like that.” I just wish Niall’s had grown some balls before this child was born. I fully understand that people fall out of love or grow apart, but as Nialls said he knew that this was different with G and she also loved him. It was then he should have come to his family and filled for a divorace, or even after he found out that she was pregnant. It was VERY disrespectful of his family for him to have unprotected sex with G before ending his marriage. For all he knew Sarah may have been in love with David or any of the other guys she sleep with, but apparently she had protected sex, and didn’t bring a child or worst into their marriage. I just feel that it was an extra knife in Sarah’s back for him to have already started a new family after their failed plans to have another child. It also wrong of him to expect his children to immediately accept Adam after how he handled this situation. His parents or someone needs to just slap Nialls upside the head and tell him to get a clue. He is acting like a teenager. “Ï love all my children and Adam is such a joy.” But as a “grown behind man,” I didn’t handle myself and business properly, but as my children that I have raised respectfully, you should step up and welcome Adam into our family like adults. If he doesn’t step up he may find out that Adam may loose respect for him after he grows up. He maybe in first class health, but what if he is hit by a car and Gemma has to change his diaper as well as Adams. How deep will her love be then. She may stand by him, but it can not excape that this is a change of life relationship, and he can not reasonable expect to be around to grow old with Gemma because he is already there.
so because I have been a good girl I will reward you with a double commenting!! I’m really enjoying your stories, I have a favorite of course but I won’t tell. It’s good to have you back and writing on the site. Thank you for posting, and thank you for posting.
Wow, what a chapter AllyE. I’m truly surprised that Tina did not slug him one, and she should have. He is acting like a lovestruck kid, not a fifty year old man. When he realized that he was in love with that girl, he should have told Sarah that he wanted a divorce. His actions were all wrong. And to expect profits from Sarahs work is stupid. I hope Sarah gets an attorney that will ream him a new one. Thanks for posting.
Wow. Niall didn’t hold back when he told Tina what he thought of her behavior. Maybe when she has some time to cool down she’ll think it over and realize he has some merit to what he said. I think it will take a while for her to get to that point though.
FUCK!.. I don’t know who I’ll take the side?…’caused they both have… a good reason?….Tina’s Dad all he wants is his share for his son..And Tina’s Mom…is afraid that Gemma will brainwashed Nial to sell the farm? so does Tina’s fear!….I think Nial and Sarah should set aside their differences for a while and talk about what they want to do to the farm?..I KNOW IT’S TOO SOON?…BUT IT’S THE ONLY LOGICAL WAY TO DO IT?….TALK…. ABOUT IT!
Quite brilliant and wonderful. PPS.
Thank you for 2 chapters. So emtionally intense these chapters were. Thank you again.
I LOVE the idea of Sarah going to LA to spend some time with her children and relax. Maybe it will allow Tina and her siblings to see her in a different light and get a new found respect for their mom.