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Something so right – Chapter 104
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Tina smiled at Bette – there were tears in her eyes. Bette pulled her close and hugged her
“Its going to be okay – remember that you are daddy’s girl. “
Tina looked up “I thought I was Bette’s girl “
“You are but for very different reasons “
“I’ll settle for that “ Tina said “I just love being your girl “
Bette smiled thinking of the tee-shirt neatly wrapped in her car – a silly gift that might bring a smile to Tina’s face. Bette kissed her
“Lets get home – I am starving – have we got any ice cream ? “
“There might be some “ Tina grinned
“Well might be isn’t good enough – I’ll take a detour via the supermarket- what flavour might put a smile on my favourite blonde’s face ?”
Tina laughed almost despite herself – she could see how hard Bette was working to draw her out of her shell. She was struggling to explain that she really had never made her father as angry has he had been on Sunday. She had said some horrible things and she wasn’t sure whether he would accept any level of apology. Tina knew that to really make things right between her and her father she was going to have to find some common ground with Gemma – that stuck in her throat. She did not want to be friends with the woman that had split up her family. But was Bette right – was this in the long run the right thing for everyone ? If her father could move on so could her mother.
Tina regretted almost everything that she had said to her father and had been stung by the things that he had fired back to her- she hated that he had called her arrogant and said that she was spiteful. He had virtually accused her of turning into her mother –and that was something that really did appal Tina. Tina was making all sorts of vows that she was going to become a much easier person to get along with – if she did become as hard to please as Sarah she really would lose Bette and that was the biggest motivation of all.
“Anything flavour is fine by me – I just want to be at home with you “
“But of all the flavours which is your real favourite ?”
“Double chocolate with chocolate sauce and chocolate flakes “ Tina said finally knowing it was Bette’s.
“Not sure that’s got enough chocolate in it “ Bette teased. Tina took Bette’s hands
“I think its going to be okay for us – Bette – I just want to be at home and lick my wounds. I’ve got a lot on my mind and I just need to feel the security that I have with you. I remember sitting on the beach in Hawaii with you – we’d just become lovers “
“And we were watching the sun rise on the first day of the rest of our lives – hippie Kennard’s influence “
The blonde laughed
“And you were sitting with your arms wrapped round me “
“I remember “
“And I said that I had never felt that secure and loved before. I’d been held like that by 6ft plus macho footballers and I hadn’t experienced that level of love and security. That’s never gone away – that’s always been how I feel about you and I . It’s the best feeling in the world that with you I do not have to be utterly in control – I love feeling safe and I do feel safe “
“I understand “ Bette said “You don’t think that I don’t thrive in being with you ? I love you and I know that the rest of my life is going to be about growing with you and spending every night holding you “
“You have no idea how much I need to hear you say that right now Bette”
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Amazing as always.Thank you.
Great update! I don’t think Tina should apoligize, to me she did nothing wrong. Niall deserve whatever they said to him.
i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps
Oh that is just perfect. Bette is doing everything in her power to give Tina room to figure this out on her own but also be there to help her around all the corners. Nicely done Ally.
im with amanda and rbabe”i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps “
Maybe Bette will get more sleep tonight. LOL
I love your story progression, but I am not with the “Sarah beat down”. Having been a Daddy’s girl, I know that you can over idolize you dad to the detriment of your mom. I agree with Amanda, Niall knew what he was getting into when he and Sarah made their arrangement and agreement about their marriage. As I have said before, I hate the things he said about Sarah when she was involved with David and how he let the children just pile on Sarah. Yes he is her father, but it certainly was NOT easy for Sarah doing all of the heavy lifting in referancde to raising their children. Tina needs to let things calm down, but sending them a welcome to the family basket is going over board and can be seen as offensive to her mother. I don’t think that Tina needs to serve as a go between for Nialls with her sister and brother. It’s time for Nialls to do some heavy lifting. He made his bed, now he can take responsibility and reach out to his children to make amends. Thanlks and PPS :o).
Boy, ally, you’re getting everybody riled up. Niall can’t expect his original family to be accepting of his new arrangement. He might hope for their understanding but can’t expect it. He should have gotten a divorce and then started his new family. Is Sarah upset b/c she didn’t dump Niall first? That she was the dumpee and not the dumper?
Ally, you are my queen of intimate conversation… you nail it every time! Thank you. SK/C
Bette is so good for Tina in this story.
At least Tina come to her senses [Even though i still think her dad is a JERK] That no matter what, her father is always gonna be her FATHER! Thanks Ally..
Tina’s confession about feeling secure is for me the best love declaration I have read for a long time. Queen of intimate converstioan it is!
I wish my girlfriend would hold me like that again. I love this story PPS.
Wow, Tina’s father’s words really shook her to her foundation. A parent has the power to do that. She is struggling with still seeing her father as she did as a child and seeing him as a fellow adult. The tables are turned and he needs her support now. It seems that with Bette’s help she will be able to do that for him.
Wonderful update. Just brilliant. Thank you.