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Something so right – Chapter 104
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Bette looked surprised “ Two hours ?”
“I couldn’t be bothered at work – I am pretty far ahead of myself so I gave myself a short day. I will more than make up for it “
“Are you tired ?”
“Bit – I am just going to do a run and I’ll head out for a long shower “
“You fancy a sauna or something “Bette offered
Tina looked at her and smiled “ Might be nice “
“I thought I would cook for us tonight “
Tina nodded “And then just snuggle up on the sofa ?”
“Snuggling up on the sofa would work for me “ Bette agreed.
They both ran in silence for several minutes – Bette noticed that Tina was running at a faster speed than her despite the fact that she had been working out for over two hours. Bette decided to leave the gym when Tina did – she was not in the mood for a long session – just something to get the lack of running out of her legs. She would be more in the mood for a longer run after a solid 8 hour sleep. After 40 minutes Tina finally got off the treadmill – it was obvious that she was spent out. Bette finished the kilometre that she was running and stopped as well.
“How about we shower, change and head home ?” she asked
Tina nodded. Bette jumped down, grabbed her towel and taking Tina by the hand they headed back to the changing room. They picked the communal shower and stood together. Bette was admiring Tina’s sexy ass as she washed her legs.
“Do you know how sexy you are ?” Bette asked casually
Tina turned
“Did you say something ?”
“I said do know how sexy you are ?” Bette repeated
“If you find me sexy that’s all I could ask for “
Tina stepped out of the shower and wrapped a towel around her body. Bette took her time to finish rinsing her body before getting her bag from her locker and going across to Tina. The blonde looked miles away – and Bette suspected that she was. Bette glanced around to make sure they were alone before leaning in and kissing her lover. Tina stroked Bette’s face
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Amazing as always.Thank you.
Great update! I don’t think Tina should apoligize, to me she did nothing wrong. Niall deserve whatever they said to him.
i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps
Oh that is just perfect. Bette is doing everything in her power to give Tina room to figure this out on her own but also be there to help her around all the corners. Nicely done Ally.
im with amanda and rbabe”i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps “
Maybe Bette will get more sleep tonight. LOL
I love your story progression, but I am not with the “Sarah beat down”. Having been a Daddy’s girl, I know that you can over idolize you dad to the detriment of your mom. I agree with Amanda, Niall knew what he was getting into when he and Sarah made their arrangement and agreement about their marriage. As I have said before, I hate the things he said about Sarah when she was involved with David and how he let the children just pile on Sarah. Yes he is her father, but it certainly was NOT easy for Sarah doing all of the heavy lifting in referancde to raising their children. Tina needs to let things calm down, but sending them a welcome to the family basket is going over board and can be seen as offensive to her mother. I don’t think that Tina needs to serve as a go between for Nialls with her sister and brother. It’s time for Nialls to do some heavy lifting. He made his bed, now he can take responsibility and reach out to his children to make amends. Thanlks and PPS :o).
Boy, ally, you’re getting everybody riled up. Niall can’t expect his original family to be accepting of his new arrangement. He might hope for their understanding but can’t expect it. He should have gotten a divorce and then started his new family. Is Sarah upset b/c she didn’t dump Niall first? That she was the dumpee and not the dumper?
Ally, you are my queen of intimate conversation… you nail it every time! Thank you. SK/C
Bette is so good for Tina in this story.
At least Tina come to her senses [Even though i still think her dad is a JERK] That no matter what, her father is always gonna be her FATHER! Thanks Ally..
Tina’s confession about feeling secure is for me the best love declaration I have read for a long time. Queen of intimate converstioan it is!
I wish my girlfriend would hold me like that again. I love this story PPS.
Wow, Tina’s father’s words really shook her to her foundation. A parent has the power to do that. She is struggling with still seeing her father as she did as a child and seeing him as a fellow adult. The tables are turned and he needs her support now. It seems that with Bette’s help she will be able to do that for him.
Wonderful update. Just brilliant. Thank you.